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Verses Due: Friday 12-19-03
Voting Ends: Sunday 12-21-03

Act Like You Are Suppose To Be Here... Fuckers!!

i know we're not supposed to check in. . but me and u were about to battle in elite mentill... since we're battling here im closing the one in elite. good luck.

aight yo i feel that ... no problem

This ain't a battle - Call it a MeNTiLL beats Feeb's review
The way Im lethal enough To leave him thinkin' Feeble
My punches reach you Like a Dela Hoya verse Lennox
Fucc your record percentage I don't need a W to win it
PM Mania! I hope your kiddin' ... Cuz I'd hate to abuse U
Cuz I sonned U - So I'd lose U ... Sorry Pica Ash didn't choose U
But I guess Ur used to losin' by now I hope U can face it
The way MeNTiLL shitted on U be4 Now we got a glitch in the Matrix
Im non-adjacent to Ur skillz Cuz ur style's sumthin' Id have fun wit
While Ur more confused than Tom tryna figure out wat bunch U run wit

Feeble Told Me To Post His Verse For Him
in personals? mentill cant cover me, this virgins distressed
u could stick me in ur washer & not have me permanent pressed
u beat me once - last time i heard its called luck
you're an aunt. .
. . & im not callin u a girl, im callin u a small fuck
ya walled up. . ya existence is a phased karma. .
cuz its always 'till this, 'till that. . like a crazed farmer
ur wack & we all know it. . .i charge & beat ya
. . cuz your flow borders on chile like argentina
you're completely wack. . but we gotta stand ya
u got desperate & built a career outta propaganda
u suck, when i read ur battles im most annoyed
ur talentless, wack, AND a fag. .
. . shit you could be the american idol posterboy

MeNTiLL

This ain't a battle - Call it a MeNTiLL beats Feeb's review
The way Im lethal enough To leave him thinkin' Feeble
1st nice, 2nd not as quite

My punches reach you Like a Dela Hoya verse Lennox
Fucc your record percentage I don't need a W to win it
half descent

PM Mania! I hope your kiddin' ... Cuz I'd hate to abuse U
Cuz I sonned U - So I'd lose U ... Sorry Pica Ash didn't choose U
if it was a personal then i wouldnt know

But I guess Ur used to losin' by now I hope U can face it
The way MeNTiLL shitted on U be4 Now we got a glitch in the Matrix
Uh, im still lost

Im non-adjacent to Ur skillz Cuz ur style's sumthin' Id have fun wit
While Ur more confused than Tom tryna figure out wat bunch U run wit
barf, not feelin it



Feeble Minded

in personals? mentill cant cover me, this virgins distressed
u could stick me in ur washer & not have me permanent pressed
almost funny

u beat me once - last time i heard its called luck
you're an aunt. .
. . & im not callin u a girl, im callin u a small fuck
bluh

ya walled up. . ya existence is a phased karma. .
cuz its always 'till this, 'till that. . like a crazed farmer
chuckle, i think

ur wack & we all know it. . .i charge & beat ya
. . cuz your flow borders on chile like argentina
another ok 1

you're completely wack. . but we gotta stand ya
u got desperate & built a career outta propaganda
nice

u suck, when i read ur battles im most annoyed
ur talentless, wack, AND a fag. .
. . shit you could be the american idol posterboy
blah, line one wasnt original


Overall
I think Feeble Minded won with flow, structure, and not-few, but harder hitting punches. MeNTiLL had either kinda weak to weird to get style going on, didnt tickle me.

Oh and I juss thought about this ... Sum people might think Im talkin' bout Uncle Tom ... On that last line ... Which Im not ... It's Tom Brady ... Sorry ...

hmmm..not a bad battle....but im going with Feeble...
on this one....i just felt his puches hit way harder than...
MeNTiLL's did...and i felt that feeble stayed more....
consistent throughout his verse also...
MeNTiLL u came decent..u didn't come bad...
i just didn't really see anything in ur verse that...
stood out that much...but all in all this was a good battle....
but my vote goes to Feeble for a overall better verse...

good battle guys...stay up...

Gh05t!

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feeble was better
more creative and had some decent word play
wasnt feeling mentills verse at all....poor and didnt really touch on feebles verse

Feeble won this, fairly easily in my view. He outshined Mentill in every category.... No stand out lines for Mentill really....


ya walled up. . ya existence is a phased karma. .
cuz its always 'till this, 'till that. . like a crazed farmer


ur wack & we all know it. . .i charge & beat ya
. . cuz your flow borders on chile like argentina


you're completely wack. . but we gotta stand ya
u got desperate & built a career outta propaganda

^Those lines were nice, the farmer one was funny but in a way confusing...

Stay up, should rematch in Elite and both of yall come ALot better, should be a classic...

stay up chicos.

Meh Battle
Mentill dropped like a newbie and Feeble dropped like feeble, lol
I wasnt feeling any of mentills punches at all
Feeble had a few dope ones
ya walled up. . ya existence is a phased karma. .
cuz its always 'till this, 'till that. . like a crazed farmer

For better wordplay, punches and overall consistancy
Vote - Feeble

Mentill's Verse

This ain't a battle - Call it a MeNTiLL beats Feeb's review
The way Im lethal enough To leave him thinkin' Feeble

Kinda blah opener...not feelin it

My punches reach you Like a Dela Hoya verse Lennox
Fucc your record percentage I don't need a W to win it

De la Hoya and Lennox aren't even in the same weight class

PM Mania! I hope your kiddin' ... Cuz I'd hate to abuse U
Cuz I sonned U - So I'd lose U ... Sorry Pica Ash didn't choose U

Not feelin the whole Pokemon punch

But I guess Ur used to losin' by now I hope U can face it
The way MeNTiLL shitted on U be4 Now we got a glitch in the Matrix

Lmao, dope

Im non-adjacent to Ur skillz Cuz ur style's sumthin' Id have fun wit
While Ur more confused than Tom tryna figure out wat bunch U run wit

Nice personal

Feeble Minded's Verse

in personals? mentill cant cover me, this virgins distressed
u could stick me in ur washer & not have me permanent pressed

Nah

u beat me once - last time i heard its called luck
you're an aunt. .
. . & im not callin u a girl, im callin u a small fuck

....nope

ya walled up. . ya existence is a phased karma. .
cuz its always 'till this, 'till that. . like a crazed farmer

Okay, more comedic than it was hard hitting

ur wack & we all know it. . .i charge & beat ya
. . cuz your flow borders on chile like argentina

Eh, okay

you're completely wack. . but we gotta stand ya
u got desperate & built a career outta propaganda

Not feelin that either

u suck, when i read ur battles im most annoyed
ur talentless, wack, AND a fag. .
. . shit you could be the american idol posterboy

Fuck...another blah punch...c'mon Feeb's

Overall: Feeble had a longer verse which allowed him to throw more punches. i'm sorry though...quality over quantity...Mentill at least had 2 dope punches. Feeble's verse was majorly lacking anything truly nice. Didn't come in to this thread expecting to say this...but

Vote ~ Mentill

arrite yo, i'll come dope next week. . . ^