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| The Deception |
  
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1 | 16.67% |
| Spekta |
  
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5 | 83.33% |
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01-02-04, 10:31 AM
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Spekta VS The Deception
IP: 29E3 BDD7
10-14 lines (5-7 Bars)
No D/R No Feeding, biting, pre-writtens...etc All that shit. first to 5 votes wins Due 15 mins after check in. Check in first. |
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01-02-04, 10:32 AM
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IP: C115 DFD7
there is a new 10 line max for the battles now I jus read so I'll drop 10 lines and so do you....Check In I'll drop in 15 minutes no doubt....
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01-02-04, 10:34 AM
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IP: 29E3 BDD7
aight, check'n in. g'luck. I'll post within 15 mins.
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01-02-04, 10:34 AM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 0471 C22A
its 10 line minimum dog. so u can post however many lines u guys decide on posting. sorry for the free-post. just explaining rules
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01-02-04, 10:41 AM
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IP: 29E3 BDD7
~Opener~
I'll smash that damn gash that you use for a mouth Thought it was a pussy the way shit just 'oozes' out ~Warm-Upz~ I'm smashin ya spine, killin' ya life 'support' doin' what your mom should have done wit' you -abort `n shorten ya life span into non-existence the way you swallow tha cock, you need no assistance resistance to pain from my words can't happen Don't you hear everyone beggin' you "PLEASE, stop rappin'!!" I slapped ya little pussy- ya mouth fulla nut these lines filled you up like dick to 'little-teen-sluts' ~Skull Crusha (Finisher)~ You lost control in this battle like I snatched tha remote Got treated like inmates -you just dropped tha soap... blah blah -just a quick keystyle. oh, there's 12 lines, so go 'head and hit 12 too. |
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01-02-04, 10:52 AM
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IP: C115 DFD7
I spit-scripts, to RIP-kids, and your jus a new ASS-HOLE...
RELIGIOUS?Wit my SHOE ON YOUR CHEST,your jus the LAST SOLE UP LIFT this kid, fuck his avy he still can't be FLY... 1-3? Joined in NOV? Damn I'm still wonderin why. Slap you WIT MY DICK, get a SENSE OF MAN HOOD... Like BLIND BOXERS, your punches don't LAND GOOD... Keystyles? How?Morbid minds I'm the Locksmith... Like Math?Well I can predict your battle record,soon to be 1 fith(5) U Rap?It's hard to take you serious like B Rad... Best respect YOUR ELDERS, even if I'm NOT ROCKIN PLAID. Yea jus a keystyl good luck fam |
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01-02-04, 10:57 AM
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Mona Lisa.
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IP: 9E53 07A2
both had rite idea but...
BREAKDOWN- structure-Spek flow-...... punches-spek personals-.... wordplay-Deception sustainment-None enjoyment-both overall-Spekta both----dont use capitals to highlight shit and dont use shit like Warm Up...n Finisher etc to signal beginnings and harder punches MAKE SURE YA'LL HIT THIS UP PLZ..BEING SLEPT ON PZ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102236
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01-02-04, 11:01 AM
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IP: C115 DFD7
1-0 still uppin this battle thanks for the votin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......
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01-02-04, 01:41 PM
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IP: 29E3 BDD7
Ayo, hit this up wit' an honest vote, and I'll return tha favor on any links posted.
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01-02-04, 03:34 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: C1DA C961
spekta got this wit better punches abnd flow but yea dont use trhat warm-up stuff juss spi ur verse.Deception u verse was ight but your punches didnt hit hard and u need to quit usin capitals and boldi your words,u also need to work on rhymuin better.
Vote:spekta |
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01-03-04, 06:33 AM
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IP: 29E3 BDD7
Thanx for tha vote.........................................
2-0 me .................................................. ........ UPPIN!!!! |
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01-03-04, 08:00 AM
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Poetic Justice
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IP: F6C3 5606
Spekta get this one cause he came way stronger than deception
He had a desent opener and stayed strong and the finish was funny as hell I liked that one Over all Speckta's punches were more creative I just wasent fealing ya verse deception I would vote if I could but just giving feedback so you dont get slept on Do me the samn in my battle with $treet Thug thanks |
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01-03-04, 12:34 PM
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IP: 29E3 BDD7
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Hit this up and I'll drop an honest vote on any links left. |
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01-03-04, 12:45 PM
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IP: BA2E C589
Spekta took this one in my opinion.
Punches - close but Septka is a little ahead. Some of Deceptions shit was weak..like that thing about math. Creativity - tie wordplay... Deception edged out in this category but there wasn't that much in this battle anyway overall impact - spekta verse just seemed a little harder to me overall when looking at it as a whole http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103093 |
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01-03-04, 12:48 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 1B3B C284
---spektas verse
~Opener~ I'll smash that damn gash that you use for a mouth Thought it was a pussy the way shit just 'oozes' out lol...good pounch funny opener ~Warm-Upz~ I'm smashin ya spine, killin' ya life 'support' doin' what your mom should have done wit' you -abort `n shorten ya life span into non-existence the way you swallow tha cock, you need no assistance resistance to pain from my words can't happen Don't you hear everyone beggin' you "PLEASE, stop rappin'!!" I slapped ya little pussy- ya mouth fulla nut these lines filled you up like dick to 'little-teen-sluts' pounches, metas, wordplay overall a very stronge verse ~Skull Crusha (Finisher)~ You lost control in this battle like I snatched tha remote Got treated like inmates -you just dropped tha soap... still laughing strong pounchs wordplay good structure itt flowed right ---the deception verse I spit-scripts, to RIP-kids, and your jus a new ASS-HOLE... RELIGIOUS?Wit my SHOE ON YOUR CHEST,your jus the LAST SOLE good wordplay UP LIFT this kid, fuck his avy he still can't be FLY... 1-3? Joined in NOV? Damn I'm still wonderin why. Slap you WIT MY DICK, get a SENSE OF MAN HOOD... Like BLIND BOXERS, your punches don't LAND GOOD... Keystyles? How?Morbid minds I'm the Locksmith... Like Math?Well I can predict your battle record,soon to be 1 fith(5) pretty weak verse nuthing really stood out you came pretty soft U Rap?It's hard to take you serious like B Rad... Best respect YOUR ELDERS, even if I'm NOT ROCKIN PLAID. weak closer -----------my vote-- spekta for better verse,pouches, metas, wordplay,structure,floe,opener,and closer vote on my battle in sig i took the time --------deception lol delete that win your sig dawg lol---- no hate jus a honest vote peace |
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