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HotBarz 0 0%
168 5 100.00%
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Old 01-05-04, 10:57 PM   #1
168
Flyweight
 
hotbarz vs 168

IP: 1B3B C284

you spit first
30min
10-15 lines
normal house rules
no bullshit votes

goodluck

and check in

peace
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Old 01-05-04, 10:58 PM   #2
168
Flyweight
 
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ccccccccccccccccccccccccccccchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeccccccccccccccckkkkkkkkkk kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk


goodluck

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Old 01-05-04, 11:03 PM   #3
HotBarz
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u know im a boy right......u jsut said no battlin boys........but im checkin innnnnnnnnnnn just in case
 
Old 01-05-04, 11:06 PM   #4
168
Flyweight
 
IP: 1B3B C284

i didn't say that i said no accepting any battles boys...lol


yes i now your a big boy spit plz


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Old 01-05-04, 11:20 PM   #5
HotBarz
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its BARZ kid ................keep the hammer when i sleep
if i put BARZ on my ryhmes......u still couldnt handle what i speak
u cant key fast enough...............so u betta hope u wrote
they should call me WHITNEY.....cause im bout to smoke this DOPE
the way she gets my dick.......u would swear she is made of BARZ
cause i got here bendin over.....just like her AVATAR
u wanna blow..................BITCH PLEASE
cause the only time you blow....is when u WIT ME
u know u scared........when im bustin that clip
cause only time u get 9 to the throat.....is when u suckin a dick
exspecially mine....i geuss u suck at EVERYTHING...
exspecially ryhmes....

im out..........1
 
Old 01-05-04, 11:39 PM   #6
168
Flyweight
 
IP: 1B3B C284

-------huh right ok um my turn-------


Barz is prune juiced You got no hard-shit:- I'll bury U with your portrait ............now u're an underground artist//
its funny how you speak with easy like nuthing was said but still your cocky that wack rhyme was the hardest?//

How can i bit wen your rhymes are crap learn to rap or rap will rape you.......... in RB bathroom stalls...
i won't be able to fell your rhymes fell nuts??...dick couldn't feel it if i stood an hour grabbing your balls...
This mah Shits Flawwed?! Bitch Na!! Battle Men, u get 'Hit On Tracks' like.......................... 'Gay Sprinters'!!
Barz a Brain Shifter!! There's No Pack to ya Punch!! All the 'Pounds Off'! like Training Weightlifters!!
pretty good played out lines By The Looks, Ya Writtens Off The Books..
You See Those Bars Above This one?? To Kill You Thats ALL IT TOOK!!


-----closer got bored

I heard u was nice i must of been mistaken:
- cuz u have no future with Rap. know why?...I'm already taken//
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Old 01-05-04, 11:43 PM   #7
HotBarz
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ight ight ight...............that was an ight verse.....but can we get some votes......and u know...168....call me.....u know i got something for ya........1
 
Old 01-05-04, 11:43 PM   #8
BombZ
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I wasn't feeling hotbarz flow at all, some of the shit didn't make sense to me, he only had one good punchline that I can remember, 168 took this, better wordplay, punches, came harder. Keep elevatin'

Return Da fava
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104314
 
Old 01-06-04, 12:12 AM   #9
HotBarz
Banned
 
IP: 4577 CD9A

VOTE PLEASEEEEEE....................................... ...........................coem on now i need some kind of up................................................ ................
 
Old 01-06-04, 12:52 AM   #10
oCANti
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IP: 0314 8BF9

168: I liked what you were trying to say as an opener but you kind of halfway did it. Your closer was off the hook. The body of your verse was sloppily put together I really did'nt see the connection. Maybe in your case I would have to hear you rap it, but besides that I just seen the body as an outline for a speech kinda thing. The last three lines were your hotest.

Hotbarz: Opener was hot, I really did'nt feel your middle to much either except for the avatar part it assured it was freestyle and a personal was'nt the best or really good or anything but it maintained. It flowed a lot better. Not an original closing but it fit.

Overall 168's structure messed it up for me....I belive he/she forced a lot of the words into the verse that were'nt needed.

My vote : HotBarz because it flowed a lot better,,,,,I mean a lot better
 
Old 01-06-04, 01:21 AM   #11
HotBarz
Banned
 
IP: 4577 CD9A

can we get some more votes please............................................ .................................................. .....................................
 
Old 01-06-04, 01:28 AM   #12
Eki
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It was close. Hot barz had the flow and structure. 168 you really have to work on that structure its hard to get into your verse.

Anyways Punches was taken by 168 i belive. So my vote goes to her .. no hate

please return a h/vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103864
 
Old 01-06-04, 03:50 AM   #13
LyricalJedi
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Ok on this I have to go with 168 Hotbarz talked that same shit that any male would if they were battling a female.

Open: 168 Barz is prune juiced You got no hard-shit:- I'll bury U with your portrait ............now u're an underground artist//
This line is dope and it was better then hotbars opening simply origanlity is the key here.

Punches: 168 Again she stayed orignal and witty not talk about the same old bullshit that niggaz like to hear.

Metaphors: 168 you can imagine hey prune juiced lol funny

Structure: hotbarz 168 please you are hurting my eyes here

Close:168

Winner 168 murdered this guy 187 style
 
Old 01-06-04, 01:31 PM   #14
Echo
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IP: 927C 4CFE

hotbarz verse had better punches and it made more sense. eki, you need to work on your structure. it makes it hard to read for the voters. still work on your vocab also. hotbarz is my vote.
 
Old 01-07-04, 03:33 PM   #15
Token
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IP: 6FFB C649

Hot Barz DQed for having more than 2 active battles at one time.

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