Verses Due: Saturday, January 24th 2004
Voting Ends: Monday, January 26th 2004

Topic: Behind the Eyes

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yeah....yeah, good luck, 1

votes:

1. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...467#post1128467

2. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...524#post1128524

3. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108518

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Hangover subliminal, criminal antics dance this 12 step program
My focus long been towed, from totalitarian to the toejam
I cant stand for myopic concepts like paraplegic prophets
My conciouness toxic I think I had one too many shots of logic
Last night my plight amplifyied twice towards my dear
Steer fear towards the mirror concerns are closer than they appear
When I cheer on my memory bank despite the clout, I doubt
Wrong route sighted, heightened toasted for start’n to account
For missing children, I am one of the orphanage fortunate orchard kids
The ordinance left my coordinates proportionate to yesteryear's skids
Yes my dear Im home but it feels otherwise, I’ll colorized gray skys too
til they Resemble highs felt at times better than spy on spy double issues
Out of breath, got plenty of tissues now Im only rhyming out my eyelids
Face it, its tasteless but my taste buds stay by my side
When I ever start to hang I find I tend to glide and I take it all in
For a spin tilt a whirl within and then grin as I gather up the resin
Try to gain hold but all that i once knew to be true has faltered
I look behind the eyes, get faint and see my brain...forever altered

Topic: Behind tha Eyes (“I”)

A Quick Key…good luck Walter (sorry I couldn’t rip)

So much memory dwells… Under tha “D”s, tha “O”s, and tha “S”s/
Excel with Word to AIM at Windows …tha Keys exPose tha Sessions/
Download boxes and pop ups…loss of memorY Grows with Yes’s/
Bugs infect them…documents, Bad files strictLy Corrode Intestines/
AOL I.M. equals drama, terminate tha box to quicklY Close tha Message/
Writers block spreads to your fingertips…See No Flow PrOgression/
People Show Expression…when “melt down” point Finds a “Drive”/
Portable Knowledge (Laptops)…w/ technology…Designed to Thrive/
Virus’…that you could have prevented…emerge when tha Time is Right/
Your not savin tha planet, but tha recycle bin opens where your Mind Resides/
Artwork vanished…no more abundance of info…lies Behind tha “I”s/

Good stuff, wish I could have expanded on this, if you don’t undastand it…lol, I don’t care vote anyway, peace

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"I'm stuck with...what i'm Stuck Wit, cause i don't Suck Dick" - Jadakiss

this match i wasn't feeling, it was beat. first verse was very odd. i don't like all of them mass word, canibus type shit. its funny, most of the time not making sense. atleast it had decent flow. it was pretty decent.

2nd i wasnt feeling at all, it was wacked out of proportion.

i'm going with wall..

v/walter
the vocab made the flow hard but it made me stop
and think what u were trying to say shit like that
vocab was sik like woah good shit.
keylow-:\ didnt get it i think i did but mabey u were
talking about creative expression? otherwise
it didnt sink in the message u were trying to get accross.

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im gon' have to agree
Key Low just didn't have what it took to take out walter in this
rematch. Walt just got his point across and was consistent
throughout. Key, you just didn't get ya story in a good perspective
I spent more time tryin to de-code it than enjoy it

v/ Walter Wall

walter-you had amazingly solid wordplay in this. very dope in that perspective. but on the otherhand, you didn't seem to get any point across at all...just sort of wrote...know what I mean? The bars were a little long, the flow was hard to catch.

key low- cool concept with the computer stuff, but it really didn't cut it for this. I think you could have gone way more indepth, but I also find it amusing that you wrote all this right after your computer crashed LoL.

v/walter wall

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

walter nice vocab, . but like maven said your point was a little sketchy but I beleive i got the idea. remember more complex can give away your match at times.

key, nice but I also wasnt feeling the story the flow seemed forced and i just didnt enjoy it, I've seen better from both of you. this was subpar.
so I go with the one that caught my eye a little better and thats walters

v/walter

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