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07-30-06, 11:17 AM | #1 | ||||
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5. Shake-Zula (9-2) vs 6. Erel Avent (7-1)
IP: B49E DE84
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08-01-06, 08:08 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 8518 5A9C
yup....................
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232572 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232557 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=232556
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08-03-06, 12:12 AM | #4 | |||
Light Weight
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IP: 45C9 7E3F
the bullshit stops here, listen kid.
Im a grown man, so even comparin our lives is a fuckin waste I live at myspace without myspace.. Shake's got mom's space Ya becomin a joke, the lower rank battlers is tellin ya ass off this faggots got die hard Blue Devil fans sayin dukes goin soft Im just gettin warmed up, preheatin the oven wit ya sorrow straight pushin Shake to the side like.. shit I can do tomorrow Althou you might get a couple votes from cats on ya nuts it's like it came down to the green.. I aint losin to no putts All of ur wins were given to you, so if your creativity dont spark your takin the L cause u aint seein Free no more like 106th & Park I'll grab his kneck & Im chokin it, the victory aint no hope in it so watch me shake shake like it was fuckin required before openin |
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08-03-06, 11:46 PM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 8518 5A9C
Honestly...
I'm not sure about my verse. Lemme think for minute, dude... Coz I don't know whether it'll beat u senselss... ... or beat some sense into u U're just a dull writer...I can see u're so basic... 'Coz I'm spittin' hot fire, and NOBODY'S leaning towards Avent In my check-in, I had to say somethin' careful and safe... I would'a said that I smelled pussy, but that would'a scared u away Everybody get's laid now, even 12-year-old kids screw... And I wondered how sex hotlines stayed in business...until I met u Yo, bring the cameras, it's bout to be a real problem soon... I got a blade, so u'll get more cut scenes than Metal Gear Solid II Peep the predictions. Everybody knew u'd get mopped up... U'd have to drop the 2nd part of ya name along with the 'R' to shock us ha. |
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08-04-06, 12:44 PM | #6 | |||
The Rise
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IP: AEB3 C728
Ya becomin a joke, the lower rank battlers is tellin ya ass off
this faggots got die hard Blue Devil fans sayin dukes goin soft ^Duke/Blue Devil shit is starting to get played...but anyways i wasnt feeling your verse at all didnt have me flowing, that bar was the only decent one. vs I'm not sure about my verse. Lemme think for minute, dude... Coz I don't know whether it'll beat u senselss... ... or beat some sense into u U're just a dull writer...I can see u're so basic... 'Coz I'm spittin' hot fire, and NOBODY'S leaning towards Avent In my check-in, I had to say somethin' careful and safe... I would'a said that I smelled pussy, but that would'a scared u away Everybody get's laid now, even 12-year-old kids screw... And I wondered how sex hotlines stayed in business...until I met u I was feeling this but the rest of ya verse wasnt hitting. but this battle i got Shake winning this good shit from each other no hate just stating a opinion. `pz |
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08-04-06, 12:57 PM | #7 | ||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 6922 7AA7
kinda 1-sided.
that opener shake had i thought was hilarious for some reason.. wat a great way to start out a verse with a nice little "fuck YOU' attitude.. really felt that, other than that.. nice verse Erel, u came off with some basic concepts, which hurt u.. ur wordings not the problem, its the concepts. get those creative juices flowing v shake |
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08-04-06, 05:31 PM | #8 | ||||
Miss Me?
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IP: 3240 794D
All of ur wins were given to you, so if your creativity dont spark
your takin the L cause u aint seein Free no more like 106th & Park vs. U're just a dull writer...I can see u're so basic... 'Coz I'm spittin' hot fire, and NOBODY'S leaning towards Avent Everybody get's laid now, even 12-year-old kids screw... And I wondered how sex hotlines stayed in business...until I met u Peep the predictions. Everybody knew u'd get mopped up... U'd have to drop the 2nd part of ya name along with the 'R' to shock us v/ Shake Erel came with shit imo. It looked like he just dropped a keystyle that rhymed. Shake put some htought into it and made me laugh.
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08-05-06, 02:19 AM | #9 | ||||
Jack The Ripper
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IP: 29BB 02D4
Im a grown man, so even comparin our lives is a fuckin waste
I live at myspace without myspace.. Shake's got mom's space Ya becomin a joke, the lower rank battlers is tellin ya ass off this faggots got die hard Blue Devil fans sayin dukes goin soft Althou you might get a couple votes from cats on ya nuts it's like it came down to the green.. I aint losin to no putts (6) vs. I'm not sure about my verse. Lemme think for minute, dude... Coz I don't know whether it'll beat u senselss... ... or beat some sense into u U're just a dull writer...I can see u're so basic... 'Coz I'm spittin' hot fire, and NOBODY'S leaning towards Avent In my check-in, I had to say somethin' careful and safe... I would'a said that I smelled pussy, but that would'a scared u away Everybody get's laid now, even 12-year-old kids screw... And I wondered how sex hotlines stayed in business...until I met u Yo, bring the cameras, it's bout to be a real problem soon... I got a blade, so u'll get more cut scenes than Metal Gear Solid II (10) I thought it would be close, and then shakes verse was beast, I liked all but one line, so no doubt, v/shake-zula
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08-05-06, 01:42 PM | #10 | ||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 06F3 AF4D
shake ate you.
VA all day. |
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08-06-06, 11:04 AM | #11 | ||||||
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IP: 8512 38A7
v/ Shake
one-sided battle here. wasnt feelin anythin from EA cept his closer, which i thought was coo. everything else was either worded poorly, or forced. Shake had a nice verse. i wasnt feelin the heat/leanin to Avent line, but everything else was pretty coo. the opener was prolly the best bar of the battle, so yeah. |
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08-06-06, 12:44 PM | #12 | ||||
The Saviour
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IP: 46C4 2741
Shake-Zula wins 5-0.
Shake-Zula wins (10-2) Erel Avent loses (7-2) |
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