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Freeza pop | 0 | 0% | |
lyric | 5 | 100.00% | |
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02-06-04, 04:58 AM | #1 | |
Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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Freeza pop -vs- Lyric
IP: E792 25F4
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Typical newb talkin mad shit to a vet. Pussied out ona pinkslips battle. Go whenever your ready herb |
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02-06-04, 05:02 AM | #2 | |
Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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IP: E792 25F4
check in
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02-06-04, 05:05 AM | #3 | |
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IP: E792 25F4
checkin' in...... prepare to be rapified!
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02-06-04, 05:14 AM | #4 | |
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IP: E792 25F4
This mad hatter foo thinks he is gonna beat me down
Sad thing is, he's gonna go home with a frown I'm leery of lyric after he pussed out on a pink slip I guess he was afraid he'd be forever limp dicked He says he's the vet, maybe, but I think he's all wet this pre cum chumb better study up, or his ego is gonna deflate just like his jockie cup I'm gonna injure his pride Lyric, you're gonna wish you'd died! |
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02-06-04, 05:24 AM | #5 | |
Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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IP: E792 25F4
Freeza burn cause the shit you spits whack like your lines
If you spit like this Do I even need to fuckin try? I asked for a pinkslip battle, but your ass pussied out This was your answer Hehe whos the lil bitch now? Fuckin bitch, Dun ever think you can fuck with me at all My personals are low blows, but you dun have any balls Cause I know ya a girl, form ya last battle, it was whack My first line was enough to merk your whole fuckin act The fuck you think you are, Jus anutha wannabe white bitch Dun think that we're friends, cause like diareah your whack shit |
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02-06-04, 06:49 AM | #6 | |
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IP: DF7B C8F7
This mad hatter foo thinks he is gonna beat me down
Sad thing is, he's gonna go home with a frown ^^weak opener...should be strong to start it off I'm leery of lyric after he pussed out on a pink slip I guess he was afraid he'd be forever limp dicked ^^abit played, put not bad personal He says he's the vet, maybe, but I think he's all wet ^^played, cos i used something similar before..lol..bad structure this pre cum chumb better study up, or his ego is gonna deflate just like his jockie cup ^^quite weak I'm gonna injure his pride Lyric, you're gonna wish you'd died! ^^weak, and too short... bad closer Freeza burn cause the shit you spits whack like your lines If you spit like this Do I even need to fuckin try? ^^ok personal I asked for a pinkslip battle, but your ass pussied out This was your answer Hehe whos the lil bitch now? ^^who dropped out??... but it was another ok personal, bit weak for a punch Fuckin bitch, Dun ever think you can fuck with me at all My personals are low blows, but you dun have any balls ^^funny punch... not bad Cause I know ya a girl, form ya last battle, it was whack My first line was enough to merk your whole fuckin act ^^a bit played, but not a bad punch The fuck you think you are, Jus anutha wannabe white bitch Dun think that we're friends, cause like diareah your whack shit ^^again quite funny... average closer all in all lyric's verse was harder hittin and the flow and structure made it an easier,,, althought mainly its the punches i vote on...so...vote=lyric |
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02-06-04, 06:52 AM | #7 | |
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IP: 6F9E F23B
Lyric won this battle hands down.....
Flow, punches, structure...everything was much better by the man called Lyric Hit up the topical battle in the link http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112266 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded |
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02-06-04, 07:23 AM | #8 |
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IP: A965 0752
This mad hatter foo thinks he is gonna beat me down
Sad thing is, he's gonna go home with a frown I'm leery of lyric after he pussed out on a pink slip I guess he was afraid he'd be forever limp dicked He says he's the vet, maybe, but I think he's all wet this pre cum chumb better study up, or his ego is gonna deflate just like his jockie cup I'm gonna injure his pride Lyric, you're gonna wish you'd died! Freezapop Flow- He flowed decent but the structure was messed up The last two lines really fell off. Punches/Personals- The few punches he had were played and weak. Used a couple of personals, but they were also weak. vocab-nothing special, basic. creativity- Freeza didnt get very creative. Needs to dig deeper. Ideas were played out Freeza burn cause the shit you spits whack like your lines If you spit like this Do I even need to fuckin try? I asked for a pinkslip battle, but your ass pussied out This was your answer Hehe whos the lil bitch now? Fuckin bitch, Dun ever think you can fuck with me at all My personals are low blows, but you dun have any balls Cause I know ya a girl, form ya last battle, it was whack My first line was enough to merk your whole fuckin act The fuck you think you are, Jus anutha wannabe white bitch Dun think that we're friends, cause like diareah your whack shit Lyric Flow- good flow and structure, carried well Punches/Personals- good personals and decent punches. Liked the low-blows line, and the Freeza's last battle line. Vocab- nothing that special, but it worked because of the flow creativity- not a bad job here. Punches were direct and the personals were good. I'd have to say that this battle was decided by punches/ personals. Lyric's were more creative and hit alot harder. Freeza' came too weak with his punches/personals. He should also work on his structure and creativity. I cant officially vote (not enough posts) but my vote would go to: Lyric Vote on these fukn' battles! apathy vs. Gravity apathy vs, jamie |
02-06-04, 10:39 AM | #9 | |
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IP: E792 25F4
Thanks for the feedback....uppin #1
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02-06-04, 10:50 AM | #10 | |
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IP: E792 25F4
Uppin #2! please drop a vote in this battle!!!
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02-06-04, 11:07 AM | #11 | |
Dont Push Me Of Regret It
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IP: 92E6 7769
yo lyric take dis...simple reason he waz beta by far...keep it up both of u's
v/lyric Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Token
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02-06-04, 11:37 AM | #12 | |
Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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IP: E792 25F4
uppin 1
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02-07-04, 06:50 PM | #13 | |
Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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IP: D154 1BD3
uppin 2.. please drop an honest vote here
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02-07-04, 06:55 PM | #14 | |
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IP: 399E F0FD
I need not say much lyric got em
his punched and lyrics were obvoiusly better in this battle *yo check my battle timeless vs zikio version 2 |
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02-07-04, 08:36 PM | #15 | |
Middle Weight
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IP: 6EB9 28C9
freeza pop - structure was good.......flow was ok........vocab was pretty basic........no good multis.......no metas.......some of the punches were decent.......no good personals.......
lyric - structure was good......flow was on target......vocab was nice.......pretty good multis.......ok metas........most of ya punches hit hard........good personals...... breakdown - structure-tie flow-lyric vocab-lyric multis-lyric metas-lyric punches-lyric personals-lyric creativity-lyric conclusion - this was a pretty one sided battle......lyric beats him in every category except structure so he gets my vote...... VOTE - LYRIC
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