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usual voting rules
u drop first
don't take forever

drop when ur ready

this nigga claims he'z an old head..... i'm gonna bring out the fresh shit on this cat..... drop when ur ready oldtimer

ur takin to long i'll jus drop first !<>!................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........................

I hope u brought ur heart pillz ....... !<>!

~iight dawg take out~ur-false-teath~bitch get ready to rhyme~%%
~This aint the~60's~ nigga ~bitch ur on my time~%%
~i'm gonna rip u inside out~nigga leave u ~dismanteled~%%
~U aint no comp~nigga~ trust me u~jus-been -handeled~%%
~cuz my rhymes are~drivin-u-insane~%%
~slicin-ur-brain~%%
~leave u wit a ~cane~%%
~u aint gotta~bring-me-to-court for ur injuries~bitch i'll take-the-blame~%%
~cuz u aint nuttin to fear~nigga ur record~showz ur skillz~%%
~i'm suprised ur still livin~the way u~swallow-them-viagra-pillz~%%
~cuz ur like p.diddy in a video~all u do is dance around~%%
~i'm done wastin my talent~on this~fake-philly-clown~%%


u still alive ??????

nice drop nigga............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...........................

Dis youngin frum Kenzo thinks he can rap:
But dis Milli Vanilli fake aint even on da map::
You can dispose of him in the ocean and no one will care:
Lil fag spits rymes as well as Mr. Clean grows hair::
His lyrics are smooth as his pimply white ass:
Dis boi would do betta if he elevated, smokin grass::
So back off wit ur trash talkin shit:
Everyone knows u as real as a silicone implanted tit::
I aint wastin no more time on a kool-aid drinkin kid:
Wit a 5 dolla hair cut and a jarhead for a lid::
So take ur green and whiet bo-bos and celtics apparel:
And go to da nearest pay phone like ur boi Colin Farrell::
Dial 911 and be a big fuckin hero:
Cause no one wants to hear frum a dickeatin irish zero:::

hot battle yo but i think biddy got this one wit betta punches and a betta flow

good shit from u both

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.TCS.

wow..

this was pretty wack fellas. in fact..my god.

this is supposed to be constructive criticism but...sigh

ok, both of you require serious elevation. read some battle in the LLL...

ok Cenrtl- dont use the word "nigga" in your verse in makes you seem ignorant and takes away from the whole effect..ocus on metaphors and multies. i can tell thats what you are going for and itd probably suit you. also, lose the ~.

Trip. you seem to almost have the concept down but you lack flow and personals. you have to many fill in the blank punches..

on the whole i think Trip took this due to better understanding..

elevate fellas.

triple ill seven you got fuckin merked just now pimp ya boi come so hard on ya ass man you was sappose ta come harder but you came bitch made biddy gets my vote


check out dis battle and give ah honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=68635

i vote biddy on dis one...
nice all from both ov yas...nice work
but i lyked biddy's lines better, daz all i can say...proves how close dis shit iz..keep it up peeps
peace

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ok yo....i gotta give dis one to Biddy-C..... his wuz just much more funny... he came harder and his punches wuz betta.... trip ill 7 fuckin blows da big ones.....
Vote-Biddy

uppin for the first time !<>!................................................. .................................................. .................................

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