u know the rules....

1 hr after now your verse is due, thats rules, me 2

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ok....here my shit....

This is the time and place where the play balls comes down/
Smack this Bitch up so much he will turn into a circus clown/
Kill rhymes....hell i spit halk venom in a every direction/
nigga is sex screwed he needs viagra to losen his erections/
The sad part is this bitch aint near colasol/
The only rhymes he be spitten is from his fucking nostrils/
i only layed out 6 fucking rhymes against this pussy/
Now everyone will wonder One More Time "whos the best EMCEE!"
Fuck that shit you aint no fucking Rashady...or slimshady/
In fact your a fake Food stamp passed down by generations like my grandfathers mashady/

You ain't a prophet, the very Idea is a gossip,
Look at his pic you can recognize him as a hobbit.
Your a living disorder, the equivalence of when mexicans cross the border,
Your lines make people smile, only cause they're similar to "can I take your order" (Works at Mc Donalds)
Your a "Big Mack" you don't use a phone when your among us,
Cause when you call a girl, you're like christmas lights you get hung up,
I'll deliver you a loss, but it won't be like digorno,
and clear your history like a little boy downloading porno,
Actually you look like one of them hispanics riding them gay bikes, (sprite commercial)
It figures, you go on RB for "pictures"* cause you can't afford any of the pay-sites

*Pictures that would appear on a porno site.

that shit about my name is gettting real old and the mcdonalds is played out to much....Come on man...Wtf is with yall Come up with new shit...Anyhow uppin this shit now

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Good battle Heres the break down...

777-
This is the time and place where the play balls comes down/
Smack this Bitch up so much he will turn into a circus clown/
^^Decent line opened well..but finished okie..

Kill rhymes....hell i spit halk venom in a every direction/
nigga is sex screwed he needs viagra to losen his erections/
^^That made me laugh..wittty....good line

The sad part is this bitch aint near colasol/
The only rhymes he be spitten is from his fucking nostrils/
^^ Good but kinda gay...Don't use the same word twice to start a sentance right after...but the finisher was good

i only layed out 6 fucking rhymes against this pussy/
Now everyone will wonder One More Time "whos the best EMCEE!"
^^ Didn't really like that line but it was a good punch with a doubt

Fuck that shit you aint no fucking Rashady...or slimshady/
In fact your a fake Food stamp passed down by generations like my grandfathers mashady/
^^Good personal and finish i liked that well done

Overall A pretty good verse hit pretty hard

ER-
You ain't a prophet, the very Idea is a gossip,
Look at his pic you can recognize him as a hobbit.
^^Great Opener, but the pic lines are gettin old...yet still witty

Your a living disorder, the equivalence of when mexicans cross the border,
Your lines make people smile, only cause they're similar to "can I take your order" (Works at Mc Donalds)
^^Played line...Good opener though...but that was shit...

Your a "Big Mack" you don't use a phone when your among us,
Cause when you call a girl, you're like christmas lights you get hung up,
^^Again another gay line..and simple...no creativeness nor witty

I'll deliver you a loss, but it won't be like digorno,
and clear your history like a little boy downloading porno,
^^Theres a decent line...and actually pretty witty...never seen that before

Actually you look like one of them hispanics riding them gay bikes, (sprite commercial)
It figures, you go on RB for "pictures"* cause you can't afford any of the pay-sites
^^ Good finisher but not anything over the bar

Over all my vote goes to 777...he had a better verse...hit harder and more creative and witty...nice try though

if you's could...hit up my battle against dw..it's on the bottom of this page or second thanks

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

uppin 2nd............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..........

i gotta say this was an aight battle
breakdown
777~lil if any wordplay few personels flow was nice vocab was none and punches werent as strong as they usaly are for you
but still kinda creative

mc shady~ya had mad personels jus no original one flow wsa good no as good as 777 and you did have more wordplay but it was kind played

overall vote

777

hit me up and vote at http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103958

thnx i spent time you spend time

ok.....this is the breakdown....Very close battle..So the overall will be the winner....here goes............Drum roll Please........(DRUM DRUM DRUM Drum)

ok heres the Part......

And the flow goes to.....BOTH>><< why! cuz they were evenly Read!

And the Structure goes to....BOTH.....NO COMMENT BLAAAAA

And the Punches go to....(awkard silense fills the air.) Prophet777....Close call on this...

And the Personals go to....Both...Seems like a tie!

And Complex goes to...both!

Overall vote goes to Prophet777....

bob tell him what he has won!!!!!!!!!!!!!

A Vote From MC Nookie and a link to hit his battle up and return the favor by voting honestly! THATS IT

just some humor. nice flow...

Nook vs MullMental

slept on........uppin 2nd time.............................................. .................................................. ...................

uppin this 4th time.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ......jesus god ...vote already

okay, that was a close battle, both came with a few personnals (that mc donald shit was nice it made me laugh)
flow was a tie as well as originality but prophet came harder with the punches and overall he was just better.
good battle on both sides
peace out

777 merked um, his flows were better he had better punches, better wordplay..... good battle though............


could u plz hit up these ones

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104859
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104412