10 - 16 lines
blind spit
no shady votes
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Spittin Gainst me you just make ya rhymes 'Parallel' to Garbage,/1
Cuz I'm Throwin' Fakes to tha Curb and you Punch with no laterall target/2

Couldn't hit me if u was a marksman, EyE change ya vision to Darkened/3
Shouldn't Spit cuz You Singin like Kelly Clarkson, You'll Real-EyeZ pain wen you livin dis-heartened/4

I'll scuff up and slice your word-play, to show the scratches on and in the surface,/5
You Cut wit A Spice the Herb Way, flow never matches it's on and on and werthless/6

You Spit and Cant Earn Dimes for your thoughts/7
No Shit You'll Learn Rhymes-I'm Your Boss/8
Wen Lit I'll Burn Spines and Leave Vertabre's at Cost/9
Determine Crookid Fines I Beleive you to plan to Murder Me's Lost/10

I'll "Spare" you the Embarrassment, Take it Easy For A Minute/11
Tear you~the Last Pin Standin, Then Break Your PC cuz it's been 61 Seconds/12

You Can Pre-Dict The Forecast at a Win For Your Broke Ass/13
But Me-Quick to write War Fast and Spin cuz my Storm Dont Pass/14

I'll hang this Victory over your Head like a Stigmata be, I Bitch-Slapped you to you 0 - 3 /15
You Sang History and I Red(read) that you Fat Bitch Product See,
Kid-Napped your Win and Own it "4" Me/16

Did someone leave your cage open? 2-eyes, here? alone?
Don't let your mind wander, bit small to be out on it's own
Your face on a milk carton, Momma waitng by the phone,
for the feds to call and say you're safe and that you're coming home.
You need some help to step to me, I'm way out of your range,
here's 20 cents, go ring your boys, and bring me back the change.
I"ll torch you in you sleep, and laugh as you burn
I'll take your left eye and give your right in return
You just a kid with nothing, for me, Dog, I'm fully grown,
You make me laugh, you just like bambi with testosterone.
You try to battle Parallex, like you got something that's ill,
but all I see, from what you spit, is an advert for the pill.
You shouldn't have come, if someone cared, they would have stopped you.
I know, I know, you're no-one's fool, maybe someone could adopt you?
This could have been a battle, if you only had a flow,
its been like taking on 3 men... larry, curly and moe

Aite?

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iight iight good drop......lets see sum votes.........no sleeping
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this was a reaaaaallly close battle,,, both had ok flow, and punches, no personals,......hmmmmm. i think eye4neye just took this coz of a bit more complexity to his verse, nice drop from both though

I think it goez like this:

multi's:Eye
flow:Eye
personals:none
punchez: ummm...Eye
overall vote: Eye

I don't know what ya'll are chatting about
His first line was a personal
and you really missed the left for right eye bit in mine (his name is Eye for an eye!!!
sweet though
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both came hard and this was a close battle....... parallex's shit was kinda played tho and eye 4 an eyes shit was easy to read and shit sounded right.. parallex had the multis i think and eye had the punches par had the wordplay tho so i give it to par
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79273

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Here is my 2 cents:

Punches:Eyes
Flow:Eyes
Multi:Eyes
Personals:None
Enjoyaiblity:Eyes
Creativenss:Eyes
Comlexity:Eyes

Overal:Eyes

This was a clean sweep from the new noob on the block. Not bad at all. Good everything and keep doing what you doing.

Para-Come on now, that shit was a little bit played, I have seen better from you, if you need help don't be afraid to pm me, alirght?

Props ot both MC's and keep elevating.

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