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Over Your Picture It Says " Im Back...Bitches ", OH I GET IT/
"Bitches" Are the Only Ones Youll Battle,Cuz Your Pathectic/
Well I aint No Bitch , BITCH ,Change That Shit, Your Whack/
Your Like A Retired Pimp, BITCHES DONT CARE IF YOUR BACK/
your Name Is " Ripper " , But You Really Need To Understand/
Ill Rip You Quicker Then A Source Magazine In Eminems Hands/
Your A Big Poser , Just Like A Drunk That Always Talks Sober/
Right Now Your Like A Welcome Mat,Your Gettin Walked Over/
Hate To Ruin Your Plans , But Your Illitarate, Stupid And Dumb/
And As Useless As A Hitchiker Would Be Without His Thumbs/

lolol...You Really Like The Word Bitches..

Oh Lord…Seems Ripper Has Gotta Break The Rules Of Engagement..
Dont Fire Til Fired Upon? Where Ya Punches, There’s Only Wack Statements!
I’ma Be Blunt, We Aint Friends…We Never Were That’s Why There’s Hate Meant..
Let Me Preach Just For A Second, And Yes…I Am Talkin About Ya Placement!
Kid Listen, Ur Flow Falls On Mute Ears Like Deaf Kids Listening To Music
Spit Sick, Then Erect Hits, As If My Dick, Had A Mic Tattooed On It
Give It Up, Kid You’ve Failed...Accept It...Now Im Here To Diss You
& Continue Claimin Ya Ill...Til You Figure Out Ya Homo Gender Issues!
From Barney To Betty, Don't Mind The Rubble From Forced Pressure
Writing? Don't Go Through The Trouble, Save Your Drafts For War Efforts!

Unhighlighted Verse...Hopefully Kids Will Understand ALL Wordplay And Punches..

Nah Man I Used Bitches In First 4 Lines Cuz I Was Mocking Your Lil Thing

And Yo Man Work On Ya Structure

Your Like This

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Try To Do it Like I Did It yo

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Just given ya Tips
Good Verse

Peace


VOTE!

ite,

flow-tie
opener-c-c(nice)
closer-ripp
structure-c-c(ripp - streched)
punches-ripp
personals-tie

overall - ripper close shit tho gd battle,

make sure you hit this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101055 ..thx..........pz

from Crooked i liked

Right Now Your Like A Welcome Mat,Your Gettin Walked Over/

ur punching ideas were nice but not that strong...they werent real punches more like u were bigger urself up

Ripper
Give It Up, Kid You’ve Failed...Accept It...Now Im Here To Diss You
& Continue Claimin Ya Ill...Til You Figure Out Ya Homo Gender Issues!

lol...ripper was better in general...ive never seen his stuff but he seems good and had anice flow thru out 2

vote Ripper

Thanks For The Vote.
Yeh, This Was Like My First Text Battle For Like 4-5 Months.
Nice Verse, Came Better Than I Expected.

Uppin

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Vote- Ripper

Crooked-Comical did have better structure as he pointed out but Ripper had harder punches and sum good sht in der. Espically his finishing line with the barney~betty~rubble thing, that was creative and creative shit is always better than original. so I award my vote to ripper, his verse was just better than Crooked-Comical. Dats my honest opinion.

Vote - Ripper

alright

Im gettin a mod in here

.:k:. vote should not count .. i know for a fact hes dick riding .. he says

personals = tie

K Are you fukin dumb .. my personals were

Over Your Picture It Says " Im Back...Bitches ", OH I GET IT/
"Bitches" Are the Only Ones Youll Battle,Cuz Your Pathectic/
Well I aint No Bitch , BITCH ,Change That Shit, Your Whack/
Your Like A Retired Pimp, BITCHES DONT CARE IF YOUR BACK/


He didnt have any .. and u posted exactly 4 minutes after we finished.. hmmm .... i smell a D/R

flow - tie
opener - crooked
closer - ripper
structure - crooked
punches - ripper
personals - tie

vote - ripper

close battle tbh tho!! good shit from both.....

keep it up............

laterz

L's breakdown

punches - ripper
personals - c c
flow - tie
structure - c c
creativity - ripper
opener - ripper
closer - ripper

OVERALL - ripper

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

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Oh yeah. Drop a vote on this:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...36&pagenumber=2

Sorry bout the freepost

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HARRY R.I.P
1940 - 2002

In Respect