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Spit when you ready
I'll just post my shit right after you
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If any herbs vote...I swear I'll break ya neck....

if u get ne herbs to vote i'll break yours first...... ..~jk! ...
good luck.......check in.....post ya shit by 1230
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Whens that?
its 9:04 here...lol
I'm done already
Just drop..& I'll drop
Right after you

you guyz gonna spit or what?......................

Venom from what wise said before I wouldn't vote if i were you

*kindergarden teacher voice* You see venom, Wise and Tek are big boys and can handle their own battle, be patient and let them put their verses down

*back to normal* so yeah just wait and let them do it themselves, they're perfectly capable

I'll come back to look at this tomorrow or tonight, depending on when you guys are done...

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Later DanE
Word-Ness
I have a website

^ ahahha cool............thats about 10 minutes from now i'm almost done...get on aim so i can let u kno when to drop i guess....

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Yo who is this pretty pink pussy wearing a damn thong?
You wan't proof? This fruitcake's gots quotes for cam'ron
This fuck gets hit with damn rocks & cut like lamb chops
And Wise'll drop Technician way faster than scam stocks
Ya mixed up..
Twisted like u either a herb or a n00b but couldn't choose
Punches leave u helpless like superman w/out a phone booth
Kids into incest..
& yeah..I Know for a fact..but lets see what his mom say
Oh wait..She ain't gonna say shit..she was his prom date!
Ya elevation's funny!....
Tha shit took a downfall..I'm higher than u..& u on cloud 420
Really lightweight..cuz I ate him in seconds,wasn't even hungry
U nothing...
Accepting tha callout?better think it through..ya king of fools
T's got no use..This Technician dosen't even have any tools!

We collabed... over aim the keys straight banged it out ....
& now that shit's up... you do nothin' but drag it down!
Shit son... now i might look bad... it's all thanks to this ....
Wisdom?... kids punches are sad... surprised LLL sanctioned you!
Wise Ways...climbs for days..still cant reach where Tech finds his place ...
Rewind his taste ...find his pace... so whack his rhymes beyond Third Base!
Doesn't show is location... even the hometown's ashamed of this cat ...
Name in Wits End roatation?...did lots of ass kissing b4 they gave him that!
We battled kinda recent... so I thought that you'd drop a 1/4 of heat shit ....
But the only time you acheive it...involves some toilet water and feces!

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Lol Whos The Bitch With His Momma Or Grandma In The Pic Hes A Rappa Lol Eminem With A Crew Cut

^hahha .... uppn.............................................g ood battle.....i thought it was 10 lines
oh well
uppn

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i don't know, I'm not sure 'cause this is close, the prom date thing was nice, but your structure was weird, and if you look in the forum of that pic, you notice you don't give up on that 420 like it's the only personal you can throw out, besides the name disses, some of your punches hit, but like the "blah blah pink pussy wearin' a thong?" yeah what's your point, although superman with the phonebooth thing was okay, but i don't see where it's goin

The picture in tek's was pretty cool, you had a pretty good verse, you had a different structure too, in some places your flow was off, but you had a lot of personals and you also had some multies, the punches landed pretty nice and it was an overall good verse

I don't know this was really close, but I'm gunna have to vote for.....tek
, i know I'm probably that one vote that votes for someone, but so be it, you both had really good verses but i liked tek's better, it just seemed to hit harder


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...047#post1155047 please leave a well explained vote because I'm sick of messin' with herbs that don't know how to...

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Later DanE
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ummm okay.. wise ways took this because it was a better all around verse.. tech didn't have many hard hitting punches..
Kids into incest..
& yeah..I Know for a fact..but lets see what his mom say
Oh wait..She ain't gonna say shit..she was his prom date!
that killed it.. and ^^ guy up there.. his structure is how mostly everybody else does it now.. its not structure that wins battles its flow and punches.. whcih wise took..
so
vote
wise
ways!

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Yo who is this pretty pink pussy wearing a damn thong?
You wan't proof? This fruitcake's gots quotes for cam'ron
ok operm nice personal shot, metaphor coulda been better
This fuck gets hit with damn rocks & cut like lamb chops
And Wise'll drop Technician way faster than scam stocks
nice follow through, although i though you were lacking on your punch
Ya mixed up..
filler
Twisted like u either a herb or a n00b but couldn't choose
Punches leave u helpless like superman w/out a phone booth
nice set, althoguh the follow through is a little play, heard it before. nice punch
Kids into incest..
& yeah..I Know for a fact..but lets see what his mom say
Oh wait..She ain't gonna say shit..she was his prom date!
alright connection with your lines, the punch wasnt much seemed sort of generic
Ya elevation's funny!....
Tha shit took a downfall..I'm higher than u..& u on cloud 420
decent personal spin off. punch was alright
Really lightweight..cuz I ate him in seconds,wasn't even hungry
U nothing...
flow fell off. Punch needed more i thought
Accepting tha callout?better think it through..ya king of fools
T's got no use..This Technician dosen't even have any tools
alright personal with the follow through, punch could have used more i thought

Over all you had a nice verse, alright rhyme scheme flow was ok. punchs could have used a little more but you have some nice ones in there. Liked your opener, but thought over all your metaphors needed some work.




We collabed... over aim the keys straight banged it out ....
& now that shit's up... you do nothin' but drag it down!
nice personal, good metaphor
Shit son... now i might look bad... it's all thanks to this ....
Wisdom?... kids punches are sad... surprised LLL sanctioned you!
working personals, but i thought your punch could have hit a little more
Wise Ways...climbs for days..still cant reach where Tech finds his place ...
Rewind his taste ...find his pace... so whack his rhymes beyond Third Base!
Nice bar i thought, had everything, metaphor was good, punch was good
Doesn't show is location... even the hometown's ashamed of this cat ...
Name in Wits End roatation?...did lots of ass kissing b4 they gave him that!
LoL good bar, dope personal
We battled kinda recent... so I thought that you'd drop a 1/4 of heat shit ....
But the only time you acheive it...involves some toilet water and feces!
nice ending although i thought your metaphor was played

over all your verse was alright, good punchs alot of personals i thought. Your metphors werent bad and your flow was alright although could have been better.

Vote- Technician

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