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TaxBack 0 0%
Tek 5 100.00%
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Old 01-04-04, 08:58 AM   #1
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TaxBack vs Tek

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10-20 lines

due in approx 1hr from check in

No feedin

I'll prob post first but dont matter who does

Bring some heat young pup..
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Old 01-04-04, 08:59 AM   #2
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check in .................................................. .......... I'll drop before the 1 hour
 
Old 01-04-04, 09:39 AM   #3
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Round 2..

Posting whackness is ur Instrumental failure, like a bad sound from a flute...
Ur iller than me ? i'm doubtin the proof.. u got less Chants (chance) than a football crowd full of Mutes...1
The outcome of this battle could be a caucasion in a bathtub and you still can't get a white wash...
You're about as ill as a slight-cough plus your style is badly played out like a game of pictionary with the lights off...2
Faggot's like a Scared Judge cause he's always weak with a Sentence...
My heat is immense.. like Charity cases ur TaxBack is my 2cents.. 3
Want revenge? Even a blind kid can See the difference with no Eyes...
This herb lies, once he went to work in mcdonalds wit a cold and that was the only time he was ill and served guys,Lmfao...4
Wait a minute, let me clear this up.. afta this u gettin no Props, like the Theatre's shut...
It Appears You're Fucked... I already Raped your Name Once,But you came back for more Like a Fearless Slut... 5
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Old 01-04-04, 09:46 AM   #4
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okay i'm postin in 12 minutes .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .... or less
 
Old 01-04-04, 09:49 AM   #5
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thas coo.. take ur time kiddo..

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Old 01-04-04, 09:59 AM   #6
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TaxBack vs Tek

You want to rap in french so that's why you put my tracks on repeat//
Fuck, you need to retreat cuz vs me you ain't winning even if you made a feat with phat beats//
You've got scrapped beats, rappin with no flow, all the time your no-show//
You need to glow cuz nobody knows you, the only time we see you, is when you buy a trio at McDo//
Your gonna be illuminated, you will flash like a rainbow, cuz now your stuck in my lite brite//
Ya think this will be a tight fight ???? haha muthafuckah you have no chances and no rights to win this fight//
Aight !!!you see this is my victory i've come to kick your ass for free//
Newbie ain't able to make punchlines in front lines , haha your a wack you see ??? //
Yo it,s like a battle on the boat, your seasick, you got eat dicks//

so that,s all men lt the votes tell us who will win
 
Old 01-04-04, 10:27 AM   #7
KaYNe
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Taxback, i thought the flow was choppy at times, but you came with some you came with some good punches and personals. Your metas were pretty nice & you had some ok wordplay. It was nothing special, but easily above average.

Tek, i thought you came with it & brought heat. Your flow was also a little choppy at times, but you wordplay & metas were tight, as were your punches. You also had some nice multis and personals.


Vote: Tek




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Old 01-04-04, 10:34 AM   #8
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Appreciate the breakdown mayn.. i'll follow ur link later..


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Old 01-04-04, 10:36 AM   #9
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yep nice vote man , uppin we need more votes .................................................. .................................................. .......................
 
Old 01-04-04, 10:39 AM   #10
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Posting whackness is ur Instrumental failure, like a bad sound from a flute...
Ur iller than me ? i'm doubtin the proof.. u got less Chants (chance) than a football crowd full of Mutes...1
^^^good wordplay, decent punch.
The outcome of this battle could be a caucasion in a bathtub and you still can't get a white wash...
^^^lol, nice punch/wordplay
You're about as ill as a slight-cough plus your style is badly played out like a game of pictionary with the lights off...2
^^^eh...pretty weak punch.
Faggot's like a Scared Judge cause he's always weak with a Sentence...
My heat is immense.. like Charity cases ur TaxBack is my 2cents.. 3
^^^good wordplay, good punch.
Want revenge? Even a blind kid can See the difference with no Eyes...
This herb lies, once he went to work in mcdonalds wit a cold and that was the only time he was ill and served guys,Lmfao...4
^^^lol...overused sick joke, but still a good punch.
Wait a minute, let me clear this up.. afta this u gettin no Props, like the Theatre's shut...
It Appears You're Fucked... I already Raped your Name Once,But you came back for more Like a Fearless Slut... 5
^^^weak closer.


You want to rap in french so that's why you put my tracks on repeat//
Fuck, you need to retreat cuz vs me you ain't winning even if you made a feat with phat beats//
^^^what the fuck is that french shit? weak.
You've got scrapped beats, rappin with no flow, all the time your no-show//
You need to glow cuz nobody knows you, the only time we see you, is when you buy a trio at McDo//
^^^tried to remake his mdonalds joke...you did worse, weak.
Your gonna be illuminated, you will flash like a rainbow, cuz now your stuck in my lite brite//
Ya think this will be a tight fight ???? haha muthafuckah you have no chances and no rights to win this fight//
^^^first lines were ok wordplay...but overall a weak punch.
Aight !!!you see this is my victory i've come to kick your ass for free//
Newbie ain't able to make punchlines in front lines , haha your a wack you see ??? //
^^^....weak
Yo it,s like a battle on the boat, your seasick, you got eat dicks//
^^^bad closer. doesnt make sense.



vote: tek
 
Old 01-04-04, 11:06 AM   #11
Daven Motion
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Vote= Tek

Eh both of you need to shorten your structure but im giving this to tek because he had hard hitting punchs the other guy taxback some of his lines were played like Mcdo & dint really flow well it was an iight battle but tek came harder.
 
Old 01-04-04, 11:07 AM   #12
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Tek - Vote

He Had Some Pretty Nice Punchlines Throughout His Verse..He Stayed With A Concitent Flow Through Out His Verse Which Made Him ALso Win The Battle..Taxback's Verse Was Horribly Wack..Didn't Have Any Flow..Multies..Punchlines Or Anything..So My Vote Goes To Tek For Better Punchlines And Nice Flow...
 
Old 01-04-04, 11:10 AM   #13
Eki
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Tek took this. Hes punches were strong and he had a nice flow. I didnt like the sturcture,,, the lines were a bit over streched. But he came the better

vote - Tek
 
Old 01-04-04, 11:17 AM   #14
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Vote = Tek

Tek had hard punches with ok flow. You needa work on ya structure tek. it was stretched. You had ok wordplay.

Tax, yyou need fix your verse. Structure flow, and put punches

vote tek

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