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07-30-06, 11:37 AM | #1 | ||||
The Saviour
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Beef Battle - COM vs DaTrusHurtz
IP: B49E DE84
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07-30-06, 11:44 AM | #2 | ||||
Yes I Know
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IP: B896 FF8A
hey, 20 lines?..............................
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07-30-06, 12:18 PM | #3 | |||
I Hurt.
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IP: 6C02 AD00
sounds good man
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07-30-06, 09:11 PM | #4 | ||||
Jack The Ripper
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IP: 44C8 019E
gay @ no shit talking in the check ins
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08-03-06, 07:51 PM | #5 | ||||
Yes I Know
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IP: 253F CDC8
can I grab a 24 hour extension? I got 40 lines to write for the LLL final and I've had a shitty week
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08-03-06, 09:28 PM | #6 | |||||
I Hurt.
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IP: F956 A220
Quote:
Ya gonna eat ya words, cuz that's the gayest shit that I've heard So you'd eat a Spoonful of shit...but would ya eat your WHOLE verse You arrived on the scene bitchin' so what's the deal bum We all saw ya Preface, we're just waitin' for it to mature into a real one K, I'll stop talkin' 'bout ya in the mag, but don't tell me ya not a puss I'll only speak on one condition, but you'll always be anonymous Shitty week eh? Decompress n' relax, but then I'm gonna pound 'em N' when I take out Com ^^^, it's easy to see how people feel around him Ya girl looks like a dyke son, n' yea dissin' this guy's fun I'm havin' a Whale of a time, you just have a wife that looks like one Quote:
Ya crew voted 4-0 for, non-crew 4-1 against, so die fool Ya get Saved By The Crew so much, you resemble a sitcom on high school Damn!!! Even the mod smacked ya n' you were livid n' yes Your verse was Degraded, but honestly dawg I'd have gave it an F Always gettin' dickrode, fag ya skills are the worst to date You get LOTS of special treatment... ...that mixes up ya kids on which pills they should take So no one's scared when ya gunnin', n' ya hint that ya frontin' And I saw ya shadow of skill... ...that groundhogs would use to prove spring is comin' Bitch we agree that ya too borin', n' hoe I deliver true whorin's You're so Engulfed in losing, you could destroy what's left of New Orleans Faggot. Last edited by DaTrusHurtz : 08-04-06 at 08:54 PM. |
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08-05-06, 08:21 AM | #7 | |||
I Hurt.
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IP: F956 A220
I know you had other shit to write for, but that's messed up... didn't think this would happen, don't think i've ever seen you no-show... oh well, feed on my verse please fellas?
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08-05-06, 08:42 AM | #8 | |||
Beginning Your Ending
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IP: BABF 4398
He DOES have the final of the LLL which probably takes precedence over this, but anyway I'll give you some feedback.
Ya gonna eat ya words, cuz that's the gayest shit that I've heard So you'd eat a Spoonful of shit...but would ya eat your WHOLE verse Even though it was a personal it was played, decent flip though You arrived on the scene bitchin' so what's the deal bum We all saw ya Preface, we're just waitin' for it to mature into a real one Not really harsh K, I'll stop talkin' 'bout ya in the mag, but don't tell me ya not a puss I'll only speak on one condition, but you'll always be anonymous Eh, coulda been executed better Shitty week eh? Decompress n' relax, but then I'm gonna pound 'em N' when I take out Com ^^^, it's easy to see how people feel around him Meh coulda been dope, but again poorly executed Ya girl looks like a dyke son, n' yea dissin' this guy's fun I'm havin' a Whale of a time, you just have a wife that looks like one LOL, nice personal Ya crew voted 4-0 for, non-crew 4-1 against, so die fool Ya get Saved By The Crew so much, you resemble a sitcom on high school Solid personal Damn!!! Even the mod smacked ya n' you were livid n' yes Your verse was Degraded, but honestly dawg I'd have gave it an F Nice again Always gettin' dickrode, fag ya skills are the worst to date You get LOTS of special treatment... ...that mixes up ya kids on which pills they should take Not feeling So no one's scared when ya gunnin', n' ya hint that ya frontin' And I saw ya shadow of skill... ...that groundhogs would use to prove spring is comin' You should have made this into a Shadow/Sonic punch if you were going to use Hedgehogs Bitch we agree that ya too borin', n' hoe I deliver true whorin's You're so Engulfed in losing, you could destroy what's left of New Orleans Lol good closer Quotables Ya girl looks like a dyke son, n' yea dissin' this guy's fun I'm havin' a Whale of a time, you just have a wife that looks like one Ya crew voted 4-0 for, non-crew 4-1 against, so die fool Ya get Saved By The Crew so much, you resemble a sitcom on high school Damn!!! Even the mod smacked ya n' you were livid n' yes Your verse was Degraded, but honestly dawg I'd have gave it an F Bitch we agree that ya too borin', n' hoe I deliver true whorin's You're so Engulfed in losing, you could destroy what's left of New Orleans Well you started out pretty weak admittedly, with wording letting you down, but had a solid section in the middle with 3 back to back quotables. Then again you had some eh punches and finished with a nice line. Overall I'd say not your best, and I think you know it. But I guess you haven't battled in a while and you're shaking off the rust, so to speak. |
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08-05-06, 10:00 AM | #9 | ||||
Yes I Know
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IP: 830C 291E
sorry datruc like I said I've had a shitty week and I had 40 lines to write yesterday for the LLL final, but I've signed up for the lbl so we'll probably get to meet in there
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08-05-06, 10:21 AM | #10 | |||
I Hurt.
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IP: F956 A220
You can still drop a quick verse if you want to
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08-05-06, 11:12 AM | #11 | ||||
Yes I Know
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IP: B372 2276
meh I'll throw sumthin down so its not all to waste..
I was in the final on RB , but still keying shit to leave you others rattled Datru'll try his best.. I'll win with the shit to weak for my other battle Coz prick the belt's where I was lookin', ya focus melts when com's cookin' This bitch tried to turn on the style.... and pressed my wrong buttons I'm sick of goading this geek, watch the votes thrown at his feet there's his dickriders, my haters... and fact he wrote for a week Dude you know where we come from, that shit's played out it's absurd Coz its each to there own, so thats half of RB to your verse And it wasn't ya punches I laughed at, this fucking moron can't hack it So dude there's no hard feelings.. coz you hit like a faggot Prick you got so near to winning, but yo believe it or not Its time for you to say your goodbyes, coz you gotta leave on the dot . |
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08-06-06, 11:03 AM | #12 | ||||
Yes I Know
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IP: 9825 000E
i see the voting here is even better than on RB,
so if no-one's gonna vote I wanna point out one thing in Datruc's verse... the fact of my crew voting for me in that battle... if you goto RB and check the final 16 for this season you'll notice that 70% of the final 16 were in my crew... therefore even if everyone in the last 16 voted on that battle 70% would have been from my crew.... also the next few battles and the few before hand.. my crew regularly voted against me... so meh at the fake personal |
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08-06-06, 01:14 PM | #13 | ||||
The Saviour
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IP: 46C4 2741
DaTrusHurtz wins.
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