10 lines....

check in soon dawg.


no d/r

all votes must be thoroughly explained.

testing 1... 2... 3...



is this thing on?????

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only ten lines to make a victory mine
ill break ya spine with just one line
and still have the time to prevent a crime
you'll never win, so just stop tryin
im flyin all over your head, put you to bed
better try kids only rb instead cause you messed up in the head
some say you better off dead, but i like you alive
so i can perscribe that stop rappin cause we bout to collide
confide in me, im like yo oldest friend
cept i wasnt there in the beginning only the end

Kid just dont have skills in him....you dont got any words to dispense
but now some may beg to differ...i just punched my fist into his chest
Toddisme...jackass...i'll never remember your fucking face, punk
I never got a chance to see it....your head was always buried in my nuts
Just signed up? today...well great--youre merked...but really who's to blame?
I dont usually murder newbs...but i couldnt fucking stand your gay user name
Switched words like an illiterate idiot cuz no one would ever I.M. Todd....
This is the losers first step at being social...signing up to rapbattles.com
Fuck your sig....nobody get even get personal....cuz you've never been heard...
And im insuring you never will faggot...killing you on your day of birth.

Phoeniix takes this overwhelmingly with structure, punches, personals...yeah, the whole package that Todd is too new to understand. Elevate Todd, your rhymes have to be less obvious, more creative. Phoeniix, another good verse.

Drop a vote dawg. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102638

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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

phoenic took everything...he just outclassed this kid...no other way to put it.....todd wasnt overwhelmingly bad but he is a tru newbie.....which is kinda nice insteada all the vets jus changing there names and battling.....makin this site look alot bigger than its loyal 100 battlers max......

my vote- phoenix jus overall much better

Yea...good try todd but Phoeniix just smacked you around silly with his more complex rhymes, punches...He pretty much just took everything. Keep goin Todd...just keep elevating and the wins will follow...

Vote- Phoeniix

Phoeniix take this battle in my opinion just had better punches structure and more complex rhymes..now for Todd you shit was too original and anybody could of used those line in other words they are too played out.No hate Just a Vote

Overall-Phoeniix

Peace

can both of you return the favor and post and honest vote on my battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102534

Thank You. Much Appriciated.
Peace

yo......pheonix destroyed that boy......no dick rydin either.....todd...you need to get more creative with your shyt...understand...pheonix u came nice tho...i will vote soon as i get 100 post....but hey vote on my battles please...make honest votes..