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Old 01-24-04, 10:59 PM   #1
~Yo What Up~
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Yo What Up vs. nosam

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ha ha brian.......ur gay.......BIZATCH!!!!!!!!!

10 lines

house rules

verses due tonight at 12 est

blind spits

ha ha.......ur fuckin done foo.......
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Old 01-24-04, 11:01 PM   #2
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CHECKIN IN...........

ill start keyin afta u check in...........

ur fuckin done brian........

lets go son.........
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Old 01-24-04, 11:09 PM   #3
nosam89
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Checkin In.....................

Reppin The Mondo Thugs...
 
Old 01-24-04, 11:32 PM   #4
nosam89
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iight sons of NEW YORK.. REP.. MONDO...

peep peep.. CHECK CHECK


Add A Teaspon Of Milk, Add A Cup Of Flower
And Cook For Half an Hour, Now We Baked Austin's Skills/
You Couldn't Cum Clean From Jackin Off In The Shower
Like A Whack Trilogy I Got Austin Powered/
Wow, Your A Coward...Afraid Of Text Match
I Wouldn't Count This Chicken Even If The Eggs Hatched/
But I Style Got You Wired, It What Got You Inspired
Plus I Keep Em Cummin Like I Was Nikki Tyler/
You Could Call Me A Buyer, I Got Your Verse Consumed
And Dead On Arrival Is What The Nurse Assumed/
But Dawg You lost this...But it wasn't Your Fault
Cuz You Mistook This Battle For A Poetry Contest/

DONE MY SONS... hey yowhatup said i could have 12 so yeah i have 12
 
Old 01-25-04, 12:10 AM   #5
~Yo What Up~
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^^^LMFAO........y would u even talk shit and come wit shit like that.........whateva.......REPPIN DA MONDO THUGS.........check it.......yo, yo.......

just by droppin uve beatin-urself, kid ur wack, gay ass bitch do urself a favor and retreat-for-help/
ill delete-ya-help, its quite sad when peeps wont listen to ya on the first time so u forced to "repeat-urself"/

this bitch is crossed, gay ass fag dressed in gloss, and its no wonder y this bitch is so hooked on "sauce"/
after this battle im left-as-the-boss and thats fucked up u gotta use the largest size just to get ya "message-across"/

even though i never said u could go 12 just go-ahead, cause u fit as many lines in as u can cause u know-ur-dead/
im just like that beast below-ya-bed, ur pissin me off, then u start to wonder y ya body is left "so-red"/

dawg its sad u startin to look like ya-avy, but its even sadder that to get ya weight, ud have to "have-three"/
u can-disagree, but damn ur fat and mexican the perfect qualities of someone i need to continue my killing-sprees/

i cant believe u didnt plan-before, cause i was expectin a challenge but u came out just a bland-bore/
dawg honestly u just a land-whore, u say u reppin the nyc, but really u cant even figure out what that "stands-for"/

EXPLANATIONS -

1st bar - in his sig he has "reppin da mondo thugs" twice......one right below the other one

2nd bar - in his sig he had to write "i be illin" in huge ass letters cause everyone knows hes wack

3rd bar - self explanatory

4th bar - he goes to my school and hes fat.....carmen is also fat, but ud have to have 3 carmens to make him

5th bar - in his post he said he was from new york, but really hes from arizona like me.......

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should be enough, but whateva........

UPPIN FOR VOTES!!!!!!!!!
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Old 01-25-04, 12:19 AM   #6
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Add A Teaspon Of Milk, Add A Cup Of Flower
And Cook For Half an Hour, Now We Baked Austin's Skills/
You Couldn't Cum Clean From Jackin Off In The Shower
Like A Whack Trilogy I Got Austin Powered/
Wow, Your A Coward...Afraid Of Text Match
I Wouldn't Count This Chicken Even If The Eggs Hatched/
But I Style Got You Wired, It What Got You Inspired
Plus I Keep Em Cummin Like I Was Nikki Tyler/
You Could Call Me A Buyer, I Got Your Verse Consumed
And Dead On Arrival Is What The Nurse Assumed/
But Dawg You lost this...But it wasn't Your Fault
Cuz You Mistook This Battle For A Poetry Contest/
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k overall 6/10 keep it up and come harder wit witty punches
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just by droppin uve beatin-urself, kid ur wack, gay ass bitch do urself a favor and retreat-for-help/
ill delete-ya-help, its quite sad when peeps wont listen to ya on the first time so u forced to "repeat-urself"/

this bitch is crossed, gay ass fag dressed in gloss, and its no wonder y this bitch is so hooked on "sauce"/
after this battle im left-as-the-boss and thats fucked up u gotta use the largest size just to get ya "message-across"/

even though i never said u could go 12 just go-ahead, cause u fit as many lines in as u can cause u know-ur-dead/
im just like that beast below-ya-bed, ur pissin me off, then u start to wonder y ya body is left "so-red"/

dawg its sad u startin to look like ya-avy, but its even sadder that to get ya weight, ud have to "have-three"/
u can-disagree, but damn ur fat and mexican the perfect qualities of someone i need to continue my killing-sprees/

i cant believe u didnt plan-before, cause i was expectin a challenge but u came out just a bland-bore/
dawg honestly u just a land-whore, u say u reppin the nyc, but really u cant even figure out what that "stands-for"/
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man yer struc is horrible fix that shit,overall 7/10
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Old 01-25-04, 12:37 AM   #7
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^^^thanx for the vote..........

UPPIN # 1 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LETS GET SOME MORE VOTES UP IN DIS BITCH!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 01-25-04, 01:08 AM   #8
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Uppin #2 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Cmon Dont Sleep On Dis Bitchs.........

Lets Get Some Fuckin Votes!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 01-25-04, 01:44 AM   #9
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I thought YO wutup took this better punches an wut not
didnt feel other guys structue ya AB ab Rhyme scheme didnt feel it
u had a bunch of good punhces an if u structured it rite i think u wud of taken the battle but u didnt...


Vote-WUTUp

Hit the link up dawg..Cuz i voted on ya shit an poll ya vote..thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109487
 
Old 01-25-04, 02:20 AM   #10
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Punches:Yo
Multies:Yo
Vocab: Yo
Wordplay:NoSam...like the play on his name
Metaphores: NoSam
Stucture:Yo

Vote: Yo What Up..good shit 1

left my honest vote.....now hit this up for me....1

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109545
 
Old 01-25-04, 10:55 AM   #11
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Yo What Up, what da fuck? We was supposed to battle today but you openin' up battles like a muthafucka. Don't tell me ur duckin', not after all that shit u was talkin?
U could PM me ur excuse.

Anyway, as for the battle:
This battle was decent. Ur not really supposed to reveal info like names, but both of u don't seem to have any problem with it, so:

nosam: Your verse was just okay. Pretty basic and all. However, u did have some good potential. Okay wordplay, good structure, kinda weak punches, more on the creativity side. Keep elevatin'.

Yo What Up: Your verse was okay too. Pretty basic, but with some nice wordplay, metas, and creativity. Punches were good but I've seen better from ya. Keep elevatin'.

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Old 01-25-04, 10:55 AM   #12
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^^^thanx for the feedbacks.............

UPPIN # 3 !!!!!!!!!!!

DONT SLEEP ON DIS HOES!!!!!!!!
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Old 01-25-04, 12:24 PM   #13
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Uppin # 4 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Cmon Foos........lets Go Sons!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 01-25-04, 12:34 PM   #14
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yo took this battle his verse was dope,much better pesonals and structure
vote-yo

peep my battles

vs dizzy hommel
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108195

vs d.liver.e
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109371
 
Old 01-25-04, 12:40 PM   #15
EyI-SyTeZ
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Punches:Yo
Vocab: Yo
Wordplay:NoSam
Multies:Yo
Personals: Neither
Metas: NoSam

Poll vote Please=\/

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109392
 
 


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