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09-17-06, 01:11 PM | #1 | ||||
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15. Flash (5-2) vs 16. Stanza (3-4)
IP: C75F FB8F
Verses Due Thursday at 11:59PM Eastern No Line Limit Biting = Ban Feeding = Vote Deduction Swaying = Vote Deduction Must Vote On Four Battles And Post Your Links Votes Due Saturday Night New Battles Up Sunday Morning For Full Rules Click Here |
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09-17-06, 05:12 PM | #2 | |||
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Wow i had the links aswell.. thought the convo on AIM would have cleared shit up with that but i guess not
Check like chesse bitch Pic battle? If not am prolly going like 30-46
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09-18-06, 07:14 AM | #3 | ||||
Please excuse My Sickness
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IP: 3B17 B21F
.................................Check............ .............
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09-18-06, 10:46 AM | #5 | |||
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Blah OMG you fucking suck... no-show hoe..
Lmme key something up real quick then This kids a retard must be, a little slow as you can see 's why you rep your last weeks record in ya sig 3-3 I'll level this whore, and smash you straight to the floor N ya name suits you Cause you gota stanza of losses, yeah thats 4 or more* This kids lame, and your writtens are straight wack You the only person i know ........................That bites a bitten verse, Whys that* Bet you felt stupid huh? a mind full of regret? Kinda like your failed tourny, The best of the sets Stupid bitch i dont know why im even battling you Cause if this bitch ate parkerbrothers .....................................he still wouldnt have a clue 10 down and only 4 more to go n your ass is whored Cause your text puts everyone to sleep on this board This kids a bitch, and this battle is a fucking gag Which is exactly what i did when i saw your girl fag *second bar. Stanza stands for a group of lines, usually 4 or more *3rd bar. He bite a bitten verse from Whys That?
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09-20-06, 11:22 PM | #6 | ||||
Please excuse My Sickness
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IP: 3B17 B21F
WTF??
Man Yo Shit Is Lame And I Aint Talkin Bout Ya Ass But It does Drop better Trash For Cash Than That Nigga Flash You Wanna Play Lil Dude Ill give You The Game And Put My documentary all of your corpes while yo flesh burn up in flames damn man you really so suck You need to up your rhymes and I aint talkin bout My old Verses when I Say ........................................ You got some played out stanza Lines All About the four Like You talkin bout me when its bout them clovers but luck will leave you fucked Under Above and You wont get over Yep I did it sober witout the perk in my system Dude training day is gone and we got skills...so srrry you missed em And I knew you wasnt right When You wanna Battle with Pics Last time i heard You CAME Early in a pic Battles ............................................when you Was beatin Yo Dick And I didnt Bit You Bitch So Redo Your Homework You Bitch Before Your Opinion fuck round and cummed like on Like The bitch in ya But hey You could be a fake denzel and play yo part You slut bcuz you jus Actin like you can rap Until I Signal your cut
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09-20-06, 11:34 PM | #7 | ||||
Trill OG
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This kids lame, and your writtens are straight wack
You the only person i know ........................That bites a bitten verse, Whys that ^^pwned vs. jibberish man ur rhymes were baby rhymes man... really try n elevate alot.. i really don't kno how u got 3 wins man no hate, but really V/flash
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09-20-06, 11:44 PM | #8 | |||
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Blah at you trying to show at the last minute and catch me with a no-show verse... You fed and went over the line limit so if you get any votes they will be removed for feeding... N ya did bite.. want links? eh not worth my time just check out not the last but the page before the last page of hall of shame in the complaints forum
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09-21-06, 02:27 AM | #9 | ||||
New to RV
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IP: 9E72 D63E
^verses aren't due till Thursday homeboy
Lampejo I'll level this whore, and smash you straight to the floor N ya name suits you Cause you gota stanza of losses, yeah thats 4 or more* This kids lame, and your writtens are straight wack You the only person i know ........................That bites a bitten verse, Whys that* ^lol, you make four lines like like 6 n shit. Thought these were ight Stanza.. the pic in ya sig is dope! the verse was blah. There wasn't any wordplay...well "CAME", but that's a lil played. I was waitin for the documentry punch to land but...anyways. Nice try. Read around a bit. V/ Lamp
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09-21-06, 02:34 PM | #10 | ||||
Within Eternity's Wither
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I'll level this whore, and smash you straight to the floor
N ya name suits you Cause you gota stanza of losses, yeah thats 4 or more* This kids lame, and your writtens are straight wack You the only person i know ........................That bites a bitten verse, Whys that* felt these were worth quoting vs. Nothing really worth quoting v/ Flash not really a decent battle, not really impressed by either drop this battle was meh.. but Flash took this one clearly with better attempts of wordplay and punches
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09-21-06, 03:20 PM | #11 | |||||||
the medicine man
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But hey You could be a fake denzel and play yo part You slut
bcuz you jus Actin like you can rap Until I Signal your cut STANZ STEER AWAY FROM THE DIC PUNCHES vs I'll level this whore, and smash you straight to the floor N ya name suits you Cause you gota stanza of losses, yeah thats 4 or more* This kids lame, and your writtens are straight wack You the only person i know ........................That bites a bitten verse, Whys that* V. FLASH TOOK THIS EASY |
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09-21-06, 06:25 PM | #12 | |||||
Please excuse My Sickness
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IP: 3B17 B21F
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Wow You Really Take this inetrnet battling seriously LOL .....Look kid I have a Job and School Plus Sports that I do and I Still dropped a day early if am Correct the rules say that verses are due Before Thurs. But I might Be wrong ........And Man I always Show so you can shut that shit up bout noshowing and I wouldnt give two damn cents if you got me dq'ed or not aint like my life depend on this battle ...........................GROW UP BITCH ITS THE INTERNET !!!!!!!!!!!!!.......... And Also I think There is No line Limit You Dumbass...........But I might be wrong ......But Whateva Nice drop Man ....Stop taking the net so serious you took my verse to heart I was just Battling GROW uP MAN .... Nice drop though G'luck In the future .....
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09-21-06, 07:02 PM | #13 | |||
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IP: 1C0F 1C11
Rofl... blah i thought yesterday was thursday.
N yeah there is a linelimit... its whatever hte first person drops
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09-21-06, 07:23 PM | #14 | |||
I Hurt.
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I'll level this whore, and smash you straight to the floor
N ya name suits you Cause you gota stanza of losses, yeah thats 4 or more* Stupid bitch i dont know why im even battling you Cause if this bitch ate parkerbrothers .....................................he still wouldnt have a clue vs. damn man you really so suck You need to up your rhymes and I aint talkin bout My old Verses when I Say ........................................ You got some played out stanza Lines Flash put up a no-show verse so I won't comment on it too much, not that good, but a few lines which were okay I guess. Stanza, I feel like u just aren't elevating as I read ur verses every week. I think its great u come in here and show every week, but if you want to improve, follow this advice. I think u should take a break. Don't battle for a couple weeks. In those couple of weeks, I just want you to read. Read literally hundreds of battles, but only ones from good heads, readin' bad heads work is just a waste of time. Basically from readin, you will not only see what ideas are played, but how they execute the concepts they use. If you see a line you really dig, analyze it a bit and see how they made it. Sometimes when elevating, you just need to stop for a minute and grow and that's what I think u should do. That is tho, if you care to.. if you don't care much about elevating and are just doin' this to have fun, thats cool too. Vote - Flash |
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09-21-06, 08:50 PM | #15 | |||
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Word thanks for the advice man.. Like i said in the 1-2 mag interview with you am not really looking to elevate or anything am just having fun droppin i dont really take more then 10 minutes to write a verse against anyone... i mean its a waste of time to sit there and research peoples posts and threads like some people do just to get "dope" bars... am on here just to have fun and post around...
But word i will take that into consideration anytime i really want to elevate
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