iight rules r like this~~~

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---drop tonite b4 1 am---
...ill drop 1st...lets go........

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this is ma checkity check check check innnnn

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checkin in...........
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can you both hit this up...........easy merkin

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=76515

no bitch!!!!!!!!!!1

stop floodin ma thread!!!!!!!!

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when both verses r in then vote n then drop ur battle link
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that goes to everyone....1

^^word, drop the link AFTER you vote

this ain't a game, I'll make ya lay still like frozen food or an ice cube/
this character is funny, but his mouth don't move like an old mickey mouse cartoon/

pack ya neosporin cream, cause once i swing im leavin u wit more scars than da arms of crackfiends/
dickriders wouldnt help, they'd make this loss hurt worse, after all u "beat yaself" wit no vaseline/

this big dog's focused on ya throat wit a rifel scope 'n my trigger finger itches wit fleas/
i get in weak emcees and devour u hollow like that bacterial flesh eatin disease/

taken me for a pussy to fuck with now u a victim of my sickness like i'm spittin liquid STD's/
i'm too powerful for u dawg, i break through chains of battle links like i'm Hercules/

so hoe-please, drop ur low-key i flow-heat and i 'eat'-paper/
its in my elite-nature, to 'shut ya shit down' like a screen-saver/

i bring-flavor,lyrical human being-craver,battlen me couldnt be-braver/
if you thinkin of killen me in this battle, check ya self kid cause thats some dangerous behavior/

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uppen for rappad drop soon please.........1

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ok nice verse, i wil be dropping shortly,
peace
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damn dawg that was dope..........ill vote on this when other cat spits............................................. ...............

I aim with flames, while you barely "scorched this"//
Voters can't "picture" me losing, they get "illusions" of your "portrait//

I'm slappin this hoe with blows causing damaging hits//
Make him "kick a bucket" like when a janitor trips//

I'll breath on X a debree of lyrics....//
Till his body's like a drunk's pumped stomach-free of spirit//

We playing dykes while X hoping to get his name in lights//
But we all know he "pre-writes", like ancient times//

I'll murder you now, name-the-spot cuz i easily manipulate ill-legal like racist cops//
You have the fakest-drops and you get ate-a-lot so dining on your verse will be the only time I taste a loss//

I hope after I merk this kid he'll learn his lesson....//
Hmmm....that smell....is it Herbal Essence??//

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time for votes people...drop votes make sur to poll them n good explinations....1

nice battle man
now let's get votes
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dope battle guys it was close but heres the breakdown

wordplay=X came wit better wordplay n this battle, but i liked rappads as well

vocab=X go this too, nothing too impressive but still had nice vocab usage

multis=tough cuz neither used multis til the end of each verse, but X had a few more than rappad, so X gets this one

flow=tie, cna really go either way, both lost consistnecy in flow in smoe areas,but then regained it later on, so this is a tie

creativity=X was a little more creative, rappad i like your shit dawg but X go this one too

punches=well, punches win battles and X takes this one again, rappad had some solid shit but X came harder

favorite line= i usually only have one favorite line butthis goes to both, liked these lines the most

X="i bring-flavor,lyrical human being-craver,battlen me couldnt be-braver/
if you thinkin of killen me in this battle, check ya self kid cause thats some dangerous behavior"

rappad=I'll murder you now, name-the-spot cuz i easily manipulate ill-legal like racist cops//
You have the fakest-drops and you get ate-a-lot so dining on your verse will be the only time I taste a loss//

good shit yall
poll vote=X, the breakdown looks onesided but it was pretty close in each category, droppin an honest vote hear guys please respect it.

holla and good luck to both
if i see this getting slept on i'll "up" this shit for yall cuz this was a tight battle

peace