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Ambitious | 2 | 40.00% | |
menolin | 3 | 60.00% | |
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02-16-04, 08:37 AM | #1 | ||||
\/ pissing me off!!!!
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Ambitious V.s Menolin
IP: 006A C617
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i set up you spit first usual rules no feeding blind spit crew votes are allowed, since we are in the same crew!!
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02-16-04, 09:32 AM | #2 | |||||||
Here's Lookin At You Kid
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IP: E110 691F
checkin in...... i'll drop in like and hour and a half........
11am....around there.....u drop right after
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02-16-04, 11:35 AM | #3 | |||||||
Here's Lookin At You Kid
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IP: 3D67 C959
Blah ... Key ...
I feel ashamed ...The Executives used to be a respected crew... Simple & plain ...untill ILLunatic went ahead and accepted you! An outcast ...searchin for someone who shares his point of view... Still not dope ...& this is even after he smokes a joint or two! But honestly ...really... what meaning is given to the name Menolin? Punches hesitant ...so it can't be associated with benevolence After this battle ...there'll be no room to repent ...or regret..... Cause my fists leave some constricting dents in Menolin's chest! Recieve a rest ...so choked up herb can't even breathe a breath... Believe this test ...cause Men thought he could actually be a vet! Read the best? ...you doin it and this time it'll lead to death... Menolins no All-Star ...but he wins this like the East beat the West! good luck fellar.....
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02-16-04, 11:37 AM | #4 | ||||
\/ pissing me off!!!!
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IP: 006A C617
this tired out technician.... gave up an became ambitious,
that makes no sense.... like buyin black cats, being supersticious.. Changed names & character fresh start or basically just the same, ^ Had to do that to prove that he is, Well??, he should change it to... lame... u heard his sound click? he could never 'sell-o-tape' to wackness he stuck, you needs over MCs lines to take, he's creativley dumbstruck, 20 plus Wins, wow impressive record an yet that mean shit, Neither does ur legacy, or ur old name you used to build it with people say history never repeats itself... .......so this is more like a second serving*..... key up words to damage your health... he batlles newbs so much..... his learning curves, still curving.. *i already beat him once
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02-16-04, 12:35 PM | #5 | ||||
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IP: 4577 CD9A
I feel ashamed ...The Executives used to be a respected crew...
Simple & plain ...untill ILLunatic went ahead and accepted you! ^Good opener But honestly ...really... what meaning is given to the name Menolin? Punches hesitant ...so it can't be associated with benevolence ^Your best punch Menolin this tired out technician.... gave up an became ambitious, that makes no sense.... ^Makes no sense..since you also had a name change... Changed names & character fresh start or basically just the same, ^Once again..it was a good bar..but it just doesn't work..since you also had your name changed.. he batlles newbs so much..... his learning curves, still curving.. ^Nice closer... I was a bit dissapointed with this battle...I expected more from you two... both had good flows and structure going...but...Menolin..you tried to hit with the name change..when your name was also recently changed..which makes no sense at all...that made lot of your good punches pointless....Ambitious...you had few punches that hit hard..I really liked your opening...close battle...Vote=Ambitious |
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02-16-04, 12:41 PM | #6 | ||||
\/ pissing me off!!!!
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IP: 006A C617
thanks for voting,
i was playing off his, i was punching him, an not myself!! was my name technician, an i changed it to ambitious?
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02-16-04, 01:58 PM | #7 | |||||||
Here's Lookin At You Kid
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IP: 5A51 7E09
upppn this...................
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02-16-04, 02:07 PM | #8 | |||||
Can u beat me?..Hell No
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IP: C1DA C961
hmm....very tough to decide
ambitious-good verse.....u had some nice punches that hit well...i liked ya opener...u had some real good flow in your verse....and for the most part ya verse was consistant...u had a couple of creative punches as well......good verse.....7/10 menolin-u also had a good verse.....u had some nice personals off of his name change which i really liked....u had a really creative verse.......u also had some nice punches....nice verse.......8 1/2-10 v/menolin....very tough battle to judge....everything was pretty much even...in the end i just felt that menolins personals won him this battle.........good battle.......no hate |
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02-16-04, 02:23 PM | #9 | |||
..I Know Kung Fu..
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IP: 1481 46A3
hmm...close battle here
007 came nice..I liked ya opener alot Very creative..but then it fell off after that ya closer was tha only good one Tha middle just seemed like filler to me.. Ambitious..ya first 6 lines were good Then you fell off also..tha rest was filler Then ya closer was good too.. Up to date wordplay..nice so 8 good lines is better than 4..good battle v/ Ambitious |
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02-16-04, 02:51 PM | #10 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: C1DA C961
Tough decision
two very different styles, Lets see structure: Ambitious Punches: Amb Flow: Amb Multies: none really metas: uh... tie Personals: both had a bunch so it was 'bout even Melion you had an okay verse, I didn't understand the whole first part at all, so that took away from your verse for me, structure was off too (for me) It wasn't really a good verse Amb, I've seen better, punches were alright, flow was good, structure was nice, overall i was feelin' your verse better, it just made more sense and was easier to understand Vote: Ambitious
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02-16-04, 03:41 PM | #11 | |||||||
Here's Lookin At You Kid
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IP: 5A51 7E09
true..... uppn.....i take it you couldnt poll yet?
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02-17-04, 01:47 AM | #12 | ||||||||
Here's Lookin At You Kid
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IP: 8264 9293
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02-17-04, 05:34 AM | #13 | |||
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IP: 1495 6CD9
Ambitious - nice personal verse.. turned ya 'inside' knowledge into effective punches.. a few played/weak concepts i.e. 'dope' line but the rest was pretty consistant.. nice use of metas.. created some nice original concepts.. flow was smooth an easy to follow.. solid all round
menolin - nice opener.. personal an witty.. an u stayed like that thruout ya verse.. flow fell off a lil bit a one or two points cos of the structure but overall it was easy to follow.. ya punches were effective cos u used the personals more creatively an the structure emphasises the rite words.. the closer was also pretty coo.. nice personal an good imagery wiv the 'learnin curve'.. VoTe = menolin Jus edges it for turnin his personals into more effective an witty punches.. hella close battle tho.. props to both of u.. Could both of drop a vote on this plz.. it needs respected heads to vote on it: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114168 ...1
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02-17-04, 11:52 AM | #14 | ||||||
Flyweight
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IP: F596 9C85
I feel ashamed ...The Executives used to be a respected crew...
Simple & plain ...untill ILLunatic went ahead and accepted you! An outcast ...searchin for someone who shares his point of view... Still not dope ...& this is even after he smokes a joint or two! ambitious had a hell of a verse ^^this being my favorite flow was remarkable.. personals hit hard.. a good punch or 2, but the disses and personals are what made this a solid verse, really smooth multis too for a steady flow key up words to damage your health... he batlles newbs so much..... his learning curves, still curving.. ^^feeling menolins finisher, shit was nice, not feeling the opener, the personals were kinda weak, about the name change n shit.. the finisher was a hard personal and creative wordplay.. had a decent flow, got choppy here n there, if the personals hit harder u would caused more damage, cuz i wasnt feelin too many punches, and the flow wasnt as complex or fluent as ambitious.. flow-amb punch-men for the finisher personals-amb creativity/consistancy-amb ambitious took this with a well polished verse that hit with a steady flow and personals vote-amb
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02-17-04, 04:22 PM | #15 | |||||||
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IP: FF89 3C60
I thought creativity and originality won this battle...
For Menolin. The flow was all Ambitious... Really nice. But I feel it hurt ya punches. Cuz what ya spit was pretty played. The opener...that's how everyone starts dissing a crew. By dissing them for letting you in. Played. The "wouldn't be dope/joints" is also pretty played out. Nice vocab, but again... Done like the multi's...it hurt ya punches. Ending shit with "benevolence" just doesn't come across hard. (and yes I know the meaning!) While Menolin threw shit I'd never seen before and that's rare to say. "Second serving" had the personal...cool. I'd go on, but really, to me, every thing was quotable except for that stupid 3 line "lame" bar. Just didn't like that. Everything else was wittier, harder, and alot more creative. So there. Peace
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