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01-01-04, 12:19 PM

SmokaJoka.

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Xtreme Diagnosis vs. CarsonJetX2

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10 lines max
no dickryde/hate/crew/fan votes
no recycling or biting
both verses are due anytime before midnight tomorrow

peace

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01-01-04, 01:32 PM

The Jett

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checked in..........................................
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01-01-04, 05:29 PM

The Jett

Im Short.Ur Fat.He's Gay.

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hey folks don't choke..Diagnose?...i simply smoke'd da joke(smokajoka666)
U think your dope? u'r from E-dub? on the net wit 1200 posts?
u jus a hoax-share'n intrest in big breast like trailor incest(profile)
Spit's Ron Artest'I drop an leave xtreme wit no need for crest(tooth-paste)
Get the jist bitch? the IJL's fulla nuttin but wannabe femcee's(crew)
Wit stitched up knees pre-heated from carpet's at sky-high degree's
Ya other member UnderRated'learned of merk. X-..now its ur turn
Fuk urn's this Jet don't burn.I stick in L's like i'm ur epiderm(skin)
I let em squirm...this kids done-xtreme u can even drop in plural
It doesn't matter much...Ko'd in daylight-u'd think he was nocturnal

01-02-04, 01:57 AM

SmokaJoka.

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His Sig Says He's The Supreme Emcee, Yeah...That's His Belief..
The Day U Become..............^That^, I'll See XL4REAL In The Elite..
Ur Old Carsonjet Name Was Wack With A Wack Record Kid..
Just Retire, U Got Outta Date Rhymes Like The Plane In Ya Sig..
Only Time Carson Backs Up Beef Is Pushing A Shopping Cart..
E.R. Is His Only Charts, Ur Biting Punches Like Boxing Sharks..
Take Blastings, I'm Swinging Like The Directions On Ur Tab Key..
The Best In That Crew Collab, I Read Ur Verse And Started Laughing..
Remember Don't U?? I Do, U Was Declared Wackest Of The Crew..
To Bad I Didnt Choose A Name Like U, I'd KO And Up My Wins Times Two..

peace

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01-02-04, 02:09 AM

Brendan

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Well I can't vote so this doesn't really matter....

Very tight battle.

"Only Time Carson Backs Up Beef Is Pushing A Shopping Cart.."

Great line.

I have to give the battle to Xtreme because a lot of Carson's stuff just didn't make sense to me. Maybe I'm missing something but I don't think so. I think the explanations are a little unnecessary btw... but then again I've seen some of the people who post here so who knows

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103093

01-02-04, 03:06 AM

Ambitious

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wow.....was expecting a closer battle here......but smoke just ripped carson......
his punches hit alot harder and the personals came across and smacked him in the face.......much more degrading than carson's lines.........flow was good from both.....struct good from both but overall i say Xtreme flat out ripped'em........nice battle boys

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01-02-04, 03:15 AM

Straight Ace

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CarsonJetX2
I simply expected more..
You had some ok punches..for an ok battle,
But u did not include the personals..to,
-What later on proved to be true- Xtreme's anger.
The flow & structure where on point..
Wordplay was there.. punches did not hit hard..enough.
Overall Ok.

Xtreme Diagnosis
Personals..
Started of well, funny openin' bar..
Your flow was shakey at points..But you totally,
Made up for it with your personals..
Instead of packin a bunch of random punches..
You basically assaulted Carson & did everything,
To degrade not just him..but his image aswell.
To my believes.. you as many would say 'ripped him'.
Overall Good.

vote Xtreme Diagnosis

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battle & Return the favour...

01-02-04, 03:17 AM

~LyRiCaL-JeZuS~

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Ya xtreme got this I felt,his punches were better and thats what counts really
strucutre and flow was both tight
multies avarege

vote : xtreme

vote on this plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103093

01-02-04, 03:33 AM

whitelightning

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Good Punches. Solid Opener.

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Originally posted by CarsonJetX2
Spit's Ron Artest'I drop an leave xtreme wit no need for crest(tooth-paste)
Get the jist bitch? the IJL's fulla nuttin but wannabe femcee's(crew)
Wit stitched up knees pre-heated from carpet's at sky-high degree's

LOL. 3 Good Punches.

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Originally posted by CarsonJetX2
Ya other member UnderRated'learned of merk. X-..now its ur turn
Fuk urn's this Jet don't burn.I stick in L's like i'm ur epiderm(skin)

Choppy Flow. Decent Punch.

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Originally posted by CarsonJetX2
I let em squirm...this kids done-xtreme u can even drop in plural
It doesn't matter much...Ko'd in daylight-u'd think he was nocturnal

Great Closer. Solid Verse. Good Job Jet.Your Scheme Is Bizzare But Somethin Fresh. I Think You Could Work On It And Improve It For Your Benefit.

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Originally posted by Xtreme Diagnosis
His Sig Says He's The Supreme Emcee, Yeah...That's His Belief..
The Day U Become..............^That^, I'll See XL4REAL In The Elite..

Dope Personal To Start This Battle.[b]

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Originally posted by Xtreme Diagnosis
Ur Old Carsonjet Name Was Wack With A Wack Record Kid..
Just Retire, U Got Outta Date Rhymes Like The Plane In Ya Sig..

[b] Good Job. Double Shot.

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Originally posted by Xtreme Diagnosis
Only Time Carson Backs Up Beef Is Pushing A Shopping Cart..
E.R. Is His Only Charts, Ur Biting Punches Like Boxing Sharks..

If I Were Carson..I would be

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Originally posted by Xtreme Diagnosis
Take Blastings, I'm Swinging Like The Directions On Ur Tab Key..
The Best In That Crew Collab, I Read Ur Verse And Started Laughing..

Ouch. Personal And Punches Just Keep Coming...

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Originally posted by Xtreme Diagnosis
Remember Don't U?? I Do, U Was Declared Wackest Of The Crew..
To Bad I Didnt Choose A Name Like U, I'd KO And Up My Wins Times Two..

Good Closer. Great Verse. Punches Were Everywhere And Solidly Delivered.

Carson You Had A Decent Verse As Well, But You Took It Dryer Than These Dudes

Vote: Xtreme Diagnosis.

Hit Up My Open Mic's In My Sig.

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01-02-04, 03:41 AM

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SmokaJoka.

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i didn't vote on lyrical jezuz's battle because he lost..lol....i don't think he wants me to poll that...i'll just let it happen naturally^^and to whitelightning i will check ur open mics soon....cuz i give really in depth breakdowns for open mics....so it will be a bit....lol

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01-02-04, 07:18 AM

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Originally posted by CarsonJetX2
hey folks don't choke..Diagnose?...i simply smoke'd da joke(smokajoka666)
U think your dope? u'r from E-dub? on the net wit 1200 posts?
u jus a hoax-share'n intrest in big breast like trailor incest(profile)
Spit's Ron Artest'I drop an leave xtreme wit no need for crest(tooth-paste)

these 2 bars sucked to me..they was wayyyy too simple..multis were there..6/10

Get the jist bitch? the IJL's fulla nuttin but wannabe femcee's(crew)
Wit stitched up knees pre-heated from carpet's at sky-high degree's
Ya other member UnderRated'learned of merk. X-..now its ur turn
Fuk urn's this Jet don't burn.I stick in L's like i'm ur epiderm(skin)

the first bar was nice....the second...not so nice...I didnt get the stick in L's like epiderm line....7/10

I let em squirm...this kids done-xtreme u can even drop in plural
It doesn't matter much...Ko'd in daylight-u'd think he was nocturnal

this bar was weak weak weak..I give it a 5/10..

carson..a 18/30..not so good

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Originally posted by Xtreme Diagnosis
His Sig Says He's The Supreme Emcee, Yeah...That's His Belief..
The Day U Become..............^That^, I'll See XL4REAL In The Elite..
Ur Old Carsonjet Name Was Wack With A Wack Record Kid..
Just Retire, U Got Outta Date Rhymes Like The Plane In Ya Sig..

All good..personals..and a play off his sig..even I contributed to his wack record....8/10

Only Time Carson Backs Up Beef Is Pushing A Shopping Cart..
E.R. Is His Only Charts, Ur Biting Punches Like Boxing Sharks..
Take Blastings, I'm Swinging Like The Directions On Ur Tab Key..
The Best In That Crew Collab, I Read Ur Verse And Started Laughing..

lmao..I actually looked down at my tab key when I read that..everything was great abot these 2 bars..it was perfect..10/10

Remember Don't U?? I Do, U Was Declared Wackest Of The Crew..
To Bad I Didnt Choose A Name Like U, I'd KO And Up My Wins Times Two..

hmmm..the weakest in your verse..not good..a 5/10

a 23/30..thats great

..X gets my vote..peace out..

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