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$pitacular | 5 | 100.00% | |
The Judge | 0 | 0% | |
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02-17-04, 12:42 PM | #1 | |
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The Judge Vs $pitacular
IP: 5F90 98D9
10 lines,
25 mins max, normal shit....good luck....... |
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02-17-04, 12:43 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 5F90 98D9
checking in...........................................good luck...............
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02-17-04, 12:50 PM | #3 |
You talkin to me?
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IP: AE7D DE0F
yo I'ma need more time than that man... I'm at work. At least an hour or so. Confirm OK and I will check in
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02-17-04, 01:02 PM | #4 | |
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IP: 5F90 98D9
ite 1 thing to no...is he got accepted for elite then thrown of,
Look at this little herb..thinks i'm a newb so he came wak like this, but to be honest man...ive seen broken toilets better....... ..........................at takeing the piss............ serveing this faggot like i was his assistent...in a shop, concentrate on yourself cause your balls would be a better thing to drop, your simular to a one leged hurdels race...the way your tripping, even your own foot is desperate to give your ass a kicking, looking at the executives roster it looks like your a shit talent scout, cause ill merk this bitch..faster than elite accepting him, ..............................and throwing him out...... you'de probally write ur whole verse in BOLD so it could have, ......................twice the potential............, because you no judge causes more upsets in this place than womens pre-mensrial. ...................... |
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02-17-04, 01:03 PM | #5 | |
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IP: 5F90 98D9
just hurry up and drop man...............................40 mins max from now.................gd luck.........
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02-17-04, 01:50 PM | #6 | |
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IP: 5F90 98D9
omg....................not anotha no show?...........just drop your shit man...................................
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02-17-04, 01:57 PM | #7 |
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IP: AE7D DE0F
He wonders why he wins battles... but never gets Our Respect
Look at your verse... You bite structure like a Plaigerist Architect You can't Compose ya self... You're style makes me laugh wrote ya shit on two Grid-lined papers... to make a Pair a Graph you be the Judge... I'm the Jury handin you Death Sentences Feel the Tension in the courtroom... while the Bench Pressin Him Like Iraq in War... you brag but really got a Limited Arsenal Thought he could battle me and Win... usin a Cheap Personal Leave you Lyin' down on the Floor... since you think you Rug-ged I then Permanantly Rest Your Case... Like I buried ya Luggage holla |
02-17-04, 02:29 PM | #8 |
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IP: AE7D DE0F
up up uppin...........................................
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02-17-04, 02:46 PM | #9 | |
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IP: 44FF 8BC0
Look at this little herb..thinks i'm a newb so he came wak like this,
but to be honest man...ive seen broken toilets better....... ..........................at takeing the piss............ no creativity there serveing this faggot like i was his assistent...in a shop, concentrate on yourself cause your balls would be a better thing to drop, lame first line, aight second your simular to a one leged hurdels race...the way your tripping, even your own foot is desperate to give your ass a kicking, played looking at the executives roster it looks like your a shit talent scout, cause ill merk this bitch..faster than elite accepting him, ..............................and throwing him out...... ok... you'de probally write ur whole verse in BOLD so it could have, ......................twice the potential............, because you no judge causes more upsets in this place than womens pre-mensrial. not good enuf for a close He wonders why he wins battles... but never gets Our Respect Look at your verse... You bite structure like a Plaigerist Architect Aight, nice play You can't Compose ya self... You're style makes me laugh wrote ya shit on two Grid-lined papers... to make a Pair a Graph again nice play you be the Judge... I'm the Jury handin you Death Sentences Feel the Tension in the courtroom... while the Bench Pressin Him aight Like Iraq in War... you brag but really got a Limited Arsenal Thought he could battle me and Win... usin a Cheap Personal second line was kinda filler Leave you Lyin' down on the Floor... since you think you Rug-ged I then Permanantly Rest Your Case... Like I buried ya Luggage again, nice play, nice Spit took this, jus cuz he had better word play that made his punches and personals hit. Vote - Spit Hit up my battles, aight?
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02-17-04, 03:28 PM | #10 |
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IP: AE7D DE0F
uppin............................................. ........
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02-17-04, 03:41 PM | #11 | |
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IP: FF89 3C60
Better structure...
Better directed punches. Better personals. That "elite/thrown out" Was about the only good, hard punch that Judge had. Everything else seemed forced...kinda funny (the "foot/ass kicking" line) But it wasn't hard and coulda been used for anyone. I dunno... Good battle But Spit clearly merked this kid with all those personals... Then I liked how he closed the last two bars with wit and wordplay. Peace
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02-17-04, 03:59 PM | #12 |
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IP: AE7D DE0F
uppin3............................................ ........
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02-17-04, 09:03 PM | #13 |
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IP: 923E C6CB
Uppin 4................................................. .....
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09-26-04, 08:54 PM | #14 | |
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IP: 3240 794D
ill have to give this old ass battle to spit cuz his was a lot wittier and creative then judges, judge i think your whack and i will beat your ass. fucka.
vote/spitaclr
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10-07-04, 01:03 AM | #15 | |
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IP: A59C 8706
$pitacular man you win, better punches better flow, better structure and all!!!
to the other guy, flow...not bad, but work on your punches man!! return the favour and vote on one of the battles below! |
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