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check..

lets get it poppin

Mastercard doesn't even want pryceless, man, this kid's a failure...
We're both new to RV...
...........................Only difference is..........You live in the trailer.

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get attached to a rolling stone and you're libel to get crushed..

never liked this dude cause i was never a fan of hoes..
so he'll get bucked so bad, g-unit will show up for cameos..

can't spit nice, dude u aint poppin man..
you couldnt bring heat to the table..
...if u was slavin in the kitchen wit pots n pans...

dont no show man..

Yeah I slave in the kitchen - just to fuckin serve your ass
But I should get a new day job...
........................'Cause your raps ain't bringin home cash.

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get attached to a rolling stone and you're libel to get crushed..

vote goes to pryceless for the pots and pans line, the rest was sort of lame....pious had a decent attempt at some nameplay....but set it up completely wrong, therefor keeping it from hitting hard. The only line whatsoever that stood out, was the pots and pans line..and that really wasn't that great either, just the best out of the bunch.

pious might have had a decent attempt on his last bar had he worded it differently..

vote - pryceless

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^agreed.

Pious-i see the potential in your wording. But all the dots..isn't good man.
it throws off ya scheme. Overall concepts were a lil basic. just keep workin
at it man. be a lil more direct.

Prycele$$-nothin too special from you. but you had some good attempts. Not sure
that i have seen the pots n pans line used in that way. so it was somethin different.
overall this weak. work on wording.

v/pry

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2-0. Lets get some more votes on this.

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v/ Pry

Pry- you had some alright wording you just need to work on the concept and the connection of the punches.

Pious- Im pretty sure i know who you are just by your name and structure... you just need to work on your wording of concepts

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ummm, dunno wuts goin on here. is any form of bringin heat to the table not already plizzzzayed??? not to mention the wording was bad. then again, both of poius' punches were played, pryceless had the bucked line which was ok i guess :S

bla at this, v/ pryceless

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