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Art Official | 0 | 0% | |
menolin | 5 | 100.00% | |
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01-31-04, 03:56 PM | #1 | |
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Art Official V.S menolin
IP: 95BE 951D
10 lines, no more, no less
i set up you spit first, i will start keyin up after your check in peace good luck |
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01-31-04, 04:29 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 95BE 951D
damn hurry up an spit, i thought u wouldn't check in so i keyed up, an ur still not droppin?
is u gonna show |
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01-31-04, 04:41 PM | #3 | |
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IP: D14C 1729
Art Official Reppin B-Town, California......
God Save the queen if menolin is who they choose to rep they kingdom Like "RZA", Witness "The Birth Of A Prince", And wait till the true king come Menolin spread his shit more than "Grey Poupon" Stepped To The Official and got SHIT on This site is not where foreigners belong, I proved that alreddy when i killed puertoricanelly. Give it up you not Slick Rick The Ruler, You'd Be Better off writing "Children's Storie's" I write "Stephen King" thrillers, make em extra gory And make "Wes Craven" look like "Dr. Suess" Doin Drive By's on Elm Street straight lettin loose Fuck "2pac", Nigga I got the "Juice". |
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01-31-04, 04:46 PM | #4 | |
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IP: 95BE 951D
the only official i make, is the first, loss i give you,
the kid couldn't lace me up, his mother does his school shoes, if illness, was measured in pounds, art boy would be anorexic, his other battle was so bad, it turned me into a dyslexic, these little dogs come in, and think they can piss on the big trees, this guy so weak...... ..........he the type that after keyin up text, starts to show fatigue, im hurting him like 'strokes', leaving him near 'brushes' with death* i police the front lines, i take away your stress, give you a-rest** crush this cat, like collapsed buildings, an natural disasters, im like a kids braking a vase.... .........i leave 'art' poorly fixed, like a young child by using plasters *stroke an brushes have a conection with art, **hopefull you should get it a-rest=arrest |
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01-31-04, 04:50 PM | #5 | |
Rb's Teacher
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IP: EC0B 84C7
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111173
WHATS UP YALL GOOD BATTLE VOTE ON MA SHIT AND HELP ME OUT THERES THE LINK, IM A HAVE TA GIVE THIS SHIT TO ARTOFFICIAL BASED ON THE FACT THAT HE USED BETTER METAPHORS AND KILLED MENOLIN WITH THE LITERARY BOOK PUNCHLINES, SO MY VOTE GOES TO ART OFFICIAL |
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01-31-04, 04:50 PM | #6 | |
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IP: D14C 1729
Uppin for votes. Peep My slick rick Reference. Only True Heads Will Get This One.
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01-31-04, 04:50 PM | #7 |
Anti Drug=Pre-marital Sex
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IP: 2F46 BF0E
official, you came pretty decent in this battle, your structure and flow was kinda off which made it harder to read your verse...your punches were a little played but some where creative..all in all not a bad drop...
menolin, you had decent flow and structure, some of your punches were kinda played as well such as the anorexia line but other then that you stayed pretty creative and had a little better personals.... overall:menolin takes this battle with harder punches and personals
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01-31-04, 04:54 PM | #8 | |
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IP: D14C 1729
Thanks For the constructive criticism DIVERSE. My structure is killing me in battles But I'll get Better.
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01-31-04, 04:59 PM | #9 |
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IP: 4577 CD9A
menolin takes this hands down he had better punches..
his flow was on point..and he had personals.. art ur shit was to streched... and ur flow was off... ur punches was hittin... vote:menolin plz drop a vote on this..since i took time to hit yours http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111173
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01-31-04, 05:03 PM | #10 | |
Here's Lookin At You Kid
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nice nice battle here.....both had good flow.....but art official loose the quotes and shorten your bars.....good punches you had......menolin ='d better punches tho.....his personals hit you hard.....your punches were less direct.....work on mixing your personals and punches.......vocab was solid from both......structure wass good for M.......not so good for Art,.
vote menolin..................
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01-31-04, 05:15 PM | #11 | |
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IP: 95BE 951D
first time uppin
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01-31-04, 05:27 PM | #12 | |
So Tired Of It.
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IP: 399E F0FD
damn..menolin took this battle..shit was funny...art official fix ur format and make ur bars shorter and u got deep potential to be a nice battler....however in this one i belive melonin took this with witty punches and simile's..study his art...and try it...
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01-31-04, 05:45 PM | #13 | |
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second time uppin
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01-31-04, 06:12 PM | #14 | |
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3rd time uppin......... drop votes an links
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01-31-04, 06:23 PM | #15 | |
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IP: 7A5E D5B8
Art Official..your structure made it a struggle to read ur verse..
& when i finally got into it..i was running for the exit. ..Not that bad though especially for a FL piece but.. Sometimes the creativity was of such a low level.. work on it. menolin came wack as ever.. But better then Art Official. ..Guess his experience keeps giving him the upper hand.. But thats..obvious..when battlin newbs. ..Some ok..punches .. witty. So for a overall battle verse.. Especially better punches.. & structure. vote menolin |
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