10-12
blindspits...
20-30
no crew/hate/dr/
checkin when ready....

um uppin this so he can find it i gues,............................................. .................................................. .......that better not count towards my 5

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10-12 lines right??

yea i guess..................................damn you took a long time.............................................. .................................................. ...............

you comin softer than satin pillows while i'm just tryin to relax..
smoke you worse than your avy then puff puff pass...
i'll kick you between the polls like i'm in the NFL...
your record like old people can't get up after it fell...
i'll burn you with acid cause its coarsin through my viens...
teach you lessons of life like you a fag kid on growin pains...
like glocks to knots i'll up and leave your mind blown..
so stupid you tryed to battle on O mega and not a microphone..
RE finishin this kid like he was a piece of fine furinture...
like in a mexican standoff i had to bust first to murder ya....

if this is a "work" out , ill just have to rely on "test"
no need for name calling, ya avy describes you best,
just 2 oozies, and a clip "instated",
then burry you at the movies, Now your really "Under-Rated",,
your a lyricist? you either insane, or jokin,
You'd still lose this battle, if all 5 of ya aliases were votin,
Now, the next bed ya gonna lie in is where the "coronors work",
cuz after this battle, ya record BACKWORDS WONT be same place those "foreigners work",
But that aint sayin much, it dont take a "pyschic,"
Cuz in ya crew ya like karate moves, ya just a "side kick",
so, sign off the net, get a life, now that might work...
cuz you know your a loser, when a VIRUS could end ya lifes work....

postman took this...

more personals that were better perfected as a diss, His punches were much better and the way he worded his verse was all better, just don't like the foriegners work line, other than that...he dominated Underated in those catergories acdept structure...which Underated clearly had flow and structure. other than that..Postman robs all the rest.

vote - Postman

vote on this battle in return.

Cannabarz vs Freakyjay

he forgot to poll but lets get some more votes...good battle very nice verse i assume you mostly do audio which is fine..............................uppin X111111..........................

UNDERATED

you comin softer than satin pillows while i'm just tryin to relax..
smoke you worse than your avy then puff puff pass...

Good Personal - 5/10

i'll kick you between the polls like i'm in the NFL...
your record like old people can't get up after it fell...

Blah .. alright Punch 6/10

i'll burn you with acid cause its coarsin through my viens...
teach you lessons of life like you a fag kid on growin pains...

Da Da Da - 5/10

like glocks to knots i'll up and leave your mind blown..
so stupid you tryed to battle on O mega and not a microphone..

Sik ... 7/10

RE finishin this kid like he was a piece of fine furinture...
like in a mexican standoff i had to bust first to murder ya....

good first line .. then second line was weak .. should have did it other way around ...

Overal - 6/10


POSTMAN

if this is a "work" out , ill just have to rely on "test"
no need for name calling, ya avy describes you best,

Personal - 5/10

just 2 oozies, and a clip "instated",
then burry you at the movies, Now your really "Under-Rated",,

Holy Bad Structure .... and punch didnt make sence 2/10

your a lyricist? you either insane, or jokin,
You'd still lose this battle, if all 5 of ya aliases were votin,

Creativity at its finest ... 8/10

Now, the next bed ya gonna lie in is where the "coronors work",
cuz after this battle, ya record BACKWORDS WONT be same place
those "foreigners work",

yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa .... 4/10

But that aint sayin much, it dont take a "pyschic,"
Cuz in ya crew ya like karate moves, ya just a "side kick",

Creative .. sik ... 6.5/10

so, sign off the net, get a life, now that might work...
cuz you know your a loser, when a VIRUS could end ya lifes work....

True ... 6/10


Overal 5.5/10

Vote = Underated

^mannnnnnnnnnnnn do i have to hold your hand idiot.

PLEASE DO NOT VOTE IF YOU CANNOT UNDERSTAND PUNCHES

If you are burried under a movie theater, your underrated as in underground but you under the theater which has rates like "rated pg", yawns fuck it you dumb.

Sorry, my bad...thanx for PM'ing me Post...

1ne............................................... .................................................. .....................

^^^

the Fact That You had To use 3 Lines to Explain A Metaphor Speaks For Itself

Peace

postman had hotter punchlines...underated for a reason.....
elevate.......better metas and flow for post, creative - tie...
vocab and complexity i guess underated personals post

overall - post

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theunderated verse

you comin softer than satin pillows while i'm just tryin to relax..
smoke you worse than your avy then puff puff pass...

good opener nuthing really strong though

i'll kick you between the polls like i'm in the NFL...
your record like old people can't get up after it fell...

weak pounch and personal

i'll burn you with acid cause its coarsin through my viens...
teach you lessons of life like you a fag kid on growin pains...

lol...ok verse good meta

like glocks to knots i'll up and leave your mind blown..
so stupid you tryed to battle on O mega and not a microphone..

lol good pounch

RE finishin this kid like he was a piece of fine furinture...
like in a mexican standoff i had to bust first to murder ya....

good closer

overall nuthing really strong in this verse good pounches and metas good flow and structre

postmans verse

if this is a "work" out , ill just have to rely on "test"
no need for name calling, ya avy describes you best,

better opener

just 2 oozies, and a clip "instated",
then burry you at the movies, Now your really "Under-Rated",,

lol...pounche aand personal was stronge

your a lyricist? you either insane, or jokin,
You'd still lose this battle, if all 5 of ya aliases were votin,

pounch was hard

Now, the next bed ya gonna lie in is where the "coronors work",
cuz after this battle, ya record BACKWORDS WONT be same place those "foreigners work",

pounch wordplay personal

But that aint sayin much, it dont take a "pyschic,"
Cuz in ya crew ya like karate moves, ya just a "side kick",

lol...personal and pounch

so, sign off the net, get a life, now that might work...
cuz you know your a loser, when a VIRUS could end ya lifes work....

ok closer

---postman is my vote---
for better pounchs and personal came on really strong
also better wordplay


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