aight heres the rundown
house rules
blind spit in 20 min...
check in then time begins

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aiight bro... checkin in...
i'll spit in 20 mins then!
hit up my other battle aswell
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...224#post1214224

Peace...

A-Cubed

yo mai bad i had to go to class haha i didnt get a chance to type my shit but ill still treat it as though it was a blind spit like i wont say anything about what you say if you drop before meeh...

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testin a lil' style change
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I wont be an easy win for ya like lil' JOE or enygma//
ur quench for your own defeat must be a personal stigma//
When you spit ya jus imitatin a dyin frog in a paddock//
its ur dislexic lyrics that b creatin this lyrical havock//

Your claiming your chokin to be due to an asthma attack//
bullshit.Ya jus exhausted from the way that im breakin ya bak//
i neva knew that this battle cud be so god damned easy//
U cudnt defeat me even if you tried to repeat me!!!//
I herd u was gud?must've bin the voices in my head//
Ya sinkin in this game like your jus made out of lead//
its undesputed that im sum form of serious illness//
ive killed more of u emcee's than a bout of syphillis//
ur gonna read this and ur first thought will b suicide//
u shud type u'll retire and just click 'post kwik reply'//

Fuck dats weak!!!its a shit keystyle.

Peace...

A-Cubed

Pulling out my battle lance/
coming through full force/
knockin you right off your hoarse/
your bitch ass is coarse/
when i kill you even your bitch wont be filled with
remoarse/
I'll make you dance,from the bullets i shot that land
in your pants/
watch me watch u when u die im in my serious stances/
killing u with my ever-lasting laser guided-glances/
have you froze in your mid-step like a deer in
head-lights/
looks like you dont bath ya got head-lice/
im looking at you like the dead-sights,and see your
soul/
ya know what,i see its not whole/
so im gonna drop you like a badd-badd-habbit/
a pull new skills out like a magician does-a-rabbit/
make you drop your skill ya-cant-grab-it/
when you loose ya gonna be like dag-nab-it/
see that belt that u lust for ive already had-it/
and when its on the loose im gonna take a quick
stab-at-it/
your face is pale like a-crack-att-ic/
your postures madd fucked up ya need a crafts-mat-ic/
ya stop your rymes and look up i got an automatic/
so koas im almost dunn killin you and murdering your
son/
i just love to make fun of wack-cats/
and tell em that crack-kills/
and the last thing that i told them is dont forget i
got some mad-skillz/

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ok ok lets get some votes on this shit...ill be glad to return da favor with an honest vote...just PM mee so i know where to go...

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us newbs need some winz ya know...................

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aight heres wat i think

opener-cubed
closer-cubed
flows-lyrical
structure-lyrical
lyrics-lyrical
vocab-cubed

overall a prety even match...but ima go wit lyrical cuz his shit made me laugh

Nice word play Havok
lyrical good overall
lyrical havok ur shit flowed together
specially dat craftsmatic line

Structure: Lyrical
Flow: A Cubed
Personals:Lyrical
Punches: Lyrical
Creativity: Lyrical
Character: A Cubed
Vocab: Lyrical

Overall I Cast My Vote To Lyrical....!!! Vote: Lyrical

Good Battle On Both Sides

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a cubed you were aight but you were weak at the same time
u had 1 good line
nice vocab too

but my vote is wit lyrical havok

iight both were pretty good so this is gonna be hard vote

havok got nice vocab and punchlines, his structure was set up real nice to, it flowed better

cube ur vocab is iight, ur structure needs sum work to, punchlines were iight but sum of them was wack

vote-havok