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No bitin feedin recyclin
No bullshit votes
Verse due 1 hour after check in
Good luck...

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His best bets to fold... He says his cards weren't properly-delt,
The only thing you could do to make me laugh is offer-me-help,
Like not being able to stay 'on' topic... this kids spittin 'off'-hand,
If ya punches are 'hittin' then they must be makin a 'soft'-land,
I'd give him a chance... But his credibility is zero, Nobody to fear-though,
I'll serve you for dinner, saved himself from bein eaten and thinks hes a hero,
Must be in denial, but Im just waitin for written proof of this kids wack style,
Fuckin retarded herb... He'll read my verse and begin to think this is a trial,
From the moment you said set it up and pressed reply you was doomed,
Think of him as a pair of *'rabbit ears' cause todays hes gettin "TOONED", *(Bugs Bunny)
Get distinguished like nitro, Devoured by my tight-flow, I'ma phsyco,
Only way you'd be recognized as first is if rapbattles made a typo,


What you got son?

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What the fuck? Aight....I'mm do a quick keystyle then......

Like abstinent females its obvious u just dun want none, ill put a dick on ya spine so u can get the ?fuckin nerve? to cock-back a gun//
Ya through, that?s it son, ya lil shit-streek is over, imma send u to the other side like a deadly game of red rover//
U don?t fuck men? Well then I guess yer a fuckin dyke, masturbating to a picture of Jordan is the only way ull ?bust-on-the-mic?(mike)//
It seems u up Shits-crique(creek) witout a fuckin paddle, u got flow like liquid, I guess that?s why u in ?no-shape? to battle//
U might as well become paraplegic cuz ull never hold a microphone, u could have one of yer boyfriends dicks on ya head and still not ?cum-off-the-dome?//
Its like im battling even-steven cuz the odds are against u, u must be proud to be a predominately wack emcee, but ya not one of the few//
Conceptz wrote his verse under a crescent moon cuz his verse is half assed, sendn ya rhymes ta Internal Suspension my verse has yers ?out-classed?//
This fagget sayin he bringin the heat but looks like he forgot the flames, hes stuck in a forward motion cuz he cant ?back-up? wat he claims//
Ya expiration date has past, ya old pre-packaged wackness, cant protect u from this tongue lashing if u were licking prophylactics//
The only type of addict u are is one addicted to smack cuz yer wack, the name Arctic wouldn?t run wit dope if he fuckin peddled crack//

This is all it should take............

damn toon u had no business battlin' this guy u completely raped him and ur name should be illconcepz and he should be stripped of rap completly this was a manslaughter

vote-toon

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thanx for tha luv man..................1-0....uppin

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Can't Vote On Da Pole Cause I Don't Have 50 Posts....But Oh Well...

ToOn Fucking Ripped Dis Kid...For A Quik Keystyle That Was Definitly Sick. I Wouldn't Mind Battleing You Man....Your Actually One Of The Best On Dis Site...

Holla My Name...

V-ToOn

~R~

Thanx Strict........uppin...........................

Toon Ain't Fuckin Shit.......why The Fuck You Dodging Me Dawg??.........go Post On Our Fuckin Battle That You Set Up Yesterday If You're Soo Fucking Good......

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***G-eCuA*** I’ll do you one better, and pay for Napster to upload you back to good health//...Fuck That!... I'll use Kazaa iLLegaLLy; download you and your entire verse straight to heLL!!!!!!!.

hatin ass niggas..........uppin.........................

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