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Rule | 2 | 28.57% | |
Brethren | 5 | 71.43% | |
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02-12-04, 10:37 PM | #1 | |
Fuck yo couch
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Brethren vs. Rule
IP: 0039 DC7A
10 lines
due in a half hour House Rules Good Luck
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02-12-04, 10:49 PM | #2 | |
..Soft Focus..
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IP: 1B3B C284
Kid you got 3 battles checked into now so your wins brittle
Shouldn'a made you game should'a chocked on the whistle Indeed your twisted big birds going out of business quick He went down with ya battle ship like ya head to a dick Don't jump to conclusions about links in my sig light weight There to prove i'd beat you topically as well for fuck sakes Michigan huh? your across the border far from rules zone Resembles ya talent level princess down away from my throne I could'a slaughtered you with punches from the eye of death See the casket open with a mirror now tell me has the L Left?
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02-12-04, 11:10 PM | #3 | |
Fuck yo couch
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IP: 0039 DC7A
This your first real battle Rule?! I can tell, just stick to topicals,
Before I put a 6 pack right into your face, like thick abdominals, Ruler?! Hold on buddy, lemme measure the guillotine, Before we see your spleen end up all in people's drinks, like Creatine, Rule a virgin, I'm 'full o queens' the way my cards all royal, Punch you in the face 21 times, make ya eye 'Black Jack', like gargoyles, Charbroil you, Rule couldn't 'rip the net' if he was a 'Big Fish', Rule prays for votes, 5 for me, and he's already on his 'sixth wish', Meantion me openly 3 times, I'll appear, Death's what you hopin', Rule has septicly-spoken, Never Heard??? Rules are meant to be broken. Sorry, I was a little slow
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02-13-04, 07:17 AM | #4 | |
Fuck yo couch
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IP: DD8A D068
Uppin #1 .
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02-13-04, 12:05 PM | #5 | |
..Soft Focus..
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IP: 1B3B C284
uppen number 2....................................
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02-13-04, 12:30 PM | #6 | |
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IP: 40D6 EBC3
iight...
rule Kid you got 3 battles checked into now so your wins brittle Shouldn'a made you game should'a chocked on the whistle Lol... Made me laugh... 6/10 Indeed your twisted big birds going out of business quick He went down with ya battle ship like ya head to a dick Lol... Punch... 6/10 Don't jump to conclusions about links in my sig light weight There to prove i'd beat you topically as well for fuck sakes Not bad... 5/10 Michigan huh? your across the border far from rules zone Resembles ya talent level princess down away from my throne Nice... 6/10 I could'a slaughtered you with punches from the eye of death See the casket open with a mirror now tell me has the L Left? Good... 6/10 Overall... 29/50 Brethen This your first real battle Rule?! I can tell, just stick to topicals, Before I put a 6 pack right into your face, like thick abdominals, Didnt like this... Doesnt make sense to me... 4/10 Ruler?! Hold on buddy, lemme measure the guillotine, Before we see your spleen end up all in people's drinks, like Creatine, Not bad... 5/10 Rule a virgin, I'm 'full o queens' the way my cards all royal, Punch you in the face 21 times, make ya eye 'Black Jack', like gargoyles, Ergh... Played... 4/10 Charbroil you, Rule couldn't 'rip the net' if he was a 'Big Fish', Rule prays for votes, 5 for me, and he's already on his 'sixth wish', Good... 6/10 Meantion me openly 3 times, I'll appear, Death's what you hopin', Rule has septicly-spoken, Never Heard??? Rules are meant to be broken. Feeding... ... And played against rule... 5/10 Overall... 24/50 Cant poll as im in rule's crew... Which a only remembered halfway through... Lol... But its a breakdown for you both... Consider it an UP a guess... v/rule Hit this up please... Rule, you can up it obviously... Ive got none left... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...32&page=1&pp=15 Thanks... Pz... |
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02-13-04, 01:03 PM | #7 | |
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IP: A1CA 8125
Kid you got 3 battles checked into now so your wins brittle
Shouldn'a made you game should'a chocked on the whistle ^hmm alright this isn't a bad opener....personal Ok Indeed your twisted big birds going out of business quick He went down with ya battle ship like ya head to a dick ^meh this is a sex line try to stay away from those... Don't jump to conclusions about links in my sig light weight There to prove i'd beat you topically as well for fuck sakes ^good line......good bar nice nice Michigan huh? your across the border far from rules zone Resembles ya talent level princess down away from my throne ^hmm alright this is an OK personal not stingin like it should though I could'a slaughtered you with punches from the eye of death See the casket open with a mirror now tell me has the L Left? ^ok this is a gpod personal Punch and you threw in some wordplay nice... This your first real battle Rule?! I can tell, just stick to topicals, Before I put a 6 pack right into your face, like thick abdominals, ^ok good meta4 nice personal good opener Ruler?! Hold on buddy, lemme measure the guillotine, Before we see your spleen end up all in people's drinks, like Creatine, ^ok this is another Ok meta4...bad play off the name in my opinion Rule a virgin, I'm 'full o queens' the way my cards all royal, Punch you in the face 21 times, make ya eye 'Black Jack', like gargoyles, ^hmm alright i didn't like this bar either kind of filler in the first Charbroil you, Rule couldn't 'rip the net' if he was a 'Big Fish', Rule prays for votes, 5 for me, and he's already on his 'sixth wish', ^good wordplay i like it punch came a little weak but nice overall Meantion me openly 3 times, I'll appear, Death's what you hopin', Rule has septicly-spoken, Never Heard??? Rules are meant to be broken. ^hehe nice good ending good opener and ending.... I think brethen came nice good opener and ending but his middle fell off so just figure out how to fill out your verse a little more brethren and you'll get it......Rule nice consistency with a few creative lines...work on your punches and get rid of some of your sensless profanity....both y'all hit this up plz thanx... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114031 |
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02-13-04, 01:22 PM | #8 | |
New to RB
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IP: 4577 CD9A
pretty good battle but goin wit gut instinct
i liked brethen more...liked his opener and closer more ThA Ce http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113988 vote there^^^...return the favor |
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02-13-04, 01:29 PM | #9 | |
Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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IP: D154 1BD3
Kid you got 3 battles checked into now so your wins brittle
Shouldn'a made you game should'a chocked on the whistle pretty nice Indeed your twisted big birds going out of business quick He went down with ya battle ship like ya head to a dick played Don't jump to conclusions about links in my sig light weight There to prove i'd beat you topically as well for fuck sakes ok Michigan huh? your across the border far from rules zone Resembles ya talent level princess down away from my throne decent I could'a slaughtered you with punches from the eye of death See the casket open with a mirror now tell me has the L Left? good closer This your first real battle Rule?! I can tell, just stick to topicals, Before I put a 6 pack right into your face, like thick abdominals, decent Ruler?! Hold on buddy, lemme measure the guillotine, Before we see your spleen end up all in people's drinks, like Creatine, blah Rule a virgin, I'm 'full o queens' the way my cards all royal, Punch you in the face 21 times, make ya eye 'Black Jack', like gargoyles, kinda stretched and forced Charbroil you, Rule couldn't 'rip the net' if he was a 'Big Fish', Rule prays for votes, 5 for me, and he's already on his 'sixth wish', decent Meantion me openly 3 times, I'll appear, Death's what you hopin', Rule has septicly-spoken, Never Heard??? Rules are meant to be broken. ok closer Pretty decent battle..but I have to give it to Rule...He jus ahd a more consistent verse...while Brethren fell off at parts. Rule had some nice punches and personals in there too. Vote=Rule Please drop an honest vote here guys...thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113978 |
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02-13-04, 08:40 PM | #10 | |
Middle Weight
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IP: 345D 5396
RULE
Kid you got 3 battles checked into now so your wins brittle Shouldn'a made you game should'a chocked on the whistle ok opener..........wasnt really feelin the second line.. Indeed your twisted big birds going out of business quick He went down with ya battle ship like ya head to a dick pretty tight.......feelin the second line......good wordplay....... Don't jump to conclusions about links in my sig light weight There to prove i'd beat you topically as well for fuck sakes decent.......wasnt really a punch........its aight........ Michigan huh? your across the border far from rules zone Resembles ya talent level princess down away from my throne ok first line......second line is pretty good.......ok punch....... I could'a slaughtered you with punches from the eye of death See the casket open with a mirror now tell me has the L Left? i liked this closer.........second line is tight.........good punch....... Conclusion - structure was good.......flow was on target..........vocab was pretty good........multis were ok.......some of the wordplay was tight........some of the punches connected..........ok personal OVERALL - 6.5/10 BRETHEN This your first real battle Rule?! I can tell, just stick to topicals, Before I put a 6 pack right into your face, like thick abdominals, nice opener........good punch........nice wordplay......good way to start the battle...... Ruler?! Hold on buddy, lemme measure the guillotine, Before we see your spleen end up all in people's drinks, like Creatine, no punch.......wordplay and multis are tight........ Rule a virgin, I'm 'full o queens' the way my cards all royal, Punch you in the face 21 times, make ya eye 'Black Jack', like gargoyles, good punch.......nice wordplay......... Charbroil you, Rule couldn't 'rip the net' if he was a 'Big Fish', Rule prays for votes, 5 for me, and he's already on his 'sixth wish', once again, good punch........tight wordplay....... Meantion me openly 3 times, I'll appear, Death's what you hopin', Rule has septicly-spoken, Never Heard??? Rules are meant to be broken. pretty ill closer.........while the second line is kinda played its still good.........nice personal......... CONCLUSION - good structure........flow was on target........vocab was good........multis were pretty good.........nice wordplay........the punches that were there connected well.........tight personals...... OVERALL - 7.5/10 VOTE - BRETHEN
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02-14-04, 02:52 PM | #11 | |
smiley on ya mothers
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IP: FD6B F0D6
this battle was pretty good.. i think that brethren took this battle based on his wordplay and punchlines both battles were good but i feel like brethren came with better punchlines and rhyme schemes..
vote- brethren
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02-14-04, 03:11 PM | #12 | |
smiley on ya mothers
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IP: FD6B F0D6
ill explain more.. also i felt like brethren came nicer with rhymes heres a line of his that i liked "This your first real battle Rule?! I can tell, just stick to topicals,
Before I put a 6 pack right into your face, like thick abdominals," he had nice personals in his verse mixed with nice punchline. which makes for a winner now rule i felt like his verse was good.. but brethrens was better becuase he had better wordplay and disses
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02-14-04, 03:36 PM | #13 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 4577 CD9A
flow brethren
personals brethren ohhhhs- brethern simplicity- Rule metas- brethen overall looked like a one sided battle brethren was deliverin punches taht hit with precision.... they didn't cram with wasting fillers kinda like rule did.... rule u must step up an make a lil but more complex verse.... it was good but highly outmatch in this one vote brethren
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02-14-04, 03:39 PM | #14 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 4577 CD9A
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3981post1183981
i forgot here is my link.... make shore u drop a honest vote to return the favor..... link^^^
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<table style=filter:GLOW(color=darkorange)>Virtuoso</table> <table style=filter:GLOW(color=white) ...:::::: I ::::::...... ...:::::: J ::::::...... ...:::::: L ::::::......</table> Damn… some ‘common sense’ must not be so common-to-u… Scared of your shadow?…trust me that’s always been Following-u....TEST me.....you'll soon be ~Sonned~ |
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02-14-04, 05:36 PM | #15 | |
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IP: 54CE EF3B
Yeah!....Go Brethren..Go Brethren..Go..Go..Go Brethren!
Nah for real...a very malicious laying here...i don't like the feeding Brethren but looking at the battle and weighing my options i have to still give it to you...you had a few dope Lines.."Your spleen will end up in people's drinks like creatine" I like the multi's...dope punch and overall you really owned this cat. Rule you been around here long enough to know that every bar has to hit son...you ws going off on tangents and shit and really didn't keep your focus on hitting Brethren with quality punches every line. There was a lot of useless filler and overall I think you need to..Get...That...Dirt off ya flowing! I said..Get ...That ..Dirt Off ya Flowing! Ya shit needs work...real talk son.... Both of yua'll hit up this battle for me...I need it closed. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113614 |
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