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Jo-JO | 0 | 0% | |
Remixed Illusion | 5 | 100.00% | |
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12-18-03, 01:46 PM | #1 | |
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Jo-JO vs Remixed Illusion
IP: 5F3D 878D
aight here da rules
10 lines u spit first both check in no hate votes no dick ryding votes no 1 line votes explained votes aight good luck hommie... |
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12-18-03, 01:54 PM | #2 | |
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IP: D85C 59A5
now checking in so excuse me as i lyrically vomit
llaksdfkk;;asdifhjhgasdfjaskldd pz and good luck
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12-18-03, 01:55 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 5F3D 878D
k i'll have my verse in by tonite,
............................................. ............................................. dont no show Jo-JO pz |
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12-18-03, 02:12 PM | #4 | |
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IP: D85C 59A5
Im not sure if youve ever been introduced to your self so sit and ponder
At the age of seventeen had more than one foster parent forced to wonder Only parental figure in your stereo typical rich livin, subarb dwelling, spoiled life eminem and now wit a unmeaningful and degrading remix cauzed him strif Now uv been mislead that ur the next eminem only with less skill and more girlie flow You think you can sit up here with my elevation and share in my spot light show You put shame on the white mans heritage I understand why ur remix illusionist Cuz ur under the illusion that you have some sort of high level skill that ur the illest You have little flow experience in textual territory so what if posts close to 140 The only thing you post about is your lazy potato couch ways provin ur a shorty Last rhyme u wrote wasn't even ur own I wonder what parts of my style will be shown Im sorry my mans but seems the waivering illusion you call ur spots ben blown Time for me to leave cuz for sure I will always hold my own
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Let God speak for the underground Psalm 49 16-17 16 Do not be overawed when a man grows rich when the splendor of his house increases 17 For he will take no thing with him when he dies, his splendor will not descend with him 18Though while he lived he counted himself blessed - and men praise you when you prosper- 19 He will join the generation of his fathers, who will never see the light of life 20 A man who has riches without understanding is like the beasts that perish |
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12-18-03, 03:26 PM | #5 | |
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IP: 0E7B 7284
I know we strangers, but u can call me ur jaw re-arranga//
u can hold up both ya middle finga, but in a fight i still tha winna// i'll leave u roasted, like cooked beef, and leave u on tha table like done dinna// so listen up Jo-JO, i'ma bust in slo-mo, i'ma go slow, to bust my flow// it goes to show that i blow hard when flow, feel me when i explode// let my lyrical waves do tha work to erode this ho, like Joe Shmoe// this is fantastic, cuz my lyrics are electricuting u like a 1000w of statik// u need ta practice, cuz my atttack tatiks are wrappin u in plastic// i'm put a new meaning to tha big bang theory when i blow u up// cuz i'm explodin wit punches and chewin u up, i'm goin hard that i bust ya nut// i dont give a fuck, but i'll make this JO glow like ET's finga, so he can go home// look i'm bustin up ya dome, crackin ya cranium, cuz i'm solid like titanium// i sliced this herb like he was a vegetable left him like a handicap, stupid and disabled aight lets get sum votes on this muh'fukka |
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12-18-03, 04:04 PM | #6 | |
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IP: 0E7B 7284
UPPIN 1 lets get sum votes up on this muh'fukka.
.................................................. ................ uppin yo'z .......................................... don sleep on this shit ................... pz |
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12-18-03, 06:43 PM | #7 | |
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IP: 5CC1 C246
Breakdown:
Punches: RI (Close, Jo had some nice Illusion shi') Flow: RI (Jo's too stretched out) Creativity: RI (Titanium line was ill) Vocab: RI (Titanium) Enjoyment: RI (Jo didn' come hard enough) Opener: Niether (Both weak) Closer: Jo-Jo (RI's vegtable diable shi' didn' ryhme) Personals: Definetly Jo-Jo Overall: Remixed Illusion Yo, nice battle propz ta both...ya both need ta elevate wit ya structure 'n punches tho... |
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12-19-03, 06:09 PM | #8 | |
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IP: 5F3D 878D
Thanx hommie Uppin 2 for sum votes on this muh'fukka
UPPIN HOMMIES and don forget to poll vote boiz pz |
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12-19-03, 06:14 PM | #9 |
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IP: 9CEE 7571
Punches: jo jo
Flow: RI Creativity: RI Vocab: RI Enjoyment: RI Opener: RI Closer: Jo-Jo Personals: jo jo |
12-19-03, 06:24 PM | #10 | |
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IP: 51CA DB01
gonna give this battle to the man i like to call...because thats his name illisionist..something...jk breakdown
punches...Not illisoionist- jojo personals...jojo structure..illusionist... flow- Illusionist.. opener-illusionist.. closer-jojo overall - illusionist hit up the link thanx http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...888#post1000888 |
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12-19-03, 06:48 PM | #11 | |
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
I cant vote yet aint got enuf posts so ill jus say hu go my vote.d winner is Remixed Illusion but i have 1 complaint u talk about blowing 2 much.// Peace.// drop a vote on my battle//
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12-20-03, 02:51 PM | #12 | |
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IP: 5F3D 878D
Aight Thanx Hommies, lets get sum more votes in on this muh'fukka. and don forget to poll vote when u post boiz.
UPPIN 3 UPPIN. pz |
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12-20-03, 04:07 PM | #13 | |
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IP: 3F97 46EC
REMIXED ILLUSION:
Opener:JJ(both need work) Flow:RI Punches:RI Structre:Both Closer:RI (same as opener) |
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12-21-03, 08:29 AM | #14 | |
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IP: CDE1 C6EF
RI, I liked your metaphors and multi they were pretty good. Your structure was ok but the closing was kinda weak your flow was alright too.
Jo-Jo your a noob I guess. It was a good effort and the battle was reall close.I liked your flow and structure alot more than RI but your opening and closing were weak. Good job though! Proud of ya! Vote:Remixed Illusion |
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12-21-03, 09:03 AM | #15 |
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IP: 1495 6CD9
Ewwww! @ this battle! Smmfh..
Originality - Neither Flow - illusion Punches - Neither Personals - Neither/both Structure - illusion Multis - illusion VoTe = illusion Coz he had a bit of a flow an the tructure made it easier to follow.. had a few ok multis goin on too.
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