10 lines blah....
blind spits blah......
check in......drop
peace

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Original rules were 10-12 thats what i wrote to...

Your weaker than my girl but you blow about the same....
Make me famous bitch i came for a tune up when i saw the name..
all i got was overcharged for shitty bars you really let me down..
How many muthafuckers u think have played off of my clown...
Shits old like you your a veteran but what does that even mean...
got with a team for typin shit on a screen man what a dream..
do you rap for real i highly doubt it but you gotta love netcees..
THink you can beat me not on vocabulary so instead add one of these =).....
Perfectedly Tearing Organisms intelligently with no remorse..
Let votes come u won this engagment UnderRated of course..
All i know about tech is that he raps OK..he don't quite got it..
cause if my illness was a sickness you be lucky if you caught it...

iighgt...............checking in to key......12 is fine................
pc................................................ .........

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Damn....

This kid spit a wack ass verse & it's not a surprise
Herb, look at ya Avy I see the Canibus in ya eyes
Don't try'ta hide the truth by maskin it in your name
Under rated for a reason so I'll plaster you in shame
Why'd U step to me when I sonned U in the free cypher
Fists U throw I just Dodge with ease so just call me Viper
TheUnderRated bars are worthless in this complex battle
My complete lines make yours sound like it's baby prattle
You nothin to this, stop bluffin you bitch, I'm snuffin ya spit
With the fire extinquished I show you real punches that hit
It's a shame look at ya sig, I.J.L, I used to respect that crew
But my minds changed since they went and accepted you

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good job..............Uppn............................. .....1..........................
..............ggggggggggggggggggggg.

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technician had better wordplay....that viper line was pretty good.....along with harder personals.....Under rated seemed to talk about what has been said about him insteada attackin.....this gave tech also the edge in punches....a mediocre drop by under.....a nice drop by technician...

vote- technician

aight battle....

Technician takes this though... simply more and harder punches...
they were direct... and his wordplay was aight.. but punches wins a battle
Under... you didn't have any personals... tech did

so

v/Tech

Hit this up with an honest vote..... thanks
Vs. t-west

hehheh i don't know the kid.... uppin for 2.........XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxXXX

Good Battle. Nothing but goodness in all heres the breakdown...

Flow:Both
Structure:both
Personalsk tech had this....Why cuz he had most of his mutlis in the personals..Punches were found also.
Punches:Tech...Had a lot more hard hitting punches
Multis:tech....Lot more were seen and used in his small strucuture
overall=tech....theres my vote no hate ok...Honest opinion on what i read

Plz hit my battle up...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=105611

Dope verse...
Good flow, straight wordplay
Punches were decent
Personals were sorta weak
Nice structure
Overall.........13/20





Dope Shit....
Punches were pretty hard hitting
Personals were decent.. funny too
Wordplay was good, flow was good
Structure was good...
Overall................16/20


Vote: -Technician-

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