RULES:
U WERE SUPPOSED TO SPIT FIRST...BUT CHANGED THE RULES...IF I LOSE I GET A REMATCH.
ILL SPIT..MAX OF 15...
CHECK IN AND ILL START SPITTIN

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=51180 please vote that,,,, ima lookin forward to seein the end of this,, ill be sure to hit back

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yo...lets go...damn my brother deleted my beats lol...

my beats gone...so i rip out ya heart and use it as a substitute/
get you off this site...take the dick out ya ass and sub-a-boot!/
your a hater...punches flyin you yellin leave-me-alone/
take my throne?...you moan and groan when i change-my-tone/
im ready to battle while this pussy has to wait to spit/
you aint legit..you make-a-skit while i make you hate-this-shit/
when i spit its 'daunting aint it'.. i type this shit on my key-board/
my 'shit' will 'haunt ya anus'..lil bitch you nigga even flee spores/
im connecting-blows...hes in the corner collecting prose/
reflect-on-flows..and check-ya-clothes, they bloody im deckin ho's/
you 'flow-sure' and think ya 5 wins can take me over-board/
check ya 'com-po-sure'..for fun ill rip out ya spinal chord/
you losing-it..thinking u can win before u seen me spit/
ya didnt know ya were going down did ya? fell into a deep pit/

your turn...hope you can match it...spit...

sum gud shit dat good punches........................................... .................................................. ....................................

thanks yo...
lets see what hes got though>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>.

ENTRY
Challenging me is a joke really u must be smoke on some crack or XTC//
Your no MC your as fake as JA RULE claiming he has a JAIL ID//

Your making a bigmistake because il murder you… a real loss//
Run Because il toss u like a burnt pancake cos im the boss//

LESSON

You Played the wrong game im the best in the business//
U must have had DIZZYNESS to accept this game its Fatalness//

I don’t understand how lyrics get from crack-to-wack…. cos im so curious//
Your Hilarious To think u can catch up to me I put the fast in the film fast n the furious//

Il lyrically insane you like Some shit from the Grave...Like i told ya//
it will be Costa phobia You’ll be trapped like slaved man in a Cave/

FINISH

Now let me finsh this battle… u dint stand a chance like ur fat momma
Because all I see is u getting dumma with all is soap dromma… Il gun up and say big ugly bomma//-Belive me
It wasn’t hard to Achieve this cos ur a newbie with No brain//
Don’t Complain because anyway u dint have a chance to gain my Fame//

OMG DAT SHIT WAS TIGHT OMG SHIT WAS SICK SON but u both were sick game gots dis 1 sorry yall vote=game http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=53484 return the favor wit a vote

get out now. never say "return the favor" in my thread.
game dont vote on his battle please...we dont do "favors" around here we "vote fairly"

alright i read both flows and both were ill but i came down to this

flow-feeble
punches-feeble
feeble had better rhyming

Game you were hittin hard but not hard enough for me to believe that u could make a comeback

overall vote - Feeble

i dont understan dwhat u weere saying apart from the flow.............................................. ........... game had better punchlines and better wordplay

he called me a newbie..good laugh but obviously ur more of one...you only have 6 battles.................
akakakakakakaka

what are u talking about? game had like 3 different freestyles and feeble was on one topic... game was jumpin to different subjects... not a real good freestyle for me.. plus that fast and the furious line... i used it first mine was like "I'm winnin this battle 2 fast and its leavin you 2 furious/"

feeble had good consistency, u both was sick..man good punches from both but game's ending fell off, the worst thing you could do in a rhyme is mention someone's momma
that means you caught writers black before you typed.
vote-feeble..but you both were good