im here and ill go first yo....you ready look

I'm here.






Vote on this battle in the meantime folks!!!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101920

Aragorn your too pussy/not enough man to battle men ho
your not a king bitch!just because your a fan of Sacramento!//
infact your too gentle, I will get into your mental and these bullets are like monks the way they rest in your temple//
its simple, putting energy into ryhmes like they solar but this time its too easy to see thats your ryhmes are too greezy!//
your flowz are straight garbage man, just quit your day job and be a garbage man//
were are you man we cant see you in the mist-your flowz are too bitch and belong in the piss listen fucka your the pits!//
like barbecue grills! and holla back faggit when you start to fell real!
and when you start to feel ill dont blame it on me//
you should of practiced instead of playing dragon ball-z//


holla back

waiting for aragorn to come in battle
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hey ya vote and uppin
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Yo.... you awaiting me coming like bitches wait for Pac to come back...
Well wait no more, your laced for sure... tis' a killing don't call it come back
Cause if I came back to this lame... then that be his brain in his lap....
And not a rap that he practiced to copy onto the net!
You ran up upon a vet...with noobie lyrics that stretched...
J Goodz ain't from the hood... he pitch rocks at cops and jets..(profile)
Don't get caught.... your not a threat.. I'm this hot ain't broke a sweat..
Unload it, collapse the tech... J Goodz a killer...Oh yes!
I'm a emcee you can't defeat on the net or in the street...
I'll rip you every time we meet.. shit is sweet... Goodz the San Fran Treat

Ten bars.
Uppin for votes.
Aragorn vs. J Goodz

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this wasn't close....aragorn.....battle talent....

punches- ara
flo- ara
structure- ara
multi-meit- ara
wordplay- none
overall- ara....he just outclassed and dominated in everything....it's pretty apearant...*1*

Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
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Nice battle...
J Goodz verse was fucked up basically due to the structure 'n the fact that some parts didn't rhyme... the monks/temple line stoodout as pretty creative but otherwise it lacked any good personals/punches etc....
Aragons lacked anything standoutish also but still came hard enough to take the battle in most aspects... flow was kinda shaky at times I guess but there were personals in there and it all connected well enough to do damage...
J Goodz just sort out the structure, short n sharp bars, add some decent wordplay to help the flow, it'd improve ya battles by far...

Vote - Aragon

Return the favour - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99923

^Dont lie..
Hardly a nice battle.

J Goodz
It has been said a couple of time..
Switch up your structure..obviously,
This is losin' you votes.
Though thats hardly the problem,
You just lack a battle mentality..
You got some ok lines..nice concepts....
Potential nice punches, but u dont progress..
Word them right..work on it.
Evolve your wordplay & witty punches & personals..
Overall Weak-Ok..

Aragorn
Obviously simple, no more was needed.
You did what u had to do.. ok overall verse..
Some ok punches..& personals..
Like i said, nothin to special but way better,
Then J Goodz verse.
Overall Ok-Average

vote Aragorn

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aragorn=verse was way better liked it and flow was smooth he came and nice punches too

jgoodz=wack didn't really like it he needs to elevate for realz son good battle

but ara took this

vote=ara

vote on this battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102244

really j, you do need to switch up your structure. i cant even read wahat ur saying and what the rhymes are. lol. but when i reach 100, ill come back and vote.