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.iLL. |
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2 | 28.57% |
wogzta |
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5 | 71.43% |
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wogzta VS .iLL.
IP: 5C4B 9DFC
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no feeding no d/r, hate or crew votes .iLL. spits first peace and good luck |
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IP: F978 8610
checkin in
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IP: 5C4B 9DFC
aight cool......... good luck and have fun............................................... ...............
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IP: F978 8610
~`~Intro~`~
This battle be the ~location~ of this faggots ~mutalation~ so here's the ~presentation~/ I'm the doc he's my ~patient~ and im in charge of this ~operation~/ ~`~Dog Fight Begins~`~ Homie, this scientific and unspecific horrific lyrical exhibit/ is explicit by the minute cause my flow's prolific/ The only thing you 'stab' is ya meat with yur *utensils*/ your ammo's water, and u only 'pump lead' wit mechanical *pencils*/ Wogzta couldn't 'equal' my skillz if he was a 'Siamese twin' born wit me/ Hes been know to be compared to 50- gay men in a sauna singin elvis presley/ ~`~CloseR~`~ Masterful, supernatural attacks, tactical-planned 'n mathematical/ Grind your body into a pulp reminiscent of tuna casserole/ |
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IP: 5C4B 9DFC
Kid must've read my battles the way he spits vocab
But "Thesaurus" was the only word I found in his notepad My dexterity positions me as the martyr of rap While he tries to blend in like Rednecks wearin' Rastafarian hats Like horrible tracks, I present you with lots of issues And then discard your existence like a box of tissues Utilize your ears, I suggest you start listenin' Cos I "drop lines" with more skill than proffesional fishermen You think your hot like sulfuric acid but this battle's resolved I'm gold... the one thing you can't hope to dissolve nice spit .iLL.... good luck |
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IP: F978 8610
uppin, thanks
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IP: F978 8610
uppin 2
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Banned
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IP: B6E2 01F2
lol........my god...heres the breakdown
Flow:both... Stucutures:both...same Punches:::mad punches from wogtza....not enough to be great but enough. personals:some from ill. NO hate on that one multis:ill..FUCKING SO MANY! metas:ill...had more metas.. overall:ill...the multis....so fucking many.... hit up my attle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...d.php?p=1126197 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109699 |
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IP: 5C4B 9DFC
^ i'll hit up your battles when you vote my friend... you have to pick who is better... not just say "theyre both ill"... peace
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IP: 4577 CD9A
Ill had some nice multi's, and flow. But the punches were just aight. Wogsta had a good flow, and sum good punches. overall sum of ill's lines were played i think wogsta came more original. so my vote is wogsta
check my battle out. |
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IP: 5C4B 9DFC
upping for honest votes............................................. ....................................
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Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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IP: D154 1BD3
.ll. had some nice metas and multis. Usually I dun like multis cause people throw em in there to sound cool, but ILL made them punches which is nice. Wogzta had a nice flow and structure, not too many good punches or metas but I give him creativity for some of his metas. Overall .Ill.
Please take the time to drop an honest vote here. Thanks guys. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109779 |
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IP: 5C4B 9DFC
^ actually, ill had no multies at all... all his rhymes were internal, not multies.... but all my lines had 2-3 syllable rhyming except for the last 2... just letting you know
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IP: F978 8610
uppin 3 .. vote for this guys, and i vote for urs
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IP: BCC1 F8A3
Ill had good multis but Wogsta had good wordplay and had 2 good metaphores. The first being:
"Cos I "drop lines" with more skill than proffesional fishermen". He talks about line with the double meaning fo a fishermans lines. And the other: "You think your hot like sulfuric acid but this battle's resolved I'm gold... the one thing you can't hope to dissolve". Here he suggests that even though ill were as hot as sulphuric acid, he would never come close to melting him as he is Gold. Also his verse was more pleasing to the eye. therefore my breakdown is: Flow:wogsta Metaphore:wogsta multi:ill Form:wogsta Rhymesense:ill Wogsta/Ill = 3/2
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