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.:FreemaN:. | 5 | 100.00% | |
Neek | 0 | 0% | |
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01-19-04, 05:47 PM | #1 | |
Flyweight
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.:FreemaN:. (10-3) vs Neek(0-0)
IP: FCAA FA32
10 lines mini 15 max
No biting,swaying,dicking,hating,recycling due at 7 30 january 19th I'll drop first and good luck |
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01-19-04, 05:50 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 5ABE F23F
yo... its already 10:50pm 19th January here... In England man...
its 10 lines only... no more, no less... iight? |
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01-19-04, 06:03 PM | #3 | |
Guest
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IP: 5ABE F23F
well ive done my verse....
checkin in.... you can spit, then i'll drop right after a see youve dropped... 10 LINES ONLY |
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01-19-04, 06:05 PM | #4 | |
Flyweight
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IP: FCAA FA32
ok lmfao!!!!......Have it due by i guess 11 30 there...heres my verse
I'll be 'Up front' even 'Backwards' Neek-is-Keen,This demon-brings,heat to make singular numbers from even-teams!/ You're battling a kid who's fuckin'-ruthless,remove your spirit and glue it externally....Now you're stuck-on-stupid./ i heard you like lumber and know it Damn-good, so when i beat you with branch's at 'dawn'..You'll notice the 'am'-bush/ Dawg you'll be clinging limbs-at-hospitals, if you think a win-is-optional, cause truthfully neek's pen-is-off-the-wall/ Neeks so eager-to-eat-ya, he'll cause your femur-to-seizure, as you pray and cross your fingers-for-rebirth/ Cant do much with 10 lines =/...There ya go man |
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01-19-04, 06:11 PM | #5 | |
Guest
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IP: 5ABE F23F
Battlin this newb... little bitch goes by the name of Neek
Congratulations... you've jus started on your losing streak Your laying down the rules, What?, you think your a vet Your just a nobody, nothin, you dont deserve any respect This kid here, yes him^, the one obsessed wiv his multi's that are wack Here's a present, 'You Jus Got Merked By Freeman', Even wrote it on a plaque Well Done! Should be proud, your coming up to your tenth post You think youve achieved... But it aint nothin to boast How can you try and diss me when your a mother fuckin cripple Your such a lightweight, even if threw you in a pond... ... you wouldnt make a ripple |
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01-19-04, 06:15 PM | #6 | |
smiley on ya mothers
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IP: FD6B F0D6
flow- freeman
punchlines- freeman structure- neek overalll vote- freeman yo hit this battle up with a vote.. heres the link http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108219
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01-19-04, 06:23 PM | #7 | |
Flyweight
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IP: FCAA FA32
Hmmm..........o...k......Uppin for more votes please...
smh |
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01-19-04, 06:23 PM | #8 | |
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IP: A1CA 8125
nice battle...neek to the wordplay and the multis for sure and i bet he's from a site where that is how you win a battle...sadly though not here neek...you need punches and you had more like 1 good punch but i like some of your metas...freeman you need to get more creative with you punches you like last two bars won it for you and you barely dropped those the top was mostly filler cause it was a weak punch...so i mean no hate just create a bit more both y'all hit these up...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108225 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107655 |
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01-19-04, 06:25 PM | #9 | |
Flyweight
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IP: FCAA FA32
yeah i can see that doesnt win battles here,and i dont like it...but oh well =/
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01-19-04, 06:28 PM | #10 | |
Guest
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IP: 5ABE F23F
iight... two people have voted... yet only one has polled... one of ya poll ur vote for me liked u said^...
was that verse pre-written Neek? uppin #1 |
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01-19-04, 06:29 PM | #11 | |
Flyweight
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IP: FCAA FA32
Nah..jus quick written cuz i had another battle due up
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01-19-04, 06:32 PM | #12 | |
smiley on ya mothers
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IP: FD6B F0D6
*just poll voted*.. yeah man thats a nice dirty trick.. im seing more and more dudes using it.. lol.. peace
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01-19-04, 06:36 PM | #13 | |
Middle Weight
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IP: 7446 7492
FREEMAN took this he had the vital punches, structure and flow..was bouncein in my seat.....neek took the multis but as said above it wasnt enough to take out FREEMANS hard hittin punches.
VOTE = FREEMAN hit this up with a honest vote plz its getting slept on http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107828
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01-19-04, 06:37 PM | #14 | |
Flyweight
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IP: FCAA FA32
wtf...he voted against me in my other battle too...thats typical dickride...2-0 still
fuckin poll |
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01-19-04, 06:42 PM | #15 |
Flyweight
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IP: 8D05 1BDC
neek
I'll be 'Up front' even 'Backwards' Neek-is-Keen,This demon-brings,heat to make singular numbers from even-teams!/<--i dont know about this opener i liked it...not bad You're battling a kid who's fuckin'-ruthless,remove your spirit and glue it externally....Now you're stuck-on-stupid./<---ok.... i heard you like lumber and know it Damn-good, so when i beat you with branch's at 'dawn'..You'll notice the 'am'-bush/<--didnt really like this couplet here... Dawg you'll be clinging limbs-at-hospitals, if you think a win-is-optional, cause truthfully neek's pen-is-off-the-wall/<---ok... Neeks so eager-to-eat-ya, he'll cause your femur-to-seizure, as you pray and cross your fingers-for-rebirth/<--blah at this ending not liking it.. freeman Battlin this newb... little bitch goes by the name of Neek Congratulations... you've jus started on your losing streak<--ok opener could have came harder witha better punch... Your laying down the rules, What?, you think your a vet Your just a nobody, nothin, you dont deserve any respect<--ok... This kid here, yes him^, the one obsessed wiv his multi's that are wack Here's a present, 'You Jus Got Merked By Freeman', Even wrote it on a plaque<--not feeling it.. Well Done! Should be proud, your coming up to your tenth post You think youve achieved... But it aint nothin to boast<--ok again.. How can you try and diss me when your a mother fuckin cripple Your such a lightweight, even if threw you in a pond... ... you wouldnt make a ripple<--cool,ending not hard hitting but won it for ya... vote freeman..i felt it didnt flow as well as neeks did but neek had the flow and multis..but freeman had more punches..not hard hitting ones but won this battle ... |
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