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agiht.i just got no showed 2wice......... u drop first agiht..... u don't look so active.mayube cuz u new but................ once u post i swear i will.i jsut don't feel like wastin a verse again.............
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agiht man

iight i'll go first then... ayo check it..

i'll drop the first verse since dis bitch won't go first/
i'll rip dis man so bad he'll have to see da nurse/
you go to da nurse and you tell her ya feel sick/
dis man said " i don't feel too good... my record is two and six"/
i spit rhymes dawg, people call me da terminator/
ayo ask your mom dawg, she calls me da sperminator/
why was it dat you didn't wanna go first? you scared?/
dats okay, this mans tape line is so fucked up it's layered/
my rhymes is kickin, they'll even break this man's femur/(thighbone)
damn, this man's dick is shorter than an oscar meyer weiner/
people say dat my rhymes are too simple/
while i'm sittin here practicing, this man's popping pimples/
i'll rip dis man wether it be lyrically or metaphorically/
he'll be cryin at home trying to study poetry/
after dis battle, ima study da night-capper/
you make one diss about me , and you'll be another dead rapper/
i'll finish dis man like a mortal kombat fatality/
i just delt you lost number seven, dat is actuality

SICKLY spit like I am cough’ in-on-you spread like I am tosin-the-flu, its Christmas an all i give is these losses-to-you/
snippin-THE-mic this is easier then ~ridin-a-bike~, brain Ima murder u so atleast make this a fight-tongiht/
I'l snatch the paper this cat jottin-ways-to-beat-ma(me), droppin late spottin-ways-to-DE-lay, Ima hurt your head worse than Fathers-day-in-BK/
This like a crime scene an ive been-seen-at-it-last, u gased throat done while im sqeezin-some-cash, BRAIN was rapped an now just bleedin-outta-ya-ass/
BODY torn let-um-die-a-stencil, past failures counted up by-men-killed, Ill burn u, theyll have to identify-by-dentials/
this knockout bottom-line-the-masses, biting is his crime-that-passes, FORMATS wack so i CHATTER all your lines-wit-dashes/
Like I’m Disguised-to-imply, as brain denies was recognized-by-tries, TAKING my computer is the only way he can say he “denied-my-replies”/

jshook got this cos he had beta punches...structure was beta from brian but punches make battles....1

vote-jshook

will ya hit up my battle wiv rule in my sig wiv an honest vote....thanx

nice battle man..

uppin 4 votes

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yea 4 shore nice battle.......................UPPIN for votes.......
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WELP i CAN'T VOTE BUT MY VOTE WOULD GO 2 J-SHOOK, WELP- PEACE SOON I CAN VOTE AND THEN I'LL VOTE ON A SHIT LOAD OF BATTLES BUT MY VOTE WOULD B J-SHOOK

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J shook got this, although - i ddint really like his verse that much. It was structured horribly, the lines were looooooooong and made the flow awful, but he had the better wordplay and punches in this verse, and thats what wins battles.


Vote - J Shook

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agiht... uppin............................................. ...............................
like this we should be able to end tongiht.............................