10-12 lines
check in and drop around 30 min
should be fun

I'll drop when I get a few minutes

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Did I Beat You Before?
Yeah, Probably

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check in................................................

Remember last time you tried out... and no was my answer?
Thats cause you were only relatively ill...
...when ya cousin came down with cancer
I hit faster... best believe punches will scar kids
And leave this star buried... just like Phoenix did
So prepare to get slapped... I hate bitches outta line
And after this battle, kid will fall back...
...just like BTK's hairline
And I wont lie... Phoenix is wacker than most.
In this he'll be like a scared receiver...
...awfully scared to post
Ya bills get you evicted... man, mine reside in banks
And yeah ya shit is underground..
...floating in a septic tank

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He bit, quit, and tried open mic...how honorable
But the reason is...
...he found a new board chalkful of unheard topicals
But now hes goin audible...but wont ever come clean
Hit up his sound click...
...and punched my fist through my fucking screen
Its dissapointing: got words, but ya voice makes me shiver
Like a mailman without a mail truck...
...the way the faggot cant deliver
Nerd...i like to come clean...but your fucking nasty
And i'd pop you in the face...but the dorks got bad acne
So try to get back at me...i seriously dare you...
Or is it like approaching girls...
...you're too fucking scared to
Hopin to resume his rep wit audio the fag came back in
But your voicebox restricts your expression...
...no wonder you're called trapped wit

Mentionables...

Trapt...

"Remember last time you tried out... and no was my answer?
Thats cause you were only relatively ill...
...when ya cousin came down with cancer"

AND

So prepare to get slapped... I hate bitches outta line
And after this battle, kid will fall back...
...just like BTK's hairline

(Although highly untrue...us Latinos don't worry about that like you crackers!)

Phoeniix...

He bit, quit, and tried open mic...how honorable
But the reason is...
...he found a new board chalkful of unheard topicals

AND

So try to get back at me...i seriously dare you...
Or is it like approaching girls...
...you're too fucking scared to

I almost mentioned the closer, but ya fucked up the wording, man.

Very close battle...

Chrit my man, I'd say ya lost this battle...

But ya closer was better than his.

That's how close this was in my eyes.

Peace

Holla back on mine and Feeb's battle up here in Elite.

Trapt Wit: Winner

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Hell the fuck o...

Feeble vs. Born

Thanks

Peace

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This was a good fuckin battle... Chrit you came hard and I thought you took it... consistant, witty punches (one was slightly played: the fall back/hairline) but overall a good read.

But then I read Phoeniix's... nice rhyme scheme & multi's in combination with witty punches. A couple were played as well, but I felt the was the opener multi's with the punch set the tone for the battle... and took it considering the other punches and consistancy.

vote = Phoeniix

Truly an Elite battle....

i'ma go wit Trapt cuz dukes came wit better wordplay and harder hittin
punches...not taking anything away from Phoenix cuz he had some
decent shit in there too...but not just as good as Wits...


v/Trapt

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first three lines for phoenixx i liked a lot
thats shit if u would have kept up with it
u would have won. but then u faded off..
witt was on point throught some nice ones in there too.
but on consistency I go witt trapt ..

v/Trapt..

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Cancer lines are played as fuck..

So prepare to get slapped... I hate bitches outta line
And after this battle, kid will fall back...
...just like BTK's hairline

lmfao...

V/Trapt.

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^thats exactly why you have a NOFX signature.

Nofx own's you =) & cancer lines are played.. so stfu newb.

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