Aight.
Due tonight, before you go to sleep.
10-14 lines.
good luck.

peace

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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

yep...its 4am here lmao...dun mind me if I come whack lol.

checkin in................................................ .................................................. ....................................

[PaYce]
Props to ya Meters. Good Luck. Happy New Years man. (sayin it in advance)
Too Bad luck ain't gonna help ya here.


yo, yo, yo
Ur 14-5...ders a good record dat imma have to dimish,
Just like Maurice Greene did...at the 100m meter finish!
You may think ur ill...but ur scared to face Cannabarz,
If u cant beat a man measured in meters........
......how u guh beat one measured in yards!
Can't handle my cancerous cure...my supplement too strong!
Ur exterminated...my verse makes ya Para-graph-Gone!
Im supplied wit spices...and ur the herb dat im mixin,
I crunch ya rhymes more...than Kentucky Fried chicken!
The Phyciatrists u bother...cuz ur scared of my presence,
I b Causin ya more problems...than a plan from Telus!
Consider urself very lucky...that ur rules were intact,
If u didn't say that we had to do 10-14........
.....I would of broke ya in 9.00 flat!


Holla bak. Some key personals in der. Look deep voters.
Good Luck Meters.

meters....ummmmmm.....u der...???? wat happpend 2 ya verse lol...........................dont leave me standin here lol..............................................

Shut up if your gonna play the fool because silence is fool's gold,
Cat's knockin' at death's door so i pulvarize his face to jello mold!,
First vote i get gonna be Payce, cat's a dickrider if there ever was,
This fag wraps his chops around more meat than an asian does!,
I tipped the balance of your even record with this loss that i gave,
idiot tryin' to get face to face with me with one foot in the grave!,
Selected no avatar like ya presence yet your still fucking boastful?,
Congrats on delivering blows; its kinda like a hooker gone postal!,
You're a dull fuckin kid, ya location should read 'i live at 'wit's end,'
And if time flies ya plummeting 'cause this battles long over friend!

Ahhh, honest votes, blah blah, understand the wordplay, blah blah....yeah.

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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

ite this is how i sore it nice shit yall,

opener-tie(both weak)
closer-meters(this was nice)
flow-payce(just rolled of your tounge more with a nice structure)
structure-payce
punches-meters(close but hit harder)
personals-meters

overall- close shit but meters just gets my vote but close.nice verses all yall.

vote on this now plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102351 ..........thx...............pz

yo come on man plz hit this up as i took the time http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102386 ..........................thx..................... ...................pz

yo man u posted your vote in my battle with eki not bombz?wf?lol...................................... .post it here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102386 ..thx...........................pz

uppin for more votes...only vote if you understand the personals please...lol, obviously he didnt............................................. .................................................. .............................

uppin plzzzz, drop an honest vote and leave a link and i'll drop an honest vote on yours............................................. .................................................. ....................

yeah, yeah, an honest vote and you'll get an honest vote, understand my wordplay and his personals....................

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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

in my opinion meters take this one.
due to....
harder hitting punches
a more complex approach
a more advanced style
wordplay

payce, ur verse was pretty good...u jsut come with that real funny style and its witty and all and i love it in your open mics....it just didnt sound real mean enough for a battle..thats why it didnt hit as hard as meters.

nice battle tho.


my vote: Meters

opener-tie-(both gay as hell)
Closer -meter-(Close but meter barely got this part)
originality-tie-(what can i say)
flow-meter-(just better flow altogether)
Final vote =Meter

good battle keep that shit up meter took this one but you could of had this if you would have came harder payce

HAHA Nice Battle
Payce=lines were hot nice punches and nice flows i like ur setup better just need to get a little better on punches
meter=his verse was hot too i liked the punches i was gonna vote for payce but then reread his verse to make sure and saw funny punches like the hooker u got this cause u had me laughin lmao

vote=meters