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TheUnderRated 5 100.00%
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Old 02-04-04, 12:38 PM   #1
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TheUnderRated vs. -Technician-

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12-14
blindspits
pm me when your done....
no/crew/hate/dr/
checkin when you can....p
 
Old 02-04-04, 12:42 PM   #2
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checkin in now.....
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Old 02-04-04, 01:17 PM   #3
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This is the 3rd time, I'm done tellin you your through..
Just look..
..Even your own sigs runnin' circles around your crew!
Insane Joker, but sure as hell no Lyricist u have crippled will..
I called you out..
..Plain broke ya, bored & well I wanted to aquire the triple kill!
How much does it take before these young bucks learn!?
Again..
..An elder is talkin' so shut your mouth untill it's ur turn!
You might think you've done things to go & prove your vet..
But..
..Truth is this kid didnt break thru or even dent puberty yet!
Grow up, that goes for your skill to dawg get your flow up..
So..
..If we ever battle again your verse can actually show up!
Freestyle Cyper Fhanatic, props to you..how about that...
Herb..
..Beatin you is automatic, everything you put out's wack!
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Old 02-04-04, 01:17 PM   #4
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Tech what you fixin to do don't you know my speeds literally breakneck?..
Drop this kid so hard he'll Bounce like his name was ben Affleck...
Wanted this third rematch fine i'll give it to you like Ruff sex...
In the end you'll be a sore loser...I got this pussy in check...
Tech..I disect your emotions with extreme diagnosis when you gon it?
Like rocks to erosion, my words to explosion, change over time so you get it...
Came 1nce I yawned, came twice..I sighed..this third time I Woke up...
If you actually swingin to hit me i suggest you choke up...
I was gonna let you win 3 but you dissed my boy...then my crew...
would of ate you up and spit you out on the spot but kid chews bad for you!!
You got that mouth cancer don't gimme no bullshit excuses...
you write more whack open mics and cyphers than damon dash produces...
You knew this was personal and i was gonna come with the blaze...
Keep you mouth shut cause i'm on a bitch hunt like Old Salem ways...
 
Old 02-04-04, 01:19 PM   #5
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3rd times a charm uppin for votes lets get this closed............................................ .......
 
Old 02-04-04, 01:20 PM   #6
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nice verse,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,l,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,......... ....
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Old 02-04-04, 01:41 PM   #7
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uppppppppppppppppppnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn........... ......
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Old 02-04-04, 01:59 PM   #8
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Yeah...Tech the third time is the charm...you came tight son but Under had a chip on his shoulder and a monkey on his back...

Under....You betta Get.. That..Dirt off ya shoulder...good shit man you came real hard..the salem witch hunt line...the damon dash funny shit... the baseball chokeup line...good shit..

Tech you had some good lines too though bro..the running circles line...the puberty diss..good shit..just a little lightweight compared to other cat..he had a lot of anger to express I guess...any way i vote for underrated..more hard hitting punchlines..more sustainment and a lot more agression..Good Battle Boys...Holla.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112093
 
Old 02-04-04, 02:01 PM   #9
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the underrated takes dis.he was simply alround beta.Technician- good verse.work on it....
v/underrated
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Old 02-04-04, 02:12 PM   #10
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This is the 3rd time, I'm done tellin you your through..
Just look..
..Even your own sigs runnin' circles around your crew!
Insane Joker, but sure as hell no Lyricist u have crippled will..
I called you out..
..Plain broke ya, bored & well I wanted to aquire the triple kill!


^^tech won with this shit right here..

flow-tech
punches-tech
wordplay-tech
personals-tech

he took it all categorys.. much more complex rhyme scheme, a few punches but more than better than underated's, his best attempt was the ben affleck line and that was a bit of a stretch.. techs personals smacked him in the face.. just a much better more polished verse.. underated had a better flow than ive seen perviously, and the closer was decent but techs was better, his verse hit harder, its pretty obvious.. honest vote vote-tech

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. - Axiom
 
Old 02-04-04, 02:17 PM   #11
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Is this kid serious??????....................I'll report that in a sec but i have a guest over right now so i gotta go peace out..............
 
Old 02-04-04, 02:19 PM   #12
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i broke the vote down.. in every aspect, i quoted lines.. i explained everything, you got beat, period.. its obvious so anyone with a brain.. so cry, report, jerk off, do what u gotta do.. im at his house so, if u have a problem with the IP shit ill go vote from my house.. not a big deal, its just sad u gotta cry over an internet vote.. BIATCH
 
Old 02-04-04, 03:21 PM   #13
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ok i'll use my third up cmon guys need votes on this...if you can poll poll and leave your link i'll follow links on good votes that i think will hold up so i don't waste my time/.............pz XXXX3
 
Old 02-04-04, 03:39 PM   #14
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^ yea i just i'll peep the links as welll....start voting..................
nice battle
 
Old 02-04-04, 03:40 PM   #15
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my votes don't count yet but whatever,

both had pretty good verses, but i felt unders better..
i thought the flow and structure were better and easier to follow and rap.
tech had good lines, in my opinion..
(" Again..
..An elder is talkin' so shut your mouth untill it's ur turn!
You might think you've done things to go & prove your vet..
But..
..Truth is this kid didnt break thru or even dent puberty yet!").....nice
but i really thought under was iller with multiple lines like....
("Like rocks to erosion, my words to explosion, change over time so you get it...
("Came 1nce I yawned, came twice..I sighed..this third time I Woke up...
If you actually swingin to hit me i suggest you choke up...")...hot
you write more whack open mics and cyphers than damon dash produces...
You knew this was personal and i was gonna come with the blaze...
Keep you mouth shut cause i'm on a bitch hunt like Old Salem ways...")..also hot

nice battle to both

v=under..if i could

vote on this for me, need 1 more vote to end..thx
knowledge vs dizzy hommel

peace
 
 


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