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No d/r, crew, hate, unexplained, unofficial (that means under 100 posts dont count), or bullshit votes

You spit after you check in.

Checking in.....

you ready here i go
ready to battle checkin in
let me know when to start
b.r hustla check it
a phresh pussy you there

yea yea im here dog. start your keying and spit it. ima start mine right now too..........................100chars

wettin niggas up spit rhymes like flames
lyrical death threats busting back splitting niggaz brains
presh you claim you hard you pussy in my book
saying you stunting getting money 1second is all it took
for me to cock it reload and bust on you nigga
aiming really quickly busting back and pullind triggas
so step up and watch it rain the nigga from the south
rap better get good and pop the titi out your mouth

not bad... but heres my spit:

I'll put "Steel To Yah Temple"(steal) like *Jewish Theifs*!! forget god, u just found-yah-maker /
im too creative for you, ill simply leave hustla's 'Heart On The Ground' like |Proud Landscapers|!! //
Watch my shots 'Fill In Blank' like *Multiple Choice Exams*!! crab i just had-tah-beat-yah /
yuh lucks run out, give up and leave, or watch phresh's hits "Remove hustla" like |Manner Teachers|!! //
Call me "The Referee" cause in this one i 'Control-Bouts'!! i even predicted this fag-would-fall-out /
yah chances are slim, trust me, ill leave yah "Pretending Like This Didnt Exist" like an |Lazy Callout|!! //
Shots like 'A Mountain Over A Mole Hill' they make yah 'Lose-Purpose'!! does the truth-hurt-yah /
watch this battle remove any fans you had, Phresh'll leave yah "Losing Waves" like |New Surfers|!! //
Ill act like "Great Defense Attourney's" and *Kill Yah Assualt*!! huge attacks work-yah-concepts /
you must be joking, its so obvious ill have people "Hating b.r. hustla" like fucking |Stupid Topics|!! //
I love to "Punch Bounced Checks" and leave yah *Smacked-Null*!! chump yah pussy acts-dulled /
i remove you from the top, cause ill simply leave yah at the "Back Of The Pack" like |Fat Wolves|!! //
Just hang it up son, and forget punches, mear threats-end-this-man, ill make this fake veteran-defend /
ya champ days ended, cause like "Two Term Presidents Re-Running" its something youll 'Never Get Again'!! //

ehh... this was kinda shitty, but hes new so i gave em a shitty one. lol

Explanationz:
None...

uppin this shit for votes... UUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNN###### #######111111111111111

rap was killin cuz i aint gone hate son
i lose i lose but ill battle you again 4sho
a wher the votes people we need some
ggod battle pimp but i rain

where the votes people we need some
vote vote vote vote vote vote sombody
anybody gone vote on this shit

br hustla was pretty weak. just too short, not any decent punches.

phresh was alright...not a lot there, there was some ok wordplay, and a couple ok punches. structure was weird tho.

vote: phresh.

i spend time on your battles, spend time on mine

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...threadid=102139

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...threadid=101943

yea. im trying to fix my structure but i cant find a good one for me, but i will. well, thanx for the vote 1-0 me. still uppin

aight. this is my third time uppin. dont be sleeping on this battle guys. come on and let the votes fly in.

Phresh= You had ok punches and bad structure with bad flow. you had nice wordplay and vocab wasnt quite there. ok creativity and ok verse overall

Hustla= Battle newbies...u lacked punches and a lot better of structure. better flow also. ok wordplay and same as phresh with the vocab. you had weak creativity and ehh verse overall

Breakdown

punches= p
flow= h
creativity= p
vocab= tie
structure= h
wordplay= p
overall vote= p

EVERYONE HIT THIS UP WITH AN HONEST VOTE PLEASE!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103399

aight. 2-0. its still my lead. and thisn is my third time uppin. uppin #3!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

uppin #4, stop sleeping on this.............................................. .......................

This is your LAST upping, any post after both verses are dropped is considered an upp. - Token