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Old 01-07-04, 01:48 PM   #1
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Old 01-07-04, 01:52 PM   #2
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OK checking in, I'll spit in under 1 hour

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Old 01-07-04, 01:54 PM   #3
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Old 01-07-04, 02:43 PM   #4
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Brendan....

This bitch applied for elite n rolled all over aisle's penis
Denied, u musta let em see dis..Brendan was merkd'by phoeniix!
Think he was steep competition?...then kid a vic your wishin
4 wins..jus 1 missing? It's obviouse...it's shit he's pissin
Watch coalation occur...wit circumzing..his wins downsize'en
My rek keeps pile'n-dawg what u expect? u'r from Rhode Island
forget the punch wit violence I could merk dis kid in silence
It's set-jet's assignment..brendan's bak in newbie confinement
I dont even need to ryhme it-I got em covered like digit's on Timex
U'r Only chance is if im dq'd by Axe-U'r not even worth closed climax..........
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Old 01-07-04, 02:48 PM   #5
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You wanna call yourself Carson? Then I'll murder your "Daly"
A "Supreme Emcee" Kid? Why you trying to play me?
Your styles "constipated" son - your "shit don't flow"
He's so gay his gang colors should be the rainbow!
Fucking with me dog, it's just not profitiable
bust a "nut" in your bitch like I shot up a mental hospital
Your dicks to small to satisfy, you best rely on your tongue
I could lynch this muthafucka - he still wouldn't be hung!
Game recognize game, that's why I don't know who you are
I "Got Game" like Ray Allen fool, recognize an all-star.

Ray Allen was in He Got Game in case you didn't know. And he says he's a "supreme emcee" in his quote.
 
Old 01-07-04, 03:28 PM   #6
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Old 01-07-04, 03:38 PM   #7
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Nice battle...

But, why, oh why, oh why, oh why...

Do cats keep throwing Carson Daly rips at Jet?

Ya don't think, maybe, that's been done about 3000 times?

Still, nice wordplay and punches from Brendan.
Good format, some of it slightly played (starting to see the "don't know who you are" line a whole lot)
But good shit.

Carson, though...

Did everything that Brendan did, but also incorporated some nice multi's and some (ouch) personals.

And that topped it.

Peace

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Old 01-07-04, 03:44 PM   #8
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But, why, oh why, oh why, oh why...

Do cats keep throwing Carson Daly rips at Jet?

Ya don't think, maybe, that's been done about 3000 times?


That's the problem when you're just starting out here... I have no idea what people have said before and what they haven't. I don't want to *not* say something because it's a good punch... but I'm not going ot look at all of CarsonJets old battles to see who said what.

I'm not making excuses, just sort of explaining myself. A played concept is a played concept, even if I'd never seen it before.
 
Old 01-07-04, 04:48 PM   #9
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Old 01-07-04, 05:06 PM   #10
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good battle I enjoyed it..

Carson...Good shit...personals and punches were delivered well and hilarious to read...

Brendan...Need to work on personals and punches...a few good wordplay's but nuthing spectacular...

Vote Carson

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Old 01-07-04, 05:09 PM   #11
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ite yall my vote goes to carson he just hoit harder with punches and personals that simple good verse man.brendan takes wordplay and flow but not close enuf man but still gd.


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Old 01-07-04, 05:12 PM   #12
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yea i gotta agree with the cats above i kno u new and aint kno but im new too and that carson daly shit seemed kinda weak to me and its the first time i seen the shit

plus carson had some killer ass vocab. i had to hit the thesaurus a couple of times ....lol

bredan's verse was ok but just not on level with carson's

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Old 01-07-04, 05:13 PM   #13
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yo this was a good try brendan, but carson ripped ya dog...
his hard hittin punches, his nice wordplay, and deep personals just kinda took it from ya...nice try though

carson, i like yo verse...nice structure, wordplay, personals, punches and all that good shit...

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Old 01-07-04, 05:16 PM   #14
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bump

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plus carson had some killer ass vocab. i had to hit the thesaurus a couple of times ....lol


Yeah, I'll have to hit up a thesaurus or dictionary too... I don't know what these words mean: "coalation" ,"circumzing." Oh wait....
 
Old 01-07-04, 05:21 PM   #15
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