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-technician- | 5 | 100.00% | |
cutastraphe | 0 | 0% | |
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01-28-04, 02:13 AM | #1 | |
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cutastraphe vs technician!!
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no crew, hate or dr, or feedin i'll start my verse now we each got 30 check in let me kno u see this |
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01-28-04, 02:56 AM | #2 | |
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yo aight..........
technician ya gonna need ya best-wishin, even then ya'll still end-up missin i'll bury ya in the ocean, but ya still won't have any-flow in my vision ya just a hoe in addition, meanin ya suck twice as bad as me battle fast emcee-fuck 30? i'll make you a three minute casualty you think you nice, cuz you got 20 KO's that's Krab Openers they say technicians are good with their hands, you just jack off allot mann why'd you even challenge, and say that you would set it? i culd of won with madevils verse, but didn't wanna get the devil offended to hell and back, tech's gonan get smacked for bein stupid feedin the abusive, and like his birthday-he'll put the bleedin to uses my bad on time lost track go hed |
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01-28-04, 09:30 AM | #3 | |
Here's Lookin At You Kid
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Yea.....Check It......
I see you fixed your structure, good, it still cant match even with mine It's like you a fish, my punches are bait & you lookin ta catch theese lines I beat you once by a landslide, and i'll do it again wit the back hand side.... Lets go to a carnival of skill ties, Cut's like Gary Coleman and demands rides See you just a ho, & everyone know, u ride more dick than real hookers blow If I look below, I see cutastraphe been already knocked out once five to O So why is the rematch set, is he really that concerened in me abusin his neck?.... Is he losin' his head?, shit battlin Tech is the easiest way to lose your respect Look at all those multies and big words you've used, wow kid you must be proud But soons as I dropped this verse you hard work became nothin but a shroud
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01-28-04, 09:34 AM | #4 | |
Here's Lookin At You Kid
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I see u fixed ur structure, good, it still cant match even with mine
It's like u a fish, my punches are bait & u lookin to catch lines I beat u once by a landslide, & i'll do it again wit the back hand side.... Lets go to a carnival of skill sights, Cut's like Gary Coleman & demands rides See u just a ho, & everyone kno, u ride more dick than real hookers blow If I look below, I see cutastraphe been already knocked out once five to O So why is the rematch set, is he really that concerened in me abusin his neck?.... Is he losin' his head?shit ... battlin Tech is the easiest way to lose ur respect Look at all those multies & big words you've used, wow kid u must be proud But soons as I dropped this verse u hard work became nothin but a shrou
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01-28-04, 09:35 AM | #5 | |
Here's Lookin At You Kid
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READ THE 2ND ONE............mispelled werds
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01-28-04, 09:50 AM | #6 |
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technician ya gonna need ya best-wishin, even then ya'll still end-up missin
i'll bury ya in the ocean, but ya still won't have any-flow in my vision ya just a hoe in addition, meanin ya suck twice as bad as me battle fast emcee-fuck 30? i'll make you a three minute casualty you think you nice, cuz you got 20 KO's that's Krab Openers they say technicians are good with their hands, you just jack off allot mann why'd you even challenge, and say that you would set it? i culd of won with madevils verse, but didn't wanna get the devil offended to hell and back, tech's gonan get smacked for bein stupid feedin the abusive, and like his birthday-he'll put the bleedin to uses _______________________________________________ opener was whack,finished strong though 8/10 nice werdplay in this as you can see,easy all around flow _________________________________________________ I see u fixed ur structure, good, it still cant match even with mine It's like u a fish, my punches are bait & u lookin to catch lines I beat u once by a landslide, & i'll do it again wit the back hand side.... Lets go to a carnival of skill sights, Cut's like Gary Coleman & demands rides See u just a ho, & everyone kno, u ride more dick than real hookers blow If I look below, I see cutastraphe been already knocked out once five to O So why is the rematch set, is he really that concerened in me abusin his neck?.... Is he losin' his head?shit ... battlin Tech is the easiest way to lose ur respect Look at all those multies & big words you've used, wow kid u must be proud But soons as I dropped this verse u hard work became nothin but a shrou __________________________________________________ ____________ struc was off just a tad but this hit way harder nice creativity and way better attempt at striving for something good punches and witty personals, 9/10 __________________________________________________ _____ vote/tech _________________________________________________ hit this up i need one vote to close it http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109339 |
01-28-04, 09:56 AM | #7 | |
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Cut-
iight .. 5/10 opener good flow and wordplay.. decent punches good verse.. 7/10 Tech- structure was a little bit off... better punches great creativity enjoyed also 9.5/10 vote/technician Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. Explain your votes better. Everything you had said could have been said about any battle. - Token |
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01-28-04, 10:23 AM | #8 | |
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C- you had nice flow and thats about all, ok wordplay ok vocab, no mulites no hard hitting punches, but you put up a good fight cuz tech came weak.
T= Nice flow, Nice punches, and ok wordplay, ok vocab, no multies eitehr, some hard hittin punches, creativity nice verse Punches- T Flow- C Vocab- T Wordplay- T Structure- C Vote- T Hit HTis UP Please http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110269
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01-28-04, 10:27 AM | #9 | |
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technician ya gonna need ya best-wishin, even then ya'll still end-up missin
i'll bury ya in the ocean, but ya still won't have any-flow in my vision weak multi, second line..ehh coulda been better ya just a hoe in addition, meanin ya suck twice as bad as me battle fast emcee-fuck 30? i'll make you a three minute casualty played to all hell you think you nice, cuz you got 20 KO's that's Krab Openers they say technicians are good with their hands, you just jack off allot doesn't rhyme, and all sex/jack off shit is mad played mann why'd you even challenge, and say that you would set it? i culd of won with madevils verse, but didn't wanna get the devil offended lil stretched, but not bad actually to hell and back, tech's gonan get smacked for bein stupid feedin the abusive, and like his birthday-he'll put the bleedin to uses ok, kinda creative I see u fixed ur structure, good, it still cant match even with mine It's like u a fish, my punches are bait & u lookin to catch lines kinda played, but not bad I beat u once by a landslide, & i'll do it again wit the back hand side.... Lets go to a carnival of skill sights, Cut's like Gary Coleman & demands rides ehhh kinda crap and filler...nah filler and crap See u just a ho, & everyone kno, u ride more dick than real hookers blow If I look below, I see cutastraphe been already knocked out once five to O ok personals at the end, but the first line is played So why is the rematch set, is he really that concerened in me abusin his neck?.... Is he losin' his head?shit ... battlin Tech is the easiest way to lose ur respect ok, not great Look at all those multies & big words you've used, wow kid u must be proud But soons as I dropped this verse u hard work became nothin but a shrou ok finisher, nothin great Damn Tech you took it easy, you still won tho, a few ok punches and personals, nothin great. Cut your elevatin I can see. Keep at it man, try and stay away from sex and gay lines, cause those are mad played Please drop an honest vote here guys. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110084 |
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01-28-04, 11:56 AM | #10 | |
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damn i didn't even think his verse was that good?...but i guess he had more personals, i don't even remember battlin u technician musta been a long time ago...anywas uppin...thanx for the votes people and the breakdowns...
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01-28-04, 12:21 PM | #11 | |
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IP: 2A70 7C9D
...i would serve this nigga Tech...im the real Tech...
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01-28-04, 06:32 PM | #12 | |
Here's Lookin At You Kid
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^ right....................Uppn.............
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01-28-04, 06:54 PM | #13 | |
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tech pretty much took this, his punches hit harder, hit personals were a little better, an his wordplay was not too bad as well!!
cut dropped aiight, but he came a lil played!!! please drop an honest vote on this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110247 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Anon
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01-28-04, 06:57 PM | #14 |
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Punches - Tech
Wordplay - Tech Vocab - ahh Tech Creativity - Tech Structure - eh...Tech Flow - Cut I think Tech had him with the punches and more creativity at hand... Vote = Tech 1 |
01-28-04, 07:05 PM | #15 | |
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Cut
technician ya gonna need ya best-wishin, even then ya'll still end-up missin i'll bury ya in the ocean, but ya still won't have any-flow in my vision ehh coulda been better ya just a hoe in addition, meanin ya suck twice as bad as me battle fast emcee-fuck 30? i'll make you a three minute casualty kinda played you think you nice, cuz you got 20 KO's that's Krab Openers they say technicians are good with their hands, you just jack off allot doesn't rhyme, played too mann why'd you even challenge, and say that you would set it? i culd of won with madevils verse, but didn't wanna get the devil offended lil stretched, decent though to hell and back, tech's gonan get smacked for bein stupid feedin the abusive, and like his birthday-he'll put the bleedin to uses creative Tech I see u fixed ur structure, good, it still cant match even with mine It's like u a fish, my punches are bait & u lookin to catch lines kinda played, but not bad I beat u once by a landslide, & i'll do it again wit the back hand side.... Lets go to a carnival of skill sights, Cut's like Gary Coleman & demands rides filler lines kick ass See u just a ho, & everyone kno, u ride more dick than real hookers blow If I look below, I see cutastraphe been already knocked out once five to O ok personals to even out the played first line So why is the rematch set, is he really that concerened in me abusin his neck?.... Is he losin' his head?shit ... battlin Tech is the easiest way to lose ur respect not great...coula been better Look at all those multies & big words you've used, wow kid u must be proud But soons as I dropped this verse u hard work became nothin but a shrou ok finisher Overall - Tech took this battle wit harder punches and more complex ones
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