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32 bar max 16 bar min.
No Feeding
No Crew Votes
No Dickriding Votes

UnEmceeAble VS Crook Ed
both must check in, you have till Thursday to Post, or DQ'd

UnEmceeAble Post First

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wow this blows.........I posted my verse and it got delted by the template changes.....

Alright, doing my best to remember:::::::::

WARM UP::::

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Dog you aint shit, you’re merely-a-shame…
you should change you name to Window: your clearly-a-pane/
You spittin blunt lines-ain’t leaving scars-or-marks…
dropping light rhymes that couldn’t harm-the-dark/
I’m stopping and tearing your arms-apart…
leaving you without an attack cuz your punches are-parked/
And Crook- Your weakening yourself the way you stay-played…
We could fuck the same positive bitch- and you’d get Aids/
I even reserved you a spot in my -Hall of Fame-… (PEEP MY SIG)
I heard your audios and thought that the Boogie Man changed-his-name/
You need quit now- and leave text battling-for-life…
None of your punches hit like your batting-for-strikes/
Even your verses are on crutches when I leave you crippled-and-scarred/
Hit you with flaming bars just to watch you ripple-and-char/
Even dressed in black and white stripes-you couldn’t be -Crook…
Ed you probly dressed up like the Ham-Burglar: trying to get –work/
I could type Forfeit and call it a Merk…
I’m over here trying to start beef with you and you trying to flirt/
You Twerp: Ya leaving thoughts two-bars late the way ya mind-leaks…
you rhymes sound like def kids flowing to mimed-beats/
I’m levels above you- what I think is normal -you think is fine-speech…
At the worst part of my verse is where your lines-peak/
Your future is bleak- like cancerous newborns with malignant-skin…
I’ll sWINdle-my-way-in, but you’ll see S-*-*-*-D-L-E cuz you can’t-see-WINs/
Not even when your doing the copy and paste-ins…
You think your verses are the shit cuz you pick ‘em from waste-bins/
I’m a mirror hitting with your own punches like your arms are reflected/
I break ya mind into a thousand pieces, sweep it up and leave ya thoughts collected/

Bitch you should have thought twice before beefing with Un…
cuz I’m servin up more fat then u could pick from the body of Big Pun/
I’m twisting the one in your record into the shape of a two…
cuz the only 1 in my record will be spelled with a Double-U (W)

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I’m not at my best right now but here is:

32 Bars::::::: Help yourself




Also ^^^ I didn't bold or do italics on any of my punches this time

i hate crew battles

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SWEET Scotty:: Post elsewhere!!!!

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U gonna show?

Yes I will show..



Look at this fake pussy tryna Steal wins with what he spittin
When you couldnt take out a Crook Impeachin Richard Nixon
Twistin his name to show what his true capabilities be
Cuz When it comes to rap this mans just an UnAbleEmcee
Puttin me in ya Sig In the Hall of Fame and I guess Im Next
But for what? Oh yea Beatin this man down horribly in text
For the record he had to warm up before he posted but forgot
To kick it up a notch like Emril Cuz his verse never got hot
And this is his only shot, Wouldnt battle this dude again
Cuz hes a bitch and know that I dont fuck around with chicken heads
Rhymes about as nice as Ren and Stimpy wit a mic check
Shockin him like he took a piss on the electric fence
Not lettin em be, hes scared by my sexual taste
Believe Im a freak and this is the best pussy I ever ate
Its fate you die slow, sure you posted first and shit
But this aint the only time a man be cummin behind him
Blindin his eye as they shoot and its been numerous men
If I judged him on reppin Gay Pride hed easily be a Ten
Deckin this man with With an X Box to the head its no fight
This aint a Game but Im legally leavin you Dead to Rights
Fade out the Lights for These so called Production Emcees
When they couldnt be BlockBuster If a cop caught them all on the streets
Man Please, WP is a team you couldnt make with dumb luck
And if you tried out, Like bad movies Im leavin Uncut
So shut up with all yur rantin and ravin bout ya skill
When hes been popped off more times then druggies with pills
Lil fag wasted 32 lines and all along I knew
That this win is mine, Cuz they stopped readin yur verse half way threw

Prolley cuz it was absolutley terrible, dont ever come at me with a verse like that again..

eD

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Thats the best verse I have ever seen you drop::::

Lets see votes

uppin

Someone Fuckin Vote

OMFG, can we get some votes in this piece... jesus

hell yea mine against the specialist aint gettin shyt neither

Both came very nice....both came hard with good punches and wordplay, it was quite equal but there were just a few defining lines in Crook's verse that gave him the edge on Un...From Ed:

"Twistin his name to show what his true capabilities be
Cuz When it comes to rap this mans just an UnAbleEmcee
Puttin me in ya Sig In the Hall of Fame and I guess Im Next
But for what? Oh yea Beatin this man down horribly in text"

That right there hit very hard and really got the battle...top drops from both sides, props to both...

Vote=Ed

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1-0 uppin, plz vote yall..

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