16 lines max
no hate votes
no complaing about fair placed votes
no swaying votes
drop tonight..in about a hour or so..

I'm a mercenary armed with the spoken word
your confidence against me is simply absurd.
And since a mercenary i be actin like
I gots to get paid to rock the mic.
whatever you shoot will be infantile
all efforts against me are merely futile
cuz i rep from the village where we got it rough
so pussy rhymes you bring won't be enough.
it's my first time on the site and i smell your fear
but you been on here for a coupla years.
my rhymes make blood drip out of your ears
and soon you gonna be drownin in tears
you should try to fight, you ought to
I'm the stranger mom said not to talk to
I'll chop you up with a sense of art
and the police won't be able to find the parts.

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DIRTYENDZONE

Dixie nicer around the burners than Chef Emeril Laggase
You couldnt kick good shit if you was deep in manure doin' karate
I come with the best lyrics and all types of hell tricks
And I'll straight Peirce your back like # 34 for the Celtics
This kid's gay,after I eat him alive I get cavities like hersey
People look and ask who he is like a personalized jersey
When I read your verse, Dirty, I wasnt in a least way shook
And I always come first like the T & F part in the Eastbay Book
I'm really taking it easy on this guy thats tryin to be tough
But to be truthful..he lyrics is all ass like B.E.T. uncut
Im ownin this newbie and really leavin' him a big mess
Cause you're half real like Mitchell missin' Ness

blah..Im kind of angry right now..no real effort was put into this..and also..I havent been on here for a couple of years..Ive been on here since November..
lets get some votes..

Lol Dixie came half-asses but still merked dirty. Dirty your structure was off kid, and your punches were pretty weak and played. Dixie you had some ill punches, creative too. The karate manure one had me laughin. Your flow was a lil off, but no harm to your verse. Good stuff.
Please take the time to vote on one or both of these. I took the time for you. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110084
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110310

whoa.. damn wtf? holy shit talk about merking
Dirty- dont battle kids that might possibly be a mod soon
you need to elevate -DEFINNALLY

Dixie- Can you say knock out? jeez funny ive never seen u this bad but yet u killed this kid lol well im surprised you even accepted the battle... oh well heres ya vote

Overall- Dixie

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pleez vote on mine honest vote this is a serious match
we are 'rivals'

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110084

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lmao..I wasnt trying..but Im thankful for this guy..I was kind of mad and I needed to unload on someone..

uppin for more votes..peace..

shit rong link
fuck

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110301

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roflmao^^ yeah..I noticed that..I was like wtf?..he got a alias?..
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Dirty- Your verse was more like a freestyle than a battle. No real harsh punches at all. Be clever an think of funny metas an shit. Dont tell him what you can do or what your gona do to him as your punch. Make him the punchline.

Dixie- Not tryin that was some decent shit. Enough anyway. Some pretty good punches. I liked the celtics line that was dope.

OVERALL- Dixie with a much better an clever verse

Dixie took this one no problem, it just wasn't a fair battle from the start. Dirty work on punches, not horrible for a newbie. My vote: Dixie

hey guys please try to drop an honest vote on either or both of these:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109787
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110243

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-Benefit

okay....dixie took this battle with ease...he had a real use of punches and personals, plus a well structured verse...dirty your verse didn't real have anything directed specifically towards dixie...remember to stay at your opponent....drop an honest vote on the battle in my sig please

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dixie got this..LOL dirty ya had an aight flow, but the punches were weak, and structure needed work. Dixie nice flow and scheme, i liked a couple of ya punches too like the eastbay one. you obviously got the harder and better rhyme here. vote-dixie

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uppin for some more votes..and I hope feeble dont talk them away for no reason!:MAD: