alright you know the rules,

10:15 lines max
no Crew votes
whoever get the most votes win
your verse is due 15 minutes after you check in

ayo fuk dat 15 minutes afta check in shit,ive got otha things 2 b doin aswell mannn.....

the rules we agreed on were 10-15 lines,no crew votes and u spit first as u called me out


hollla

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aight... yo... check it

I grip the mic, and i begin to rip like Eminem/
while this man here is sittin on his computer chair Eatin M & M's/
before you get on the mic and diss me/
you betta think about when yo girl sucked me last week/
this man's name here is MC aines/
sounds like somebody who's on da street freestylin for change/
this man is so wack he got beat by a rapper wit no name/
that's okay, i'll give you a handshake when im' chillin in da RB hall of fame/
i challenge people, i rip them to shreds/
you look like a guy wit brades looking to give some head/
this is my first shot and i promise not to spoil it/
i'm tellin you straight up i get more ass than toilets/
son, looks like this freestyles going to a final bout/
welcome to round 12 bitch, you just got wooped by the latin knockout

well if you couldn't post afta 15 minutes then when you gonna spit, i don't care or nothin, just try to post by the end of today.

aight mann sorry....

my internet has been down for the past couple of hours....ive got 2 go out in a second so i dno wen ma shit wil b up


i will get it up asap

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ayo

i step up to the stage and release my frustration/
Diss cats verse didnt rhyme hes already feeling my domination/
dis kids only 15 years old he hasnt yet experienced life/
my razor sharp lyrics are cuttin through him like a knife/
South Carolina?wheres the hell is that?/
probably some pathetic place just like those lyrics you spat/
Y didnt your verse rhyme wats up?/
here you go take the 'wack emcees cup'/
I mean face it,you say you get more ass than toilets/
Dat shit sounds gay it aint gona help the votes sway/
What kind of rap name is brian four two eight eight/
Dat shits worse than ma crime rate/
By now i no my shit is startin 2 dictate/
Dont be ashamed to say its raised your heart rate(nervous)/
You aint never gonna make a lightweight/
Bcos i wil b addin you 2 ma death rate(people ive beat)
Dis battle is fucked its the worst ive ever spit/
Its cos im high, I think ive been 2 close to your moms clit/



uppin this shit 4 votes

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nice battle fellas.....
brians verse was kool with aight punches but they weren't that hard hittin....flow was off at times but structure was nice....

mc aines had a gud structure and flow....hispunches hit harder which inevitably won the battle for him....good finisher

close battle but ms aines edged it out with betta punches....

both y'all stay up........................peace

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnn 4 votes.... vote plz!!!!

Nice battle MC aines, i hope to battle you again sometime.. = )

aight ima have to go wit aines on this one

he took every catagory

he has better sturcture..flow..punches..personals...vocab..wordp lay..and overall he wins it

yo brian elevate and ull get it dont wry

yo aines hit this up with an honest vote.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99309

i need one to close it out

good battle overall man


flow = tie
wordplay =tie
punches = mc aines

vote = mc aines

PEACE

PLEASE REPAY THE FAVOUR REALLY QUICK YALL

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99985

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99999

Thanx peace

Over all Brian and MC aines were tied at everything( wordplay, metas, flow, vocab) but what seperated them is when MC Aines dropped some doper punch lines barely beating Brian but overall a good battle to look at and laugh at damn it LOL LOL LOL LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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*Nashville city*

thnx 4 all y'all votes

uppin this shit 4 sum more honest votes .................................................. .................................................. ...............................

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Mc Aines got this one with harder punches and better wordplay but brian did ok as well.............................................. ..........................