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M.C. Shadow 13 | 0 | 0% | |
Mentality | 5 | 100.00% | |
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02-16-04, 07:39 PM | #1 | |
Flyweight
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Mentality vs M.C. Shadow 13
IP: 029B 818C
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no d/r no crew no hate no feedin u spit first 3-0 KO Or 1st to 5 gl...due by 8:40...an hour |
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02-16-04, 07:50 PM | #2 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 029B 818C
checkin in and spittin...
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02-16-04, 07:56 PM | #3 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 5CAE 0E81
ile do my verse in 5:40 western time/////////////////////////////
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02-16-04, 08:10 PM | #4 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 5CAE 0E81
i cant tell the difrence if u a wanna be or if
u got a mentallity// cause i got hoes while u still struglin to get some dough// u betta work on ya flow cause the west coast gonna put ya in cold snow// its like ime jin and u the wanna be black vesion of slim what am i saying u anit nuthin like eminem// at least he got skill and i consida him ill hommy u just got killed// you from nyc and ime a south sida and ime eaven more proud of biggie// he represents north i represent south but itha way will bouth punch yo mouth// |
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02-16-04, 08:30 PM | #5 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 029B 818C
barely spittin
This kids weak....strugglin just to battle hard, i dismantle stars You'll get convicted....on a bike, you just cant handle bars Im ill, hypnotize kids who have stopped and saw, jaws drop'd and awww's Honesty, you? your like the lakers wit a budget cut, you just aint got tha balls Just watch the reply, for your health, kids will drop concern, i'll pop this herb Even if you spit with After Shave you still cant stop this burn What a shame, this lame couldn’t bring game if he collabed with 50 cent in an arcade Like a used copy of knockout kings your punches already been played, your outweighed Why you lyin to people and actin like your good Cuz your losing more focus than a ford dealership in a high crime neighborhood blah if that dont get me the win then what will |
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02-16-04, 10:46 PM | #6 | |
Jee-You Knit?
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IP: F7DA 37E8
Damn, why'd you go so hard on that kid Mentality? Fuck you obviously took it, great punches, weak flow though, that could use some fine tuning, I think it was thrown off due to the fact that you were trying to put together multi's.
Shadow, you need a punch, this isn't open mic, you need puns, and you need to attack, you pretty much just said anything anyone else could say on the middle of the street, and you attempted to make it rhyme. Three words, Wackness Emergency Center. Vote: Mentality.
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02-16-04, 11:34 PM | #7 |
Flyweight
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IP: E89F AEF0
shadow:
i cant tell the difrence if u a wanna be or if u got a mentallity// cause i got hoes while u still struglin to get some dough// u betta work on ya flow cause the west coast gonna put ya in cold snow// its like ime jin and u the wanna be black vesion of slim what am i saying u anit nuthin like eminem// at least he got skill and i consida him ill hommy u just got killed// you from nyc and ime a south sida and ime eaven more proud of biggie// he represents north i represent south but itha way will bouth punch yo mouth// im not gunna bother breaking this down...the structure is horrible...so were the punches....keep elevating mentality: This kids weak....strugglin just to battle hard, i dismantle stars You'll get convicted....on a bike, you just cant handle bars your structure and flow aint that good either...punch was pretty nice tho Im ill, hypnotize kids who have stopped and saw, jaws drop'd and awww's Honesty, you? your like the lakers wit a budget cut, you just aint got tha balls heh...this was aight....rhyming was nice Just watch the reply, for your health, kids will drop concern, i'll pop this herb Even if you spit with After Shave you still cant stop this burn this was ok...a lil weak but it was decent at the same time What a shame, this lame couldn’t bring game if he collabed with 50 cent in an arcade Like a used copy of knockout kings your punches already been played, your outweighed this punch coulda been so much more if u reworded it Why you lyin to people and actin like your good Cuz your losing more focus than a ford dealership in a high crime neighborhood heh....liked this... verdict: the choice is easy....mentality got this....didnt feel either structure...thought the lines were a bit stretched but its all good....
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02-17-04, 11:11 AM | #8 | |
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IP: 029B 818C
uppin 1....
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02-17-04, 12:22 PM | #9 |
Flyweight
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IP: F596 9C85
mentality murdered this plain n simple.. shadow u need a better flow, some more complex rhymes.. u gotta even ur bars out also, every 2 bars should rhyme its not good to switch so often it kills your momentum, some iight disses but no punches, mentality came in with the multi flow which made a smoother delivery on his punches were well above shadows verse.. this was an outclassed match.. mentality took it
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02-17-04, 12:55 PM | #10 | |
R.B's Demigod
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IP: 5E48 7779
This is the easiest battle i have to judge. Shadow had no punches just smoe mediocre disses. his flow has off because his structure was horrible, he had no multies and no metas it was like reading a long poem, you need to work on your whole aspect to battling yo, cause im sorry but that was garbage.
mentality killed him with his first bar. he had multies and crazy metas that were all pretty good. the punches were played but you didn't need any original one to take this one. Your lines were stretched a bit but it was worth it to get the punches across. VOTE_MENTALITY OPEN BATTLES(I TOOK THE TIME) http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113861
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02-17-04, 04:25 PM | #11 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 029B 818C
uppin 2 for that last vote
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02-17-04, 04:44 PM | #12 | |
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IP: 6EB7 0673
mc shadow i only saw ya structure and burst out laughin as i cud tell ya were wack mentality took this 1 easy harder punches and shit u basically killed im afta ya first 2 bars....shadow im not even gonna break urs down as its not worth the effort....1 tip 4 ya shadow log off never log bk on ur a disgrace 2 ya galt cali
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