Fukn fucked up the first one

10-20 lines
due withing an hour
no haters
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Your RB career is about to be declared dead, before it was ever born
Your defencless , like a rhino without a horn.
me and you are different level , i am supirior class, and your a begginer without the luck
comparing us 2 is as redicules as Dani Davito asking Cindy Crawford for a fuck
You claim your a pimp and a thug, but we all know thats just in text
your only 16, yet to learn what money is, yet to have sex
I left out the thizzle in your name, becaouse it deserves a whole line
You got as much thizzle to you as Little-Madeline
Am gonna make the last line a killer , pleasurable, rather ill
you looking for victory here is as stupid as a man taking a pregnency pill.

What the hell kind of a name is Eki
yo mom musta been some druged up new age techie

and check your english man i cant even read your shit
or is it that hard to pull away from another hit

and what the fuck, u say im only 16
Bitch your only 20, u ball-lickin drag queen

your the last to be talkin about me havin no horn
check youself asswipe, your only 3 and four

man you wish you were a thug with shit as hot as me
and i dont mean your gonorrhea, when it burns as you pee

and check the spellin bitch, you know my shit is tight
your a lost cause, no way u can win this fight

Ok.....
The "Your mom" jokes are gay as fuck
It will ruin a verse..............................
My vote goes to Eki......
His shit was actually less played........
Overall it was pretty weak for a battle
But need to come harder with
Punches, Wordplay, Vocab, and Structure

VOTE- EKI

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102826

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My vote goes out to Eki his punches just hit harder and where more consistent then PimpThugGThizzle's .... PimpThugGThizzle some of your line were played and just sucked i really wasnt feeling you verse.. no hate just a vote

Overall-Eki

Peace

Can both of you please return the favor and vote honestly on my battle... i took the time you should too

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102839

Thank You . Much Appriciated
Peace

i would but i cant... not enough posts


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i thought Eki took this
he had unplayed punches
an personals
aite battle
the newb is wak

eki took this battle of the hands
no contest..
good shitu inproving

when u wanna battle me

VOte- Eki

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102857

%^^ peep either this battle or my battle wit a cat thats 7-0

pc

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EKI

Your RB career is about to be declared dead, before it was ever born
Your defencless , like a rhino without a horn.
first line abit stretched... nice concept tho... 6/10
me and you are different level , i am supirior class, and your a begginer without the luck
comparing us 2 is as redicules as Dani Davito asking Cindy Crawford for a fuck
funny, a s'pose... werent feelin it really... 5/10
You claim your a pimp and a thug, but we all know thats just in text
your only 16, yet to learn what money is, yet to have sex
lol... take that PIMP... 7/10
I left out the thizzle in your name, becaouse it deserves a whole line
You got as much thizzle to you as Little-Madeline
not bad... 5/10
Am gonna make the last line a killer , pleasurable, rather ill
you looking for victory here is as stupid as a man taking a pregnency pill.
lmao... funny shit... liked that... nice closer... 8/10

overall... 31/50


PIMP

What the hell kind of a name is Eki
yo mom musta been some druged up new age techie
weak opener... not a good punch... 4/10
and check your english man i cant even read your shit
or is it that hard to pull away from another hit
what the fuck? 0/10
and what the fuck, u say im only 16
Bitch your only 20, u ball-lickin drag queen
dont even class as a punch tbh... a weak ass diss... 2/10
your the last to be talkin about me havin no horn
check youself asswipe, your only 3 and four
please, stop biting... weak punch again... 3/10
man you wish you were a thug with shit as hot as me
and i dont mean your gonorrhea, when it burns as you pee
not bad, best line so far seein as the rest were wack... 5/10
and check the spellin bitch, you know my shit is tight
your a lost cause, no way u can win this fight
wack closer... 3/10

overall... 17/60

vote - Eki

UPPIN3 Comeon people.. vote! illl return the fevour if you drop a link.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....

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Decent Opener.

Okay.

Good Personal Punch.

Don't Understand.

Horrible Closer. Probably The Most Important Line In Battle And This Was Close To Your Worst. You Need To Read Tutorials In Wackness Emergency Center And I Look Forward To Seeing Your Elevated Progress.


Worst Opener Ever.

Decent Punch. Makes Sense.

Whack.

Ok Punch. Sorta Personal.

Entertaining. Your Best Punch.

Decent Closer. Same Advice As I Gave Eki...Hit Up WEC And Check Out The Tutorials, Get Some Advice From Vets And Elevate.

This Battle Was Whack By RB Standards But Close In Competition.

Vote:PimpThugGThizzle...You Both Had Whack Verses But You Had That Extra Lean In Punch And Closer Was Better.

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Battles
Pink Slips 007 Pt. 2

Eki took this one, lines were less played , harder punches, better structure..... and all around better verse, PTGT you need to elevate, no hate meant just keep battling and you will get there..... Vote: EKI

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...41&pagenumber=2
can you all hit this up honestly...its being slept

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