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checkin in you spit 1st


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check.... no... we spit at same time..... both due by 1:45 PM EST....
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Alpha.... ima BEaTyA, cuz you cant compete with me
Im'a knock ya down to 0-3, then drop ya name in my marquee
Your lyrics are behind in times, like the shit put in an attic
And that prolly explains, why your still reppin Stillmatic (his avvy pic)
Even when you shit a hundred posts, ya still be 'New To RB'
Your too elementary, Your game just cant stand with me
Your rhymes just dont stick... like watered down glue...
That explains why theres only one other cat in your crew
Yah your reppin Final Flows.... that shit is very true
Cuz this is the last verse.... thatll eva come outta you

what the hell..... damn no show..... well he checked in so I should still get a win....
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yo im here my bad

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im that type of nigga you talk shit to i blow you up like a beeper//
you damn right STILLMATIC cuz i got heaters to burn you like ether//(nas)
you right its only one nigga i role wit but bitches role through the place//(house)
you keep pics of bitches asses cuz hoes sit on ya face//
you rappin that sweet shit im rappin gangsta and violent//
you cant beet me you keep loosin like you played for the lions//
you aint no dominater nobody neva gon fear ya//
the only thang you dominated in flowin is ya self in the mirror//
youz a fagget yo punch line tickle what the fuck are you gay//
i rip ya eyes out stuff em in yo mouth so you can watch what you say//
niggaz think you whack bitch they wanna hear my flo//
lyrical soldier? nigga you aint no fuckin G.I. Joe

Good Battle... I Enjoyed It
My Vote Goes To: Dominator

It was close though...

Alpha: You lost points with me because you referenced something in his flow.... in the beginning of your flow... which violated the rules of your battle.... Y'all were supposed to spit at the same time. All the same you r shit was good... keep it poppin.

Domainator: Not a domination in my book... but a win nonetheless.

Please return the favor you guys and give an honest vote on my battles... I'd appreciate it.... I'm trying to get them closed out.

breakdown...

ok dominator go this..and heres why
he had better punches..flow was about even and creativity was about even...
even though dom didnt come hard to me..he still came better than alpha....
both need to work on wordplay and harder punchlines..
structure goes to dominator as well
alpha the strecthed lines gotta go...
anywayz...
poll vote=dominator

My bad forgot the links....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101439
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101456

Let me know Honestly what y'all think...

It don't matter if you got a 100votes.... you can Text vote... Just keep it Honest!

Ya this was close but I think Alpha by a bit
casue his punches were jus wittier and funnier to me
Dominator did take the personals
but i also liked alphas flow better

vote: Alpha (barely)
(no hatin)
vote on this .......http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101455

why do it seem like if you aint a new bee then you are a DICK RIDER

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Stop bitchin man.... you spit wayyyyy late you should just be DQed.... plus you dickryded.... w/e...

Drop some vote and leave your link people... ill hit it up

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