10-12 lines
usual rules
due 20 min. after check in
g'luck

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checkin innnnnnnnn................................

you see im the rooster and youre the panda just like in your icon, showing your strife
my verses peckin at ya head, makin you think about em for the rest of your life
my verbal pecks hit you so hard, they diversed and pierced your hat and bandana
the two headwares you use to look like your idol kweli, when you're only lookin like a fat panda from china
ill be the poacher and get no money from your dead carcas,
because no one wants a dead body big enough to cover their whole house....
covering their home like its being fumigated, looking like a tent from a circus
you smell just like the fumigation chemicals, no wonder why you never get any pus
their are so many other reasons why you dont get and ladies and girls,
but you don't seem to even want to hear them because you are comfortable eating what your boyfriend's dick hurls

hello.... c'mon diverse what's taking your ass so long?

This kid can barely even serve cold at his job occupation
But i'll hit em up with 31 various flavors of verbal devistation
Wiped my feet all over the matt as soon as i entered the thread
made this kid topple over, practically had to center his head
Claims westside but can't find it without a compass and mapquest
Don't worry i'll break you in though, like a 20 year old mattress
Watch as this kids mind unwinds like loose ends of frayed rope
But no message from the divine even though you prayed hope
stick to graffiti, but don't leave your signature as matt matt
otherwise someone might notice it and you'll get laughed at
good enough....

got my personals from his bio and from his website

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This kid can barely even serve cold at his job occupation
But i'll hit em up with 31 various flavors of verbal devistation
^Fuckin nice Diverse
Diverse wins this, better punches and metas and personals. few lines had me laughin out loud. matt_matt your shits too stretched at times. Elevation will come with experience.
Please drop an honest vote here. Thanks guys

This kid can barely even serve cold at his job occupation
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109779

diverse, i like the way you spit, im down to improve my skill with u and battle anytime. good shit.

yeah, no doubt........just get at me on AIM.............

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pretty one sided...
diverse took every aspect of this battle..

matt..flow was off. and basically your punches didnt hit...
lines were a bit stretched at times and that hurts your flow...
just wasnt feelin your verse man..no hate just keep battlin

diverse was pretty consistent in all areas
nice flow....nice punches..and nice structure
pretty cut and dry here.. diverse just had the wittier more experienced
type verse....

v/diverse

drop a vote here fellas
thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109380

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diverse had this battle all the way........a tottal merking here...........this is just being merked all the way..............diver had more punches...personals....and flow both were good but i felt diverse had it going


hit up my battle please no hate votes.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109693
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109699

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I agree about the one sided nature of this battle. Diverse came with what he saw as efficient enough to kill matt matt. Diverse had nice lines like,

Claims westside but can't find it without a compass and mapquest
Don't worry i'll break you in though, like a 20 year old mattress

matt matt, i don't know if it's just me, but a lot of your lines didn't seem to rhyme or make much sense, and i don't mean this in a dissing manner, it seems you don't have rhythm in your head when you write. I personally always have a beat or type of rhythm in my head when i write. So the flow of your verse actually, lacked flow. But everyone gets better with time. Good luck to the both of you.