yo, 10-30 lines.
no dr
no unexplained votes.

have fun

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Yo, Right now the guyver's gona rock you/
Jus like a thug disciple would pop you/
Turnin all ya shit from collossal to fossil/
Why you act like my shits impossible?/
Slap ya bitch up on the possible/
Keep 'em red like the back of ya hand/
All the bitch wanted to feel was flattered/
Heard you liked 'em like you like your shrimp/
you like 'em battered/
After this you gona spit some shit/
like it matters/
Fuck slugs, I walk into clubs with a shotgun/
To kill you an your entourage for fun/
Now, I don't wanna hurt ya feelins son/
But I sexd up ya baby's mom at the break of dawn/
She said all she got from you was a yawn/
No wonder you beat her ass/
She plays you for a pawn/
Till the day that you die, we gona mourn/
The waste of a life in your bodily form/

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yo homie my bad fo droppin till now.......but fuck it

check it......


Who the fuck does this "guy" think he is reppin "MK"..
Reppin ur city is worser than seein a black man reppin KKK..
Ive seen wack before but neva like this verse from this homie...
But why am i sayin that when ur smilies laugh at ur verse fo me...(sig)
I actually thought i was gonna lose to u, mr.guyver..
Looked at ur otha battles, u couldnt even get 2 votes, N that DO matter..
So wut i think is u should change that 4 into sumthin lower..(screenname)
Cuz u rap like if ur brain more fucked than springfields homer...(the simpsons)
So i thank u fo anotha easy battle, anotha easy win..
Cuz i personally think ur wack, n i think that rappin fo u is a very bad sin..


thers my verse.....start the votin

Peace

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Honestly i can say that I'v seen guyve4mk come way harder that this verse. Even though I would want to vote for him cause I know he can bring it.... I can't cause that not how shit works. So I'm given this one to Southside, maybe, they'll be some people who can disagree with me an vote the other way.

Guyever had better flow, but lack in complexity. He had more punches but I think Southsides hit harder. So there you have it. Any questions holla back

Da Vinci

thanx man


Uppin for votes up in herre!!!

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Yea im going to side with "Da Vinci" . and agree with him' ..

southsyde: put better effort into it and came out on top... it struck harder... and over all it was (Aiight)

Guyver4mk: you had a lack of effort.. but (Respect) nice flow' .. it was KoO..

Vote: southsideloco

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aiight.......thats wasup n thanx fo de votes.......uppin fo sum more

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Punches = Southside
Flow = Southside
Structure = Southside

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Yo Return The Favor!!!

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116496

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aiight...thanx fo de votes...only need a couple more votes to close this thread...uppin(2) n drop sum feeback n links..ill return the favor wit honest votes n feedback..

Peace

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cmon FL dont sleep on this..jus lookin fo 2 more votes then i can close this thread..jus hit this up with honest feedback n vote n drop a link n ill return the favor with honest feedback n votes...uppin(3)

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yo i liked loco's verse better i think this one could have been a tie it was just a matter of taste i like longer lines so dats why i voted for loco yo return da favor props

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guyver: nice simple structure ...i liked it...readible and understandable. flow was nice and few punches here and there

south: personals were good...but flow was off...and all them words in parenthesis does not work ...a good lyricist shouldnt have to do that......

v/guyver

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