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12-10-06, 11:54 AM | #1 | ||||
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21. Stanza (8-11) vs 22. Sir Smash'Alot (2-4)
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12-10-06, 02:32 PM | #2 | ||||||
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blah again ./
how many lines
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12-10-06, 07:01 PM | #3 | ||||
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IP: CCBE 9926
checkin........................................... .........8 minimum guess bu no max
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12-11-06, 08:02 PM | #4 | ||||
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Its a Battle of skills But I can See that Your verse jus isnt Clashin
Stop with Ya Gay ass Bcuz we all Know The "The Sirs You Be Smashin" Im The King James of The Game Your a Lame Joker...Ya Style makes me laugh Yeah You Smashin Alot....The bitch Burn so Much he Started Naming His Claps I Would Diss Your Title But Thats Barely There So I Wont act Insane I Cant believe you can make words Rhyme..>When You Cant Change Yo Name DaTrus Is More Than You ...Must Be Why You always Tend To Lie Ill Fix it By Taking my 1st Thought & use my 2nd fist to punch you In Your 3rd Eye Nigga They way Im Rippin You Will Stand out in The mag Like a Good Erection I would Battle You audio But Your skills are Elevating...In The Opposite Direction 0-2 WTF? and 2-0 In Text Umm....Im not even Gonna Add my comment To that Bcuz 99.9% of RV and RB and The World Knows ......THATS WACK !!! and I know what your gonna say Stanza's a Biter Thats only 0-1 in text thats played And You Need to Do Your Research Before You mention My Rec Im a Sinister so dont Bet dont You'll be a Winner and I wont duck You Rippin S From J to Z and it'll be like ya other week another lost ..So DeJa Vu Jus Ask Beyonce Bout it...She aint the only one to ring The alrm when You rhyme And Since I want people to Read Yo verse..Ill let you go ahead & qoute My lines
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12-11-06, 09:24 PM | #5 | ||||||
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Waiting for good lines from stanz, we try be patient
but he using so many ....'s we get tired of waiting!! Even with stretched bars, no hits, all small songs Leave him like his bar structre, ya, stanzas all wrong Time to adjust this geeks attitude like my tv Cause your focus distorted if you think you seein me Hes hot? 8-11 and the ranks say hes on top? But his text drops resembles his audio league, a flop Your from where no one raps good, imma stop south We have talent shows in school, but you musta dropped out Your audios the worst, heres a hint, get the right swagga Perfect line lengths, but there still isnt a tight stanza Its sad being a geek and such, i mean hes a lonely kid Id take shots at this dudes crew, but its only him Ya rhyme capabilities, quite small, all you sayin is midgits You got wrestling raps, cause all you say is gimmicks You got a nyquil flow, fuck your structure, learn to sh Im a die hard eminem fan, but when I heard stan-zzzz lol done on monday, thats some shit
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12-11-06, 10:02 PM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: 4ABB FA97
yo my Vote is Stanza
you did ya thing boi Vote unexplained - DQd
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12-11-06, 10:06 PM | #7 | ||||
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Dog your verse has to be explained a little better ...>go and look and other battle and see how other people voted
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12-12-06, 08:17 AM | #8 | |||
Skadoosh!
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Its a Battle of skills But I can See that Your verse jus isnt Clashin
Stop with Ya Gay ass Bcuz we all Know The "The Sirs You Be Smashin" DaTrus Is More Than You ...Must Be Why You always Tend To Lie Ill Fix it By Taking my 1st Thought & use my 2nd fist to punch you In Your 3rd Eye Nigga They way Im Rippin You Will Stand out in The mag Like a Good Erection I would Battle You audio But Your skills are Elevating...In The Opposite Direction VS. Hes hot? 8-11 and the ranks say hes on top? But his text drops resembles his audio league, a flop Your from where no one raps good, imma stop south We have talent shows in school, but you musta dropped out Personally, I thought the quality of this battle was poor. But, based on that I quoted some bars. The ones I quoted were decent concepts, but both of you really need to take a serious look at your wording. That is your main problem. Also, stop with the fucking statements, people want punches. Overall, Stanza had a better verse, his concepts were slightly better as was his wording in some. But for you to both drop so many lines and have the majority of them be seriously weak, it is a shame. You both have the potential to be better, you just need some schooling. V/ - Stanza |
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12-12-06, 10:18 PM | #9 | ||||
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Thanx for teh advice man ..................Ill take illtake it in ............uppin for more votes ..........
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12-13-06, 01:25 AM | #10 | ||||||||
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this was a pretty weak battle....
i really thought Smash, was gonna bring more.. btw...MY VOTE DOESN'T COUNT (i'm not in this league..) so you can count it if you want...i dont really care but.... its like...Smash didn't come with anything personal...just whack attempts to rhyme the last words togeather (forced) and Stanza strectched his shit out so bad... but..Forced/Played is much worse the Stretched Vote: (would be) Stanaza
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12-13-06, 06:55 AM | #11 | |||||||
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Almost my whole verse had to do with him, like 3 bar didnt have something to do with him.
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12-13-06, 11:01 PM | #12 | ||||
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.................Man Can We Please gets som votes in here ?
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12-15-06, 10:40 AM | #13 | |||
I Hurt.
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Sir Smash'Alot gets -2 votes for swaying
Uppin for votes |
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12-15-06, 03:41 PM | #14 | ||||
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........................Dang...........anyway Please Someone drop some type of vote in here lol
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12-16-06, 05:09 PM | #15 | |||||||
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That was an obvious idiot vote read my verse dick
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