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Aiight son

what the fuck was on your mind when wrote that rap
what possesed you to get slapped
like a porno bitch's ass you get clapped
nigga with that retarded name it's like you never rapped
you's the king but I'm the ace
like rolling two aces your style gets crapped
like the Raptors your style is a piece of shit
like John Lynch my lyrics stay hittin
like the Vikings I suggest you stay quttin
your rhymes gives me stomach aches that's why I stay shittin
You get dropped like busta rhymes dropped Lewd Have Mercy

wow man it is taking you a might long time to write your verse man. I mean hey I never take that long this is suppose to be freewriting am I right because I am new to this shit.

24 years old,and you still work in retail,
you wanna rap new but all you spit is resale,
Weak male, i thought you were a jedi master,
turns out all you r is a LyricalJedi desaster,
I let you catch up,but i speed up even faster,
If you Luke Skywalker then im Darth Vador,
cut off your left arm and singe you below the equartor,
Now in the movies you won,you dun beat the dark side,
in this battle your done,i didn't even touch manual overide.

*24 works in retail
*manual overide is when u take it off cruise conrol(i didn't)

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that was aiight you aiight but hey I think I got this one let the voters decide now this is a short battle so vote people vooooooootttttttttteeeeeeeeeeeee

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lewd merked the fuck outta this nigga. heres why

first off, lewd had better lyrical content, better punches, better multis, better personals..not that there were any really, better everything really.

secondly, lj, you need mad elevation...take a lil' detour to WEC, they'll give you serious help...i'm not sayin that to start shit...i'm bein honest...work on your content, and the above taht lewd HAD in his verse, and you'll be straight. it might suck, but losin can be a good thing...

so with that being said...Lewd gets my vote

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Lewd won by alot......better punches, nice ending man i liked it, good metas, good personals,
Lyrical jedi dont try to sway votes by saying hes taking forever to drop his verse, it only makes u look like an impatient bitch who has nothing better to do than sit around waiting for him to spit.
You seem to have knowledge of sports so use that in your shit, use alot of sports metaphors, speak of what ur good at dont go off talking about "clapped" and shit when ur name is "Jedi"
Opener-lewd
Closer-lewd
Metaphors-lewd
Vote -Lewd
please return the favor without HATE voting

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