Basic Rules
10-15 lines
5 Votes or 3 Straight takes it

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"I’m a mercenary, I don't care how I get richer,
Like American companies that did business with Hitler"
-Immortal Technique

check in... you'd should do the same soon. Better not no show.

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"I’m a mercenary, I don't care how I get richer,
Like American companies that did business with Hitler"
-Immortal Technique

check nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Try sending god a prayer, but he won’t honor your plea
Sinner, you’ve broken the 3rd commandment battling me.
Read your life story, but your ballad seemed invalid,
Still conceiving you would send any man to tossing salad.
A girl football player, has your common sense been erased?
The only pads belonging on you go beneath the waist.
Seem to be proud of your city, yet it’s chalked full of fags,
There’s more rainbow colored drapes, then Canadian flags!
Trying to mimic Marshal’s gimmick will take you nowhere,
But then again you can join your Dad and make it a family affair.

Read her open mic to fully comprehend the verse.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107823

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"I’m a mercenary, I don't care how I get richer,
Like American companies that did business with Hitler"
-Immortal Technique

what the fuck u dumb ass ur sayin the same exact shit as yo what up/
if i send guys 2 to tossin salad ill send em ur way sice ur good at lickin the butt/
go back to the fifth grade and study the map/
WA stands 4 washington u stupid peice of crap/
why are you talkin shit about me playin football ur wack/
i average 5 sacks if u played me u wouldnt be talkin smack/
ur just hatin cause you could never make the team/
they cant afford 2 turn me down with the hotness i bring/
i thought eminem dissed on his mom/
not me me and my moms get along/

check out my battle vs yo what up

uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnn

ill return the favor
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Sorry for the bite, i seriously didn't know. I guess you’re not looking for a disqualification, but if you want one say it now.

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"I’m a mercenary, I don't care how I get richer,
Like American companies that did business with Hitler"
-Immortal Technique

Opener - Express
Vocab - Express
Flow - Express
Structure - Express
Punches - Express

A girl football player, has your common sense been erased?
The only pads belonging on you go beneath the waist.

Closer - Express
Vote - Express

yte you need too elevate big time, u had no flow, your disses made fun of u really, cause they were so bad, and whats wit the last bar :
i thought eminem dissed on his mom/
not me me and my moms get along/

I think its obvious why Express gets the vote. He had punches and took over every category. a one sided match.
pz.

basically a merkin by xpress.....all elements were there from him...n not from Yte Gal.....punches are the essence of battlin n x'z were better

hit the battl;e up in my sig!!!!

Try sending god a prayer, but he won’t honor your plea
Sinner, you’ve broken the 3rd commandment battling me.
Read your life story, but your ballad seemed invalid,
Still conceiving you would send any man to tossing salad.
A girl football player, has your common sense been erased?
The only pads belonging on you go beneath the waist.
Seem to be proud of your city, yet it’s chalked full of fags,
There’s more rainbow colored drapes, then Canadian flags!
Trying to mimic Marshal’s gimmick will take you nowhere,
But then again you can join your Dad and make it a family affair.
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7/10 pretty good personal in there.............................
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what the fuck u dumb ass ur sayin the same exact shit as yo what up/
if i send guys 2 to tossin salad ill send em ur way sice ur good at lickin the butt/
go back to the fifth grade and study the map/
WA stands 4 washington u stupid peice of crap/
why are you talkin shit about me playin football ur wack/
i average 5 sacks if u played me u wouldnt be talkin smack/
ur just hatin cause you could never make the team/
they cant afford 2 turn me down with the hotness i bring/
i thought eminem dissed on his mom/
not me me and my moms get along/

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whack ass structure 5/10 this could be better k...........
vote/X...............................hit this up doGG
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108069

Up.

Thanks the votes. Orginally I said 3 straight takes it, but the rules state otherwise. Sorry, still new at this.

9. REMEMBER ALL BATTLE RECORDS ARE UPDATED AUTOMATICALLY AFTER 5 POLL VOTES FOR EITHER OPPONENT.

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"I’m a mercenary, I don't care how I get richer,
Like American companies that did business with Hitler"
-Immortal Technique

yte whore~just quit rapping and go back your old job with your mom..sucking dicks...cause you are terrible...X..you were'nt very good either..but..way better than your comp. very easy and one sided battle..X..had better punches and flow..Vote-X

~Click on current battle on my sig~~

Yeah... Xpress took all the fundamentals...
Structure, Flow, Disses, Vocab...
yte, girl you need to elevate big time, No offense, but your shit just sucked.
Vote: Xpress

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